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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all Congratulations on the golden jubilee , thank you for giving us this even when you are Busy ! Coming to the chapters , even if both are stuborn, Rhea could not see Zainnot eating , that is the beauty of love , after that the pool side romance , i could see every scenes and our Rhea could not rsist her Zain for long , continue soon and thank you for sharing this with us , lots of love !
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful chapters
zain's efforts
hehe finally zain won d challenge
loved it to d core
do cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Wooohoo !!!!Golden Jubilee congratulation🥳 ..fab updates dear👏...luv dem ... zain as Vishvamitra😉 he was cute😛 ..lol bechara zain kitna satati hai rhea😆 ..and part c was ☺️beautiful...waiting for d next part😊 ..thanx for pm😃..btw very sweet dedication.. he must be proud of u.. can understand how difficult it is for u to update regularly ... may god blessed u & ur sweet family with lots of happiness ..😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
I still have to reply back to each and evry comment for the last two chapters ...will do ...
Right now updating the next part
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I know all your comments are accumulating ...I am extremely sorry I will reply to each one ...since it takes precious time and efforts to type ..I value each one closest to my heart..

An extremely long chapter ...fun read ...light on heart ...

Dedicated: This ones to Ann ...please read her story ordinary extraordinary ...I can never never write with the brilliance she writes ..am so proud to say this but one girl who was and will always remain my idol ...this ones for you sweetheart ...for being that subtle inspiration ...a great friend with Khyati😳 n an excellent kind hearted person ...enjoy...

Love you all loads 😛

Chapter 51

Waqt tere saath...

It was blissful to be in Zains arms ...Rhea felt as though she had always belonged to him ...

Zain ek baat poochu ...

Hmm...he was still in his passionate phase ...

Hum nikaah kab karenge ...

Da...tumhare dad koh wapis Jaipur jaana hai ...abhi ek mahina baccha hai ...mai tumhe lautne nahi doonga ...he smiled ...

Rheas hearts was fluttering ...Zain and her ...as a married couple was her dream come true. She had loved him deeply...and it was his internal beauty that she admired the most. His nature to be there for her what may come.

She blushed with the thought ...

Kitkit ...tum bahut sweet ho ...

Accha ...kaise pata ...

Matlab ...

He took his face close to hers ...taste kiya hai ...

She looked amazed...after her trauma ...he had opened up all his feelings in one go ...he had no inhibitions ...neither physical ones nor any emotional bindings ...

Zain ...besharam ...

Haa who mera doosra roop tha aaj kal full form hai ...

Chalo ...ab room mai jaa rahi hu ...kal milte hai ...

Goodnight Da...he kissed her fore-head

Good night ...he slowly left her hand ...

She walked back still in a dream world ...

He was waiting in the car next day impatiently ...

Da...tum tayar hone ke liye bachpan se itna hi waqt leti thi kya ...

Rhea was smiling ...Chale ...

It was a Sunday and the roads were packed with a lot of traffic ...

Rhea and Zain reached the mall...she was recollecting her last visit when they were in Bangalore ...how she was all pampered ...

Da ...bolo kya lena hai ...

Mami koh kya pasand hai ...his silence was prominent now ...

Mai pasand tha ...he blurted ...and looked away

Kya ...kuch kaha tumne ...

Nahi kuch nahi ...well unko cooking karna bahut pasanad hai ...aur baut shauk hai sazne ka ..

Accha ..par ab toh itni sadi si lagti hai ...unhe dekhkar lagta nahi ...

He remembered his Mom ...the bright women she was and what Osmans death had turned her ...and post he left her she had further dwindled away ...

Rhea snapped her fingers in front of his face ...

Abdullaha sahab kaha kho gaye ...

Kahi nahi ...

Dad ki bahut yaad aati hai ...pata hai ..bahut pamper karte the mujhe ...his smile said it all..

Ab koi nahihai joh itni parvaah kare ...his face looked sad ..

She put her arms across his broad shoulders ...kyu mai hoo na ...he assured her

Mamu koh yaad kar rahe ho ...

