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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Zainedil


Dhanyawad tumhala pan Marathi yet aka
Keep reading
Sim


yes😳..thodi far..thanx to mumbai πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aarohi2009

Aaj update nahi milega kya?
Today is holiday here in himachal n its raining heavily and no electricity..
Waiting for ur zainu's reaction zaldi update karo na!


Sorry yaar I am too sleepy today
Slept at 10:00 way too early for me
Kal pakka, n why holiday
Koi Baat Nahi chai pakado kaho
Enjoy the rains, I miss them
N read the old chapters
Tomm for sure
Sim
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tom-and-Jerry


yes😳..thodi far..thanx to mumbai πŸ˜‰


πŸ˜ƒ knowing Marathi is a blessing in mumbai
Sim
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya

both d chappys 30,31 were amazing..
Yeah finally confession is done..
Pls update soon..


Thank you so much
Yes tomm update for sure
Sim
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Posted: 9 years ago

Once again your words every comment every small word matters ...thanks for all the love and the delicious bribes ..

Dedicated to another special friend Aashqui-e-Harshad (@twitter)...When I started off my twitter journey BI was almost finished ..people were leaving and I had just started...Both Khadija and her were my first friends ...and they still remain the most dear ones to support my stories...Thank you dear, this ones specially for you ...enjoy


Chapter 32

Kuch Ehsaas...

Zain was still driving in a trance ...he had no clue how long he had been just starring at the road with no thoughts.

Rhea was quiet from the time they were back in the car...unusually quiet.

Zain was thinking all the while, when he had started the journey it was with suffocation and now when they were back he was being smothered.

He wanted to love Rhea ...start his life afresh ...but can he forever live in the fear of Aaliya coming back. What would happen if one day her memories walk back ...will he hang his fate in destiny's hand.

Rheas love was pure...she had fallen for him ...loving him from the time she had set her eyes on that bearded driver at the airport.

Their journey had grown from being strangers to friends ...to now lovers. She was smitten with his charm, his innocence ...the way he held her so precious ...the way he would do anything to see her smiling.

She knew he was bogged with some burden...maybe he had a past ...maybe he had lost someone.

She didn't want to know his past...her present was what it was. She had accepted him..he was a bit serious for her type...but she loved his attention.

The way he looked at her and walked an extra mile to fulfill her silly demands crazy wishes ...it was adorable. Love ...was written all over on her face...and fully knowing that it was being reciprocated was the best thing.

Rhea did not know what had happened to her ...when Zain had left her hand ...she was overshadowed with thoughts ...maybe he would never love her, a stray thought had ...made her walk away ...but 5 minutes apart she was scared , searching him frantically ...

In the nick of time she had found him ...but why was he so disturbed ...

...he had withdrawn himself ...and the moment she had proposed his eyes had changed. Rhea had seen a different Zain Abdullaha ...a man who looked so happy ...and few minutes later the same man had again evaporated ...his happiness again vaporized ...it was confusing for Rhea to understand Zain

Ek baat poochu he asked still cautiously

Tumne Marathi mai kaise baat ki ...tumhe aati hai ...

He still thought his Aaliya was just testing him ...maybe she just was seeing if he had changed or not ...

Nahi...she said firmly

Toh ..un police walo ke samne kya kaha tumne ...

kya aur Kab kaha ...she looked puzzled...

He starred back ...Rhea tumne kuch kaha tha waha ...bhool gayi ...

Rhea was rattled from her stupor ...

Kitkit maine toh sirf tumhe dekha aur shock mai khadi thi...mujhe nahi laga tha tum mujhe itne asani se miloge ...

Rhea tumne kuch bola tha un police wale koh ...he looked concern

She went quiet ...Zain ek baat batau ...

He looked at her ...Mujhe kai cheeze yaad nahi rehti ..kai baar aankhon kea age kai manzar dikhte hai

...joh itne sach ho...ki mai unme sirf chal padti hu.

Abhi teen din pehle ..hi maine sapna dekha ...ki tum meri tasveer lekar soye ho,

she laughed aur us tasveer mai hub hu ek dulhan ke jode mai thi ...lal joda ...

He stopped the car ...and turned to see her ...

Kya hua ...aree sab theek ho jayega ...maine toh dad koh bhi bataya ...isliye toh unhone davai di hai ...

He was tensed now, her past was mixing with her present and she was not able to separate it out. What future they had if these flashes keeps on hitting back on her ...he wanted to find a solution now...

