Originally posted by: AnnRosewood
Zain and Rhea's story began,with the seed of an unconditional love..
A promise to be with each other..And then came the proposal..And this is for the writer..
Originally posted by: zayalove
Such an amazing chapter sim
U left me wanting more like always
U made me fall for da story all over again
Plzzz jaldi jaldi se update karo
Warna main curiosity k mare marr jao gi
Or meri atma bhatak ti rahe gi
Update update update update
Lots of love
Alina
Originally posted by: kunakshafan26
😆😆😆 yeah u will get to read each nd every comment i promise 😃
Originally posted by: Tom-and-Jerry
wow super fab updates😳...zain told rhea everything about aliya😲...lol rhea jealous of herself😆... ..10 mintues long wali kissy☺️...hehe sim u r good advisor we can see that😉 loved their confession... beintehaa khush after reading this😛 ...amazingly written👏..thanx for pm..plzz continue..waiting..😃
Love...thats what fills my heart, I thank the day I decided to write my zaya version for you all, worth it ...
This was too long so made two chapters ...and both will be updated today ...
Dedication: To few of my silent readers that are no more silent: Manny,ank_23,kunakshafan26 and Aanya and few ones who still choose to be quiet but read every update:Smiling_baby, Cutestar12 and arohi_
This ones for all of you, cause it takes a lot of writing to pull you out into my world of comments...worth the try ...love you all
Sim
Chapter 72
Dawat Naama...
Zain ...Nikaah ki date fix kar li hai na ... Zain and Rhea were back to Mumbai, and seeing Rheas happiness Rehman knew the inevitable has to happen, Rehman inquired ...
Haa Cahchu ..agle hafte ki hai ...maine baat kar li hai sabse ...he confirmed that his Phoops and Phufa have approved it ...
Aur apni Mom se...Rehmans eyes frowned a bit
Zain kept quiet ...Chachu ...aap kahiye na unse ..
Kyu
Bas aise hi darr lagta hai ...Zains face was draining ...the fear of talking or even approaching his mom was unimaginable for him ...
Darr lagta hai ya aur kuch hai ...Rehman prodded
Bolo Zain ...aur haa sach bolna ...mai ab bhi gabbar ke mood mai aa sakta hu, he smiled trying to relax him
Zains expression became more serious as dense thoughts started populating his mind ...
Chachu ...woh nahi baat karti mujhse..he looked away for a few fleeting moments ...Aaliya koh is ghar par rakhne ki kimat hai...mujhse baat karna toh door meri shaqal bhi nahi dekhti ...poore teen mahine ho gaye ...he looked away...obscuring Rehmans vision ...
Who toh mujhe maloom hai beta ...maine dekha tha tumhe uss din unke janamdin ki subhah...
Zains face drenched with his words ...the darkness was not able to shield the truth
Bahut badi kimat nahi hai ...Rehman kept a hand on his shoulders, assuring a fatherly figure warmth that Zain needed at that time...
Nahi...Aaliya ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu...he smiled
Beta ...ek baat batao ...Rehman wanted to set aside all the questions he ever wanted to ask Zain ..few mysteries that had remained in the tomb of their hatred...
Hmm poochiye ...
Us din store room mai kyu rahe the tum ...
the words shocked Zain..Rehman knew about that two nights that Suraiya had changed for the worst, banishing him forever ...how he had disappeared
He looked at Rehman now...memories that he didn't want to recall...veiled shame that he didn't want to expose ...
Mujhse galti hui ...maine unka chehra dekha...ankhon mai ankhein daalkar ..varna who Rhea koh chot pahucha sakti thi ...bas darr gaya tha ...isliye galti kar baitha ...
khush tha na mai bahut zyada ...
Da ke saath Pune mai bahut accha time guzara tha maine ...who bhi bahut khush thi uss din ...par shayad yeh baat unhe acchi nahi lagi..isliye ...he stopped
Bas ankhon mai dekha ...Rehman couldn't understand why Suraiya would hurt him for such a small thing ...he was scared for Rhea ...