Hmm.. Da ...bahut miss karta hu ...

ab koi nahi hai mere sharaton par parda dalne wala ...koi nahi hai jiske saath beach par walk karu joh mujhe zindagi ki samajh de sake ...

Jaanti ho ...hum dono ne nakli mark sheet banvai thi ...

jab mai London se fail hokar aaya tha ..

aur unki marksheet mai mere number aval se bhi jyada the ...mere darling ...

Tumhari Mami ...bahut pyaar karti thi ...unse bhi aur mujhse bhi ...

Zain ...who mom hai tumhari ...

par tum dono ki beech koi baat nahi hoti ..in do mahino mai tum dono ko maine ek saath kabhi nahi dekha hai...

His face was tensed now ...Woh ...thodi pareshan rehti hai ...Dad ke jaane ke baad Business aur ghar dono ki zimmedari hai na unpar ...bas isliye ...

Sach bol rahe ho ...

Ha...his voice was volatile in the sadness of the thought ..two months had passed and his mom had abandoned him ...not a single word ..not one gesture ...the harshness of her behavior was settling in again ...

He propelled out the negative thoughts ...he had decided to be happy ...to smile ...come what may ...

Chalo ...Chalo ...shopping karte hai ...

Pehle khate hai ...

Da...he smirked ...theek hai chalo ...

They went to an expensive restaurant ...Zain gave his hand ...she put her arm entangled in his and walked in ...a happy couple...

He kept on starring at her when she was choking on the surplus soup in her mouth ...

Da ...tum ajeeb nahi ho ...

Nnnaahi toh the blabbered words came out ...

Da ...kabhi mujhe bhi pooch liya karo ...mujhe bhi bhook lagti hai ...

Toh khao na kisne roka hai ...

Kuch bacha ho toh khao ...

She looked down he was right most of the dish were 3/4th eaten by her alone...

Sorry ...

koi baat nahi ...ab toh adat si pad gayi hai ...she hit him gently on his arms...

Kitkit kitne melodramatic ho tum ...

Accha yaha aao ...he pulled his face ahead ...closing his eyes and a big smile plastered on his face ...time for a kiss hmmm

In few seconds he felt a strong pull on his ear lobes forcing him to open his eyelids ...

She was pulling on his right ear ...

Kya hua ...he screamed in a low pitch voice ...

Kal bahut hero ban rahe the ...

Kab ...Aww Da dard ho raha hai ...

Khana nahi khane wale the kal ...jab mai tumse baat nahi kar rahi thi ...bolo

Aree who toh tumhe patane ke liye ...tum jaanti ho na mujhse bhook bardasht nahi hoti ...

Oh toh style maar rahe the ...the pulling was stronger ...

Da mera kaan hai woh ...aree reham khao ...

Pehle bolo ...

Kya ...

Kal kyu kiya aisa ...

Aree baba tumhare sympathy ke liye ...socha ...tum pigal jaaogi ...

Haa woh toh mai gayi ...

Aree ab toh kaan chodo meri maa ...lal ho gaya hai ...

Kyu sharam aa rahi hai ...

Haa ...saare log yehi dekh rahe hai ...tumhari teachergiri gayi nahi hai ...

Aur jayegi bhi nahi ...

Agar mere student hote toh aisa sabak shikati ki yaad rakhte ...

Aise zalim teacher se toh khudha hi bacchaya ...

Abhi toh baki hai Zain Abdullah ...

Da ...khana khane do na ...shanti se ...

She left his ears ...they were bright red now ...

He move his hands to soothen the blood flow ...

Baap re ...tumhara naya naam ...Krur Singh hona chaiye ...wald Gabbar Singh ...

She fumed back angrily ...

Bahut bakbak karte hoh ...dad ke samne jubaan toh khulti nahi ...

He stammered ...woh mai unki izaat kart ahu na ...isliye ...

Accha ...darpok...

Dekho Da ...gaye dono baar maine prove kar diya hai ...Ab uksao mat ...

Chalo khana kha lo ...

He ate the remnants ...smiling ...

They walked out to a chef place ...Rhea bought an expensive knife set for Suraiya ...

