FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]Thread 1 completed - Page 23

Zainedil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: katmaan
Sim I am ur fan now gosh u have written so beautifully and continue soon

Aww thank you so much 😊
Utterly blissful to read such comments
sim

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Zainedil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: katmaan
Sim i loved it gosh u have written it so beautiful I toh look so chulu mullu writer in front of you and Ann
Pls continue soon

No no don't ever call yourself that, you write so beautifully. Though I haven't read all of your work, I can vouch your writing style is awesome.
😊
N Ann Aree she is a class apart, can nvr reach to her level, her writing is mind blowing 😊
But thanks for liking this story, means a lot to me
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MohabbatCrazy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Utterly Bueatiful story!

Really captures me!

It plays all in frnt of my eyes!

And the characters can truly be felt!

Sim U r an amazing writer!

U potray everything in a way tht it cn be felt!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! REALLY SOON!

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Awesome sim this is beautiful really i meant it now update it soon or else we Will all spam you ! Superb !

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suma madhuri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

Extremely sorry Sim for commenting lately...my account is not supporting me... I couldn't see, I tried very much!!

Okay my dhukaan kahani later...

U dedicated this to me!! Thank u so much!! Really a very beautiful.chapter...

Penned down lovely.. must appreciate ur choice of words !!

U write brilliantly!!

Rhea HOH in love with Zain...

The way u described them!! Their admiration for each other left me speechless...

Rehman is being over protective!! He brought her promising him that he will return her if he gains her back!! Then y is he Coming all.way between them, I know he is protective bcz her health is not supporting her...

And it's a cliff hanger again...now zain will feel bad blame himself for taking her out...he will ...

Those last lines... loved them..

And yeah continue soon!!

P.s Underworld version of Zaya.. I started it for fun!! To make u all laugh!! But no... I changed my mind...😈 once again thank u for dedicating this chapter to me!!

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Shiri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Loving this
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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Zainedil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi
Awww...AALIYA falling for zain...
Rehman is one big KMH but we understand...though feeling bad for zain...
SURAIYA so miss her negativity...
The car scene was good...again BI land...
And your shayaris are bang on...
Plz continue soon...

Thank you so much 😊

hope you like the rest too

Stay tuned 😉

Sim

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Zainedil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee
Loving this
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Thank youuu😊

Sim

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Zainedil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: Aarohi2009
Again a fabulous update
I don't have words to praise u.ur choice of words and shayri i hav become a fan of ur writings.Tell me if u hav written other stories too.I want to read them.
Agla update bahut zaldi chahiye...
Lagta hai aliya k memory vapis aane bali hai?
Thanks for pm 🤗

Thank you so much ...words like this makes me write more...😛

No dear this is my first and only work on the forum ...😳

Hope you will like the coming twist and turns

Keep reading

Sim

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Zainedil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: preeharsharora
dis is beautiful a new reader i'm bt its amazing