Haa ...toh maine hi kaha ...kariye joh karna hai ...unhone nahi kiya ...par mujhe bahut ghussa aaya tha ...so apne aap koh store room mai lock kiya ...wahi darvaza kholegi sharth rakhi ...Zain looked down, he was a bit ashamed of his impulsive behavior
Toh tum do din us store room mai band the ...woh bhi khud se ...Rehman was shocked ...
Zain ...Kahin woh Rhea koh toh chot nahi pahuchaygi na...seeing the doubts Zain clarified ...
Aree nahi Chachu ..
Uss din bhi wahi aayi thi...unhone hi khola ...woh aaj bhi pyaar karti hai mujhse ...bas thodi si naraaz hai ...aur Aaliya ki bhi bahut parvah karne lagi hai ...
Unki nafrat mujh tak hi rahegi ...Aaliya koh mehfooz rakhne ki zimmedari meri hai...aap sirf nikaah ki tayari kijiye ...
Rehman smiled seeing his confidence ...
Zain finally spoke ...ab boliye mai kaise kahu unse ...ki mai Aaliya koh phirse iss ghar mai wapas lana chahta hu ...his words were wrapped in love for Suraiya, the forced chastity couldn't control his love ....aap please baat kijiye na
Zain ...who tumhari mom hai ...naraz hogi ...par tumhe hi kehna hoga ...
mai Rhea ka baap hu, aur tumhare kal ki baat jaante huae, mai sirf tumhe apni beti ka haat de sakta hu ...yeh tumhe ki karna hoga ...
Unhe Chitthi mai likha tha maine ...aur bhi bhaut sari batein likhi thi, avoiding Rehmans eyes now, the truth was hurting him ...shayad isliye aaj kal aur bhi chidti hai mujhse...par mujhe yakeen hai jald hi apnayegi Aaliya koh ...koi vajah nahi rahegi
Zain, Koshish karke dekho ...Rehman assured him Ek kaam karo phone karlo ...
Chachu who nahi maanegi ...aur mujhe izaazat nahi unse baat karne ki ...aap please samajhiye
Beta ...Aaliya ke liye ...
aur izaazat apne Mom se baat karne ke liye kissi bhi aulad koh nahi leni padti ..karo ...mujhe yakeen hai ..woh tumse zaroor baat karegi ..
He took the phone ...feeling uneasy ...call from Rehmans mobile, Suraiya won't cut ...and he was not actually breaking his promise...he would just rant and keep the phone down ...she doesn't need to reply him ..and the silence would still be maintained
The ring went ...She picked up ...he felt nice to just hear her Hello...her word only for him, the ears celebrating with a light smile on his face
He cleared his throat ...and mustered up the courage ...
Mai Rhea se shaadi kar raha hu ...agle hafte ...aur haa please phone mat katiy ga ...aapki permission ke liye kiya hai ...sab raazi hai ...agle hafte ...masjid mai...
Phone karne ke liye sorry ...aayegi toh accha lagega ...he spoke a bit faster, his only opportunity to redeem
The silence on the other hand ...was dead ...
He cut the phone ...Rehman smiled ...not seeing the tears in Zains eyes ...
Dekha ...ho gaya na...
He had learned to bury his tears long back ...Chachu ...mujhe nahi karna chaiye tha aise ...who bahut jyada naraaz hai mujhse ...aur ab toh ...
Zain ...mai hoo na ...chalo ...tayari bhi toh karni hai ...he assured him that all was well...
Zain closed his eyes ...he didn't even want to imagine what Suraiyas thinking was or her unspoken feelings ...it was a closed chapter ...he had to move on
The 11:00 pm visit to her room was more discreet today...
She was sleeping ...he peeked at her reflection in the mirror like he usually did ...the eyes opened and she turned her face towards the door ...facing him ...
He stood frozen ...the heat of her face ready to thaw him ...