Zain made faces ...kahi galti se bhi mujhe par istamal karne ka agar khayal mat karna ...waise bhi bahut chot kha chukka hu ...he mocked her trying to kill him with the knife

She chuckled ...

Dragging him to the next shop for buying a watch ...

When she was about to pay he stopped her ..mai deta hoon ...

Nahi ...yeh mere taraf se hai ..tum bhi kuch lelo ...

Rehne do he kept his purse back ...

Kyu ...

Aise hi ...

Kanjoos ...

He smiled ...accha chale ...

Nahi ek minute ...

She left him at the entrance and went back again inside and came back in 15 minutes later ...

Da ...tum ghum ho jaogi ...aise baar baar gayab mat hua karo ...

Yeh lo ...she kept a box in his hand ...

Yeh ...kholo toh ...

He opened it her first gift ..he was anxious now...

He saw a big bright watch ...looked pretty old model to him ...with a steel belt ...

Yeh ...

Kaise hai ...

Bahut acchi he said halfheartedly ...thank you ...

Dad ke liye hai ...his eyes showed his irritation ...

Toh mujhe kyu di ...

aree opinion chaiye tha ...

Accha hai na ...

Theek hai he was irked now ...

Aree abhi bahut acchi se theek hai ho gayi ...yeh status badla kaise

Ha his face twisted ...with a tinge of jealousy ...he didn't want to share his love with Rehman ...

Chale ...she started walking ...he turned to realize she had left a small bag on the ground ...

Ab coolie bhi ban gaya hoon ...pehle madam koh shopping par lau aur phir unke dad ke gift uthao ...bas yehi maqsad reh gaya mere life ka ...he huffed ...picking up the bag ...

Da ...she walked inside a restroom ...he shook his head ...

And starred down ...a note on the box ...

Kitkit ...yeh tumhare liye ...

He opened the wrapper as fast as he could ...it had a green shirt inside ...the exact one he would ever buy ...and something red on it ...he looked closely ...it had couple of lipstick marks on it ...Zain kissed them ...she always amazed him ...

Love you Da ...

She walked out singing ...aree mood accha ho gaya ...

Haa he couldn't control his blush ...

Mere liye ...

Nahi who pados mai joh uncle hai na unke liye ...she winked

Bahut accha hai ...tumhare dad ke gift se bhi jyada accha ...

Love you ...

She kissed him on his cheeks ...he blushed ...Da ...kya PDA kar rahi ho ...

She put her arms around his neck ...

Boyfriend ho ..sharma kyu rahe ho ....

He held her tight again ...

Madam ...Ghulam hu ...jaise bolugi waise karunga ...try karna hai ...

She busted in a childish laughter ...

Abhi toh saare bags uthao ...aur follow me ...

He nodded and picked up all the bags ...they were tones ...maybe he was finally going to be poor ...with the amount she was spending maybe he would run out of money ...

They walked out ...lazily in the early night ...

Teri har ek ada dil koh choo jaati hai ...

Labo pai ek beintehaa hasi chod jaati hai ...

SIM

Pre-cap: is the ride back going to be fun ...😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww...so cute update shopping wouldn't be this fun...loved it ..truly awesome
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Omg I was smiling all the time
This was so cute chapter ...
Just so real boyfriend girlfriend waali feel aagayi
Mujhe bhi bf chaiye Jo meri bags carry kare :p

And wow the gift was nice
And the best thing the cute cute kaan pakdo thing
Waiting for next today is Sunday hope I get one more
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Sim!Enjoyed it Zain in full Besharam Form 😉.aah!The Gift Only Rhea Can Gift Zain a T-Shirt full of kisses Aaliya would never.Daring Rhea but I miss Aaliya.ZaYa r Inseparable. Amazing work.Do Continue ASAP.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
I Loved the daring Rhea , she has her oWn style ;) but missing Aaliya but the Way you use Words it seems like the scene takes place infront of our eyes , continue soon !
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Well congratulations u finally wrote 50th chapter of ur amazing story ..
Well its amazing as always ..
How zain is very desperate to talk to rhea ..
Precap sounds interesting ..

Running to read the next part
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