FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]Thread 1 completed - Page 134

As all ways you have left me speechless

the way you have described the pain of Zain And suriaya 'their emotions it was outclass Sim👏

The way you set the scenario in every chapter it is just wonderful

I was really touched by the emotional talk b/w Zain & Suraiya and especially when Zain was repeating the word Mom... Mom ...Mom it was just beauutttiful❤️❤️❤️

Aha my ZaYa's mehndi ceremony it was my dream how I wanted these rituals for their reunion in Beintehaa sigh but never got that😭

I'm really very thankful to you Sim for writing this chapter you have fulfilled my dream 😳

I very much like the scene where Rehea came to wish him with whole family and embarrassed Zain it was too good😉

I have no words to say you were just fab

I hope Aaliyah forgives Zain he deserves it

I hope she forgives zain

Riya

O god Sim!!!

I m speechless!!!

I dnt know what to say to u!

Where have u left us hanging!

Right now, i can understand that someone is getting the punishment but it is difficult to device whether it's zain or us... U have made us wait for one helluva week...

U know, this week is gonna seem like a biiig month to us...

We can't even tell u anything it's ur commitment n we understand...

But i seriously cant bring myself to saying that take ur time... Cuz if u dnt continue on Friday i will definitely start spamming u to a gr8 extent...

Aaliya has LEFT zain! Oh no!!!

Plzzz plzzZ plzzZ continue on Friday itself... I will go mad otherwise...

Its strange isn't it..how love comes into our life like a dream and at times leave like a nightmare,leaaving us broken and injured..in a way that the only thing that can heal us is the presence of the person in our live and not just the broken memories...?
Sim,you took me back to those days when i couldn't keep my dinner down after watching beintehaa..the days when zain's pain..his heartwrenching cries reverberated and still does everytime I close my eyes to visualise those 'zaroorat' scenes..during the seperation track...

I didn't cry after reading this..i went numb..like when the pain is so much that even crying seems to exhaust you..so almost after hal an hour I have taken the courage to write this down..

"In labon pe jo hansi hai inki tu hi hai wajah
Bin tere me kuch nahi hun mera hona bewajah
Dhoop teri na pade to dhundhla sa main lagun
Aake saanse de mujhe tu taaki zinda me rahun
Main aas-paas tere aur mere paas...

Tu hai ki nahi
Tu hai ki nahi
Tu hai ki nahi
Tu hai ki nahi...'

Somewhere at the back of my mind.these lines where playing..I don't think Zian will be able to take it this time Sim..you have COMPLETELY broken him..and I don't know what awaits us.but I can assure you that even if its the darkest of all the chapters..I'll gladly traverse down that part..because you're one of those writers who makes the readers,almost hate them for making them cry..and I believe that is your reward..you have succeded in evoking the emotions within us.the same emotions that your characters are going through..and believe me Harshad Arora will be very proud of you and he's lucky to have a fan like you .

Love

Ann