But how ...

Rhea ek baat kahu ...

She was feeling weird now ...was he thinking that she had lost her mind ...

Kitkit ...tum yeh toh nahi soch rahe na ki mere accident ke baad mai pagal ho gayi hu ...she made a mad face

He smiled ...nahi Da ...

Bas itna ki humara rishta abhi abhi bana hai ...isse thoda waqt do ...jaldbazi mai koi faisla mat karna ...

aur haa hum boyfriend girlfriend nahi hai ..

Toh kya hai...

Ab bhi dost hai ...

Toh I love you kyu bola...

He kept quiet ...

Dekho kitkit bolne ke baad ab palto mat ...pyaar hao koi game nahi joh time please kaha aur ho gaya

She made a silly face ...aur mere toh tum pehle boyfriend ho... sach bolu, she kept her hand on his shoulders mai bahut excited hu ...humesha se ek chaiye tha...aaj finally mil gaya ...

He couldn't believe a mature Aaliya had such a childish Rhea in her ...

Da ...tumhari tabiyat abhi bhi theek nahi hai ...pehle theek ho jao ...mai kaha bhaga ja rah ahu..

Aur mai kabhi theek nahi hui toh ...

That question still remained ...yes what if there will always be a Rhea ...a possibility ...

Da ...bas thode din aur ...waise bhi tumhara gabbar dad mujhe suli par chada denge ...unhe pata lu ...tab tak ...please ...

Pehle bolo mujhe itna kyu sataya...

Kisne sataya ...

Tumne ...Madam aap ne mujhe sataya ...

Hawww...kitna jhoot bolte hu tum ...he was shocked...

Kya zaroorat thi maun vrat rakhne ki ...thumare stress ke vajah se mai ghoom ho gayi ...

Aur waise , mere maafi mangane se pehle hi tumne ghutne tek liye ...

She giggled...waise tum ghusse mai bahut cute lagte ho ...

Accha ...par afsos ...aaj ke baad tum mujhe us cute chehre mai kabhi nahi dekho gi

Kyu ..

Kyunki maine Allah se wada kiya hai ...he didn't tell her what exact vows he had taken

Kitkit ..tum kitne serious ho ...mai kya thodi kho gayi tumne toh pura pahad sar par utha liya ...dekho thoda chill...Nikaah ke baad itna senti mat hona ...

He smiled ...she had no idea what hurt pain and separation meant ...but he knew their meanings ...and he had decided no more ...he had given her the power now ...the power to steer his life as per her demands needs and wants ...he had never felt this way for anyone before.

He would never be the same man, he had accepted his fate. If this is what was written in his destiny then he will live it. He will not let this terror tear him...the women on his right was the sole reason why he was at peace and he couldn't lose her.

Zain had started off as a carefree soul , never wanted to be committed or married and now he just want to remain with the feeling to be married forever.

His vow to Allah meant a lot to him ...she was safe and he would keep every word of his promise...he knew he had selected a difficult path ...a road where there were chances that he might be alone, but he had accepted it. He was thinking what he had given up today, the simple feeling of anger ...yes ...it looked very simple to say, but giving up anything for someone takes courage.

Rhea still peeped in his eyes ...Kitkit ...ek hug toh banta hai ...

He smiled ...

And hugged her back, in his arms laid a women who was the sole owner of his soul ...and now there was no turning back...

Tera Ehsaas ab har pal mere paas hi rehta hai ...

Zina hai tu ...

...yehi toh woh mujhe har lamha kehta hai ...

SIM

Pre-Cap : what happens when the bountiful Rhea reaches home ...will she be able to control her excitement ...stay tuned 😳

Edited by Zainedil - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good morning
Thank u very much for this beautiful update u made my day
So rhea is very happy and excited but zain bechara theek se khush bhi nahi ho sakta. U hav expressed zain's inner turmoil very well.when ll his suffering end?
Loving the story more n more
Waiting for next update
Luv u sim!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sim ...your words make the story so many sentiments so many words so many emotions ...I am out of words neways I loved it and pls pls pls continue soon pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
This story is so cute And very emotional..
I'm going to be late for college now nooo haha
Thanks for the pm
Continue asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's amazing as always sim.
i liked the bubbly rhea and serious zain.
continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing sim...
Rhea is so chirpy...Like a kid...I like it...
Zain is a bit slow...less despo...love that as well...
Waiting for suri's reaction...
PLZ continue...

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