Can You Trust Me? - A ZaYa SS Chap 10 and 11, Page 27, 17th June - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

Tanu...PM kardo yaar...I don't know where I stopped...

Will read it after my exams...


PM mei hi toh problem hai yaar.
I hv to send pm twice bcoz I hv 85 frnds. :P

Sorryy.. All da besht for exams by the way. 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harsh_pree

Verry nice!!
nicely written..


Thank you so much.
I am glad u like it. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth

Itni jaldi khatam mar karo*Aaliya jaisa pout*

Regarding the update...
Was really waiting for this one too...
Zain itna BECHARA ban gaya? Kabse??:-P :-P
Continue soon...



Nahi krungi. Bt thts for the ppl who no longer wnna read this.
Really? I am glad you were. :)
Hamesha se tha.😆

I'll try mah best to cont asap. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cute and nice chappy tannu...
Zain is like chori chori pyar karen gy ham donon...hehehe.
continue soon dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful chappy...cant wait for the next update...plz cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi peeps.

Kya? Aa gyi mei waapis.

Zyaada ghussa mt kro.

BP high ho jayega. :p


Here u go!


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Emergency Room

Zain's POV


"Doctor doctor! Pls mere papa ko baccha lijiye. Woh bahaut acche hai. Pls doctor, baccha lijiye na mere papa ko." Cried a 12 year old girl as she comes running to me.



"Oh sweety, hum baccha lenge aapke papa ko bilkul chinta mt kro aap. Aap Dr. Riddhima ke saath jao, she'll get u changed n dressed." Aaliya comes and stands beside me.



"Aaliya.. ye.. what hppnd?"



"Zubair Ahmed, 45 yrs old, two kids and a wife. Drink and drive ka case hai. Abhi ke abhi OT mei shift krna hga."



"And d other kid?"



"He.. he cudnt survive. The kid had had his last breath before we got them here. We um.." Oh god, she s gnna cry.



"Hey.. Aaliya.. dnt cry baby." I pull her to my arms.



"Zain release me. Koi dekh lega."



"Come on, let's go."


Post Operation

Zain's POV



"Time of death 16:39." Doctors. Doctors have to be the most heartless persons. Zubair Ahmed was announced dead. His girl, Zara, I learned her name, was crying buckets.



"Dr. Zain, I'd like u to call his wife."



"Call her?"



"Yeah, she is nt yet informed abt the demise."



"Dr. Kirti, ma'am, I am nt sure I'll b able to."



"Dr. zain, this is nt abt what u'll b able to do and what not. I repeat myself, call Mrs. Ahmed and tell her. Or shud I request Dr. Aaliya to call?"

No. Good god, no.
Aaliya is much more fragile than me right now.
She cannot see anyone hurt.. and death..
Nah! I can't let her call. She'll nt b able to console.



"No Ma'am, I'll call. The number?"

"It's at the desk."



Children's ward
Aaliya's POV


It wasn't as if I thought Zain wasn't fragile in this state. The hurt look, I can forever recognize it. But, certainly, I cannot face him. Not now!



My cell beeps.



Pls come to the firescape.
There is something I need to talk abt.
I hope u understand me. Pls come.

---

Dr. Zain Abdullah
Intern at Sanjeevani.




No! I can't face him!




Firescape
Zain's POV



I knew she won't come. She will think she'll make me more sad when she gives me that look! Nah, I knew it.


"Zain?" A broken voice calls me out.


Aaliya.


"Oh dear." God she's crying! I pull her to my arms hiding her in my embrace. Oh, her tears are the most huge pain in my heart.


"Zain I am sorry."


"For what?"


"I can't afford to lose you. Don't ever leave me."


"No baby, I won't, I promise. Is that what is upsetting u? I won't leave u ever Aaliya. You r d only reason for my existence. Bt u need to promise me something too."


"What is it?"


"You'll dance with me only at the dance!"


Ahh, finally she smiles.


"Wouldn't u ask me?"


"I will." I go on one knee. "Dr. Aaliya Haider, wouls you do me the honour of a dance?"


"I'd love to." She slips her hand into mine. I take out my cell and open the music app, playing a slow song I put it