Originally posted by: Tom-and-Jerry
sim!!! it was Beautiful 😳😳..love bossy zain😛...awiee that end wala huge ..very well written👏..loved it so so much❤️...plzzz continue soon...thanks for pm 😃
Originally posted by: Crazy4HarshIka
the last three chapters that I have read now left me with no words.😭
I m Speechless.Thanku Sim:)
Sim, it was a heart touching chapter
U made me cry...Continue ASAPstay blessedRiya
Ek dham zayalicious chapter😉
Zain told rhea about Aliya😭Precap is interesting 😃continue soon😃Any way i am happy that Rhea got my name😆only spell is changed😆stay blessed😊Riya😳
Originally posted by: AnnRosewood
Sim,why do you make me cry when you actually intend to make me smile by the time I reach the end of the chapter? I guess,that's the power your words have over me,they are like the reins,holding my emotions in sway..
You have taken zaya's relationship to a different level,captured the innocence and true essence of unconditional love,that comes with the baggage of insecurities,jealousy and a whole gamut of other emotions,that we cherish every moment.Your words make me forget my existence and delves me into the world of zain and rhea and her memories which have faded in the sands of time , a blurred identity and a guy who's still trying to come to terms with the fact that the woman who means the world to him,is now living with both the identities mixed into one..his constant fear that a day might come when her memories will resurface,and it would lead her to walk away for him ad he'd have to experience the pain of parting and the debilitating dull ache inside his heart all over again..I don't know why,but I can feel that Zain is tired to being alone,of feeling hurt..its like that part of him has given up,he doesn't want to fight with his bad memories,he just wants what he can get with rhea..he wants some peace..And then there's Rhea,who for a second feels threatened by the impending apprehensions ..that once his 'Aliya' comes back ,he'll go back to him..Sim ,you make us think,you make us feel and visualize,and by the end of the chapter,we feel for the characters and somehow you have taught us to look at the world the way Zain and Rhea does.Loved it .Love,Ann
Originally posted by: Riya5666
Another amazing chapter!!!!
Awesome Sim!!!!!So zain told rhea about aaliya!!!Missing Our Aaliya sooo much...Pls bring aaliya back now pleaasee...And continue soon...p.s. aren't u gonna start a new thread???
Originally posted by: zaya.fatima
Chapter 69
I had tears in my eyes and a smile on my face when I was reading the chapterLiterally I'm out of words to explain that what I felt while reading this chapter specially the last part when Rhea said huggie chahyie ...❤️It was emotional cute and lovely scene I was actually imagining ZaYa😳Truly you have done a wonderful job👏
Originally posted by: zaya.fatima
Chapter 70
Aww you have dedicated this chapter to me that is so sweet of you thank you so much for that😊Loved the ZaYalicious chapter how beautifully Zain have told Rhea about Aaliya it was fabulous👍🏼
Originally posted by: Meghapaim
Wow u are an ausome writer each update day by day are really well written and their dialogue are heart touching and emotional and ur word really evoke fellings and I start imagining the entire scene ur words are really spell bound👍🏼
Keep writingDo continue soon🤗
Originally posted by: Sobtian...
Sim ur words r vry beautiful.
Not only for stry but fr convo also.
I ve read 15 chappys.
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