FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]Thread 1 completed - Page 15

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

I liked the opening lines..;P

And btw Sim,when Aaliya's desribes Zain- a good looking greek god in a devdas form..I felt that it was more of Sim talking,rather than Aaliya;)

Jokes Aaprt,I freakin LOVES IT! like really...the flow was beautiful..Zain's emotions beautifully expressed and with each passing chapter,my interest is becoming manifold..update soon.please :* And ..please..update soon...update soon..or else..I ll spam u on twitter!;P

Originally posted by: butterfly20

It was just..wow.

sim girl it's amazing..

the way u describe zain was brilliant..

and u always portryed zain's emotions brilliantly..

continue soon..

m loving this story..

Originally posted by: katmaan

I loved it sim ...continue soon pls

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

Beautiful yaar...

Really hard to come up with those words...

You are rocking this story...

By the way more than Mami I was shocked when she called her that...😆

Plz continue soon...

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Chapter 6😛

Amazing update Sim!!

Very well emoted...

Felt really bad for Zain..

Every line brilliantly written!!

Rest two chapters I ll read comment!!

Sorry for late comment Sim

Maaf karo yaar