His world ceased to exist when he saw her face ...the pain and hurt was unbearable ...he was torn ...not knowing if loving was a sin ...if abiding by your heart made his offence unforgivable ...
He walked away ...praying that they never face each other again, atleast he would not be so miserable.
Khamosh labhon ki yehi nishani ...
Toote se ek rishte ki yeh adhori si kahani ...
SIM
Pre-cap: will destiny get Zain and Suraiya face to face ...wait and watch
Next chapter in some time ...today itself 😳
This ones dedicated to a very special fan "Dua", as special is your name, your comment was extra special too. Thanks for making me feel so special and loving Beintehaa Ishq ...this ones for you dear, enjoy
And rest of you aree padho padho aur comment karo, just 4 more chapters to end this thread ...stay tuned
love
Sim
Chapter 73
Toote Wade ...
The next morning ...the office call lead to more tension ...joint signatures ...her and his ...were needed ...but how would he even tell her ...
Zain came to Fahad with a tensed face...Bhai ...woh Matheran wali project mai kuch documents sign karne hai ...
Haa toh jaao aur kar lo ...isme itna pareshaan hone ki kaun si baat hai ...
Woh ..Barkat Royale ke partners ke sign chahte hai ...
aapne toh mujhe aur unhe banaya tha ...Aaliya ke share abhi bhi uske naam par hai...Uske legal formalities toh mai poora kar doonga ...par unke sign kaha se lau...
Aree Mom ...ke sign chaiye ...he nodded ...seeing how Zain was struggling to name her
Hmm ...par Zain who nahi jaayegi tumhare saath aur abhi kaam itna jyada hai mai bhi nahi chal sakta ...nahi toh saath mai jaate, shayad maan jaati
Kya karein ...
Theek hai mai unhe samjhata hu...
Bhai sirf ek din ki baat hai ...Raat tak ghar wapas bhi aa jayenge ...aur unse kahiyega mai unhe pareshaan nahi karunga, door rahunga ...Fahad saw the concealed sadness in his eyes ...
Theek hai tum tension mat lo ...jaao ghar jaao pack karo ...
aur haa apne Rhea madam koh bhi samjha dena ...varna mere naak mai dam kar degi ...
gaye baar tum gaye the toh har second mujhe phoocha hai usne ...non-stop, he laughed to ease the heated situation
Zain smiled and walked back tensed ...fearing for the worst ...
When Fahad explained to Suraiya she was very angry ...Fahad maine kaha tha mujhe nahi chaiye tha tumhara hissa ...ab mujhe uske saath jaana padega ...please samjho meri baat koh ...mujhe uski shakal bhi nahi dekhni.
His phone call was the final nail ...she hated him, how dare he invite me ...
Par Mom ...who project dad ka sapna tha ...Zain ka bhi ...hum sab ki umeedein hai usme ...please humare khatir ...dad ke liye ...
She thought for a while ...Theek hai ...kab jaana hai ...
Kal subhah ...
Aur Mom ...Gaadi kharab ho gayi hai ...toh mujhe Zain ki gaadi lekar jaani padegi ...aap dono aapke car mai jaaye ...he had intentionally planned to get them closer at least while travel...the goa plan had worked for Zain, hopefully this one too would do the miracle ...
Suraiya looked with anger ...
Driver bhi chalega ...
Accha theek hai ...
The morning was more silent then usual ...
Zain had said a big huggy and kissy wala bye to Rhea ...assuring her he will be back soon ...
Maii bhi toh chalti naa...
nahi Da ..he was still hiding his fears ...Woh tumhari Mami hai na bahut busy hai ...aur mai bhi busy rahunga ...tum bore ho jaaogi...
Kikit ..aate waqt chikki( a sweet made of peanuts and jaggery) lekar aana...he smiled,
Da khan eke alava tumhe kabhi kuch nazar aata hai ...their laughter subtracted his rapidly multiplying fears ...
He waited near the car ...
Suriaya walked in and saw him ...he was looking on the other side ...
She sat in the backseat and told the driver ...chalo ...
Zain heard the voice and sat with the driver fully knowing she would not even start the journey if he would sit beside her ...he was happy and sad ...
it felt nice to be with her in so close proximity yet painful to see that she acted as though he was a stranger ...
the driver felt whatever rumors he had heard that Memsahab was not talking to her son was true ...
The ride was the quietest one the driver had in ages ...both were looking out in different directions afraid that even a single gaze would cut each other ....
The three hour of silence broke when they reached the hotel...
Suraiya ...went in alone ...meeting all the executives ...who were waiting for papers to be signed and lunch ...
Zain presumed she wouldn't like it so stayed away ...signing the papers and then talking on the phone with Rhea ...her voice soothed the pain ...
By 4 pm the return journey started with the same silence ...
At around 6 pm they were still stuck in heavy traffic when Suraiya finally spoke to the Driver ...breaking the cocoon of dead air in the car
Koi aur raasta nahi hai kya ...ghar jaldi pahuchna hai ...she wanted to get rid of Zain
Madam ek bypass hai ...par thoda jungle se rashta hai ...ghat se door chalega ...
Haa lijiye ...
Zain looked out...how much she hated him, his mere presence in the car was bothering her.
He remembered the time when he would not even sit quietly for a second around her ...when he had gone to London she was the one who had missed him the most, he was surprised at the change of events ...now the same person did not even want to stay with him for more than five minutes ...
The car turned towards a dusty bypass from the highway ...
As it moved along the turns and twists ...Suraiya started feeling nauseated ...she had a problem with twisted roads... and every turn was making her feel more and more uneasy ...
After fighting the sickness for a while she finally told the driver to stop...
Mera dum ghooth raha hai ...zara rokiye ...Zain was concerned, but he didn't dare to look towards her
She got down from the car and saw a rock near the road ...big enough that she could sit for a while ...she walked towards it, she needed the fresh air
As she walked closer she heard the car door open ...
Without looking back she ventured further to sit ...
the grass under her feet was quiet tall tingling her soft legs behind the heels ...the sun was setting behind her and the rays were painting the whole area in shades of dark orange ...sunsets are beautiful , but with a pain in heart it can look vicious too
She turned towards the car ...and saw him walking towards her ...
Her heartbeats increased ...she couldn't run from here and he knew it ...to avoid him she turned her back now seeing the long sugarcane plantations on the side of the road ...dense and trying to hear the humming of the nocturnal insects that had started to descent ...
She could hear his footsteps ...very close to hers ...the crunch of the leather shoes on the mud and small pebbles that had dusted the road ...
crunch ...crunch ...one step at a time ...fast approaching its destination...her long shadow...
The footsteps came close and a bottle of water came in front of her eyes ... a soft pair of hand that she had so lovingly kissed and nurtured were holding it ...in mid-air
She looked away ...
The bottle in the air waited for a full five minutes in silence ...to be picked up...but she didn't move ...
In a sudden rush of the moment ...he grabbed her hand and turned her towards him ...pulling her towards him ...almost making her fall on him ...
the force that he had used shook Suraiya ...
she was looking at his face now and he had wrapped his arms around her waist ...forcibly making her stand up, his hands had covered her back ...another holding her as close as possible ...his breathing wild ...and his eyes sobered in pain ...
He almost shouted Mom ...the words choking in his throat ...
She looked up to see his face now...tensed...sad ...lonely a dash of misery ...
And the next moment, she realized she was in his hug ... she pushed him away ...
The bottle laid on the road ...rolling ...
He moved a step back ...his hand on his back, the one that had sinned ...looking at her ...he had crossed a fine line that she had set for him ...he wanted to talk ...but she shouted ...
Himmat kaise hui ...tumhe mana kiya tha na maine ...chooha kaise tumne mujhe ...
kaha than a mere naam bhi nahi aana chaiye tumhare zubaan par ...bhool, gaye apna vaada ...ya meri baat nahi maani ki kasam khayi hai tumne ...
jab dekho apni manmani karte rehthe ho...smajh kar kya rakha hai tumne mujhe ...her venomous eyes were spilling hatred for him ...
His eyes were filled with tears now...slowly soaking in the moment ...
Kay socha ...mai akeli hu ...toh maan jaaungi ...mai koi Aaliya ya Rehman nahi hu joh tumhe itne asani se maaf kardu,
aur kyu aaye the mere kamre mei...nahi chaiye tumhara thofa ...kya socha tha maafi maang loge aur sab theek hoga ...
jao jakar karo apni rhea se shaddi ...jitney baar rishta banana hai bano, na meri pehli kadar thi , naa aaj hai tumhe ...
Phone pe aise davat dete ho ...jaise ki mai mari jaa rahi hu ...kyu kiya tha woh phone ...
She turned her back at him ...walking two steps away ...with every word
Khudgarzi ki had hoti hai ...apni bholi soorat banakar apni zidd poori nahi kar sakte tum ...
khud koh kamre mai band karva kar kya sabit karna chahte the ...ki mai kitni buri hu ...haa hu buri ...tumhe bhooke rakh kar ...khud bhi bhooki thi mai ...
par is baat se tumhe kya matlab hai ...tum bas jiya aur maro apni Aaliya ke liye ...
Na tumhari shaqal dekhni hai ...na tumse baat karni hai mujhe ...Nahi pyaar karti tumse ...tum mar gaye ho mere liye ...mera bas ek beta hai aur rahega ...Fahad ...
Thak gayi hu tumhari shakal dekhkar ...karo nikaah usse ...par haa mere ghar mai nahi rahoge ...
kya kha tha uss khat mai ...yaad hai ...ya yaad dilao ...mujhe jitna dhokha dena tha ...usse jitney dena hai shaukh se do ...
kya bolu mai Fahad se ...kitni baton ki sazaa bhugto ge ...yeh zindagi shayad kam padegi ...mera dil dhukhaya nahi tumne toda hai ...
sahi kaha tha ...Yeh khamoshi ab umra bhar ke liye hai tumhare liye ...
mai tanee sunati hu ...kyu sunao ...kay lagte ho tum mere ...
us Rhea ke liye ...saari raat kamre ke bahar baith sakte ho, kabhi mere liye kuch liya hai ...sivya mere pyaar ka Mazak banna kea lava ...mujhse jhoot bolne ke alava ...
Rishta banana hai, nibhana hai ...toh shaukh se karo...Mere ghar se door...
usse koi shikhva nahi hai mujhe ...bahut sah chuki hai ...par tumse hai...chod do yeh ghar ...business tumhara hai ...par ghar mera ...jab tak zinda hoon tum mar gaye ho mere liye ...
Ab kya sharam aa rahi hai ...bolo ...yeh shayad akhri baar hai ki hum ek doosre ke itne paas khade ho...
ab mujhse aur bardhast nahi hota ...ya toh us ghar mai tum rahoge ya mai ...akhri baar kuch bolna hai toh bolo...phir yeh mauka nahi milega ...
It was so silent as though he was not standing there ...she felt uneasy ...why was he not arguing ...or even justifying anything ...she turned back ...
He was lying on the ground ...with froth on his mouth ...hand still tightly held back ...with a bite mark ...
Ajeeb si zindagi hai...
jab jeete hai toh marne se darte hai...
Aur jab marte hai ...
...tab sulgane se bhi ghabrate hai ...
Sach mai ajeeb si zinadagi hai ...
SIM
Pre-cap: Will Suraiyas heart melt ...will Zain live for that ...stay tuned
Originally posted by: Zainedil
Anksso happy to see you back...and I do understand the exams part, so no worriesThank you so much for your kind wordsEvery story has a life-span , this was supposed to be only 20 chapters and look at it now, its gonna cross 100😆dont worry will be back soon ...maybe with something newstay tunedloveSim
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