FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]Thread 1 completed - Page 104

A new challenge to zain seems interesting

Nooo no more twist n turn plz bring back Aaliya

Surprise update

Have to still reply to all, Khyatu will compile the red liners this weekend

Dedication: One of my silent readers manny136, she reads as soon as I update, likes it and never leaves a comment😆. No problem dear, I know you will be reading this too, thanks for being the first to read my story, loads of love

Sim

Chapter 63

Dhamaka

Zain walked out and left for his office not waiting for Rhea ...

She came after lunch when his head was covered with a file ...

Kitkit ...

He looked up ...

Naraaz ho kya ...mere liye ruke nahi ...office aa gaye ...

He kept the file down ...

Mai naraaz nahi ho sakta tumpe ...allowed nahi hai mujhe...bhool gayi tum ...

Sorry who dad ke samne ...

Koi baat nahi ...he started reading again ...

mai busy hoon ...repeating her old words

Aree ...mujhe ignore kyu kar rahe ho ...bolo

Da ...kaam kar rah ahu ...

Matlab ghussa ho...

Nahi ...uska license toh sirf tumhare paas hai ...

pehle bhadko ...phir mujhe satao ...aur mai tumhe pato..meri shaqal mai jab barah baj jaye tab taras khao ...hai na ...his words sounded a bit hasty in construction ...

Zainuuu ...kya sweetheart thode dad ke samne kya footage kum de di tum toh seni menti ho gaye ...

Haa ...hu...tumhe share nahi kar sakta ...aur gabbar ke saath toh kabhi nahi ...

Accha theek hai ...she pulled his tie ...

Yeh bandana kab seekha ...

he looked up puzzled as though his Aaliya was talking to him now ...

he could never tie it as good as her ...he remembered the way she had tied his tie before that fake Barkats party

..moments that had binded their relationship to a new level ...

Haa ...waqt sab seekha deta hai ...bitterly swaying the last one year when he had struggled and then learnt and re-learnt the art of tying a tie alone ...

Accha ...bhadkuram ....she put her face close to his ...now almost close to his desk ...and gave a sweet peck on his cheeks ...leaving a dark red lipstick mark...

Yeh kya uss inspector ke liye choda hai ...taki joh kal raat ki kasar baki hai ...who aapki hasrat poori ho jaaye ...waise jail ka khana accha nahi hota ...

She looked up hurt ...

Ek toh pappi do ...uski koi face value nahi reh gayi hai ...aur phit taane suno ...accha hota agar kal raat nahi bachati ...

jail ke gundo ke saath rehte toh akal thikane aa jati ...do dande padte na...

Zains eyes turned red ...a silent image was blazing in it that Rhea didn't see...

Da...tum shayad mujhe aise dekh nahi paati...dekh chukha hu ...his words blurted out in a fury of the moment ...

Dekh chuki ho ...kaha she caught his words and started grilling him ...

Matlab ...dekh nahi paaogi ...tum bahut komal ho na ...he kissed her hands ...

She smiled...chalo ab jab tumne mujhe maaf kar hi diya hai toh do dhamake karti hu...

Ab kya ...his eyes were preparing what next ...

Pehle ...dad koh patane ke liye who tumhara test lenge ...

He was silent ...Tum baap beti samjhte kya ho mujhe ...

jab dekho tab mere jaan ke peeche padhe rehte ho...tum kahin ki koi begum ho ki mai tumhare liye pyaar ke imtihaan du...

Dekho keh daana aapne Dad se ...mujhe damad banana hai toh unhe request lekar aana hoga...main ahi jaaunga kissi koh prove karne ...

Rhea eyes were a lot bigger now ...in a moment squinting on him ...

Kitkit ...mai hu hi aise ...agar mujhe paana hai toh papad toh belne padenge ...aur waise bhi dad bahut sakht nahi hai ...koi chota mota test hoga tum itna kyu tension le rahe ho...

Haa..kal koh mujhe surgery room mai khada kar diya toh ...

ya ...kisi pahad par chadne koh kaha ...

kitna khaufnaak manzar ho sakta hai ...nahi nahi main ahi de rah ahu koi test vest ...

.koi aur ladki se shadi kar lunga ...aisa bhi kya desperation hai tumse shadi karna ka ...

Zain...agar mai sach mai kissi aur se shaadi kar li ...toh sirf chat se dekhte reh jaoge ...

His silence bore the mark of her unwanted thoughts ...

Theek hai ...bolna unka ...koi bhi koshsih kar le ...main ahi harronga ...test huhhh he twisted his nose

Yeh hui na baat ...mera sheru ...she gave another kissy ...

Dekho matching marks ...he blushed ...

Aur doosra dhamaka ...

Maine sham koh aayat ke ammi abbu ke saath dinner jaane ka plan banaya hai ...aaoge toh accha hoga ...phir tumhari marzi ...

He finally looked up ..with traces of shock ...

Jab bhi aati ho toofan laati ho...

Par mujhe toofan se darr nahi lagta ...

Tera saath jab tak hai ...sab se lad loonga...

Par tujhe ...mujhse kabhi juda nahi hone doonga...

SIM

Pre-cap: Dinner with the Haidars

You know Sim,I want to confess something to you today..i get a feeling while reading your works..its like somewhere down the way the Beintehaa we have seen on Tv on Beintehaa IShq begings to merge..its like I'm a part of the scene..and I'm getting flashes..I experienced this again today,while reading this chapter..the way Zain was standing ..looking over helplessly as Aaliya went away with Rehaan..the way his tear fell ..its a surreal feeling,that gets my mind reeling..sometimes I feel like I'm the one who has lost ehr memory and I'm getting flashbacks..you have achieved something really wonderful..I'm spellbound..really Sim..

And manny136 u still didn't comment 😆
Love
Sim

Aww Sim thanks for that lol what a way to put a person in the spot light for not commenting lol. Sorry I dont its usually im using a device and i dont like typing a big commentary with it. Anyway im better at analysing the actual show and ur fic is so good and my analysis wouldnt matter. Just love the way you took the story from the most intense point in the show and turned into this great story and i anticipate your updates with such excitement coz they are written so beautifully and always seem to surprise me. Keep up the good work and if u want I will try to comment from now onwards. Lots of love Manny😃

Amazing again I sometimes really want Aaliya back to make her see in how much pain he is because whenever he tries to move on there is always an old memory that surfaces through him I liked the possessive Zain and I am earger to know Gabbar 's test , continue soon love you !

loved d chapter
beautifully written
oh nw wat will be rehman's test
n ik its gng to be difficult 4 zain coz he wants to take away aaliya wid him..
Hope zain'll complete
d test
pls cont soon

Read all pending chapters in one go ..

Sim ..i m having no words to praise u yar ..how can u write so perfectly ..
Haye dinner with haiders ..

Ab kiya hoga

Plzz update soon

Lots of love
Alina

Every Twist n Turn Is So Interesting That I crave To Read It More n More.Wish It Could B A Book...😉 .