Originally posted by: AnnRosewood
Chapter 10..Sim,you have raised my expectations from you..I can't think of anyone who could have executed this chapter in a betetr way..
I love the way you are slowly bringing them closer..like a slow sensual dance..the way you describe Aaliya's not so innocent thoughts about Zain..and Zian's desperation..similar to that of a young lover..ISmply loved it..and your shyari.once again was mind-blowing!:*
Originally posted by: AnnRosewood
Let me make an honest confession..Sim..I can spend the whole day reading your works..it gives me an unknown pleasure..they way you weave it..and it was the perfect tribute to not just one..but many beintehaa memories..Thank you so much..you have no idea how special this chapter was for me..:*
Beautiful.. It was nice to read..believe me ...ur fan already...and yes I love the two to three lines u always add it is so beautiful and heart touching
Originally posted by: Aarohi2009
Both chapters were fab. 👏
I was visualising all scenes.Hats off to u.
Its amazing the way u write.I just want to read the whole story in one go.Zain and rhea r coming close slowly n slowly.Don't
Know how rhea ll feel or react when she ll
learn the truth that zain is her husband .
Agla update bahut jaldi chahiye
And thanks for pm
Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
Thank you for this double dhamaka , both of them are attracted tocards each other , beautifully written , give us new update soon , you rocked it sim!
Originally posted by: ZayaILoveU
First of all, thankyou very very very much for this Double Dhamakaa!!!
Both the chapters were simply mind blowing!!!!You have really started to bcum one of my FAV writers and this story is undoubtedly one of my favourites, too!!!!I just love the way you execute the story in words!!!I m speechless!!!Fabulour!!! really!!!!pls continue SOON!!!!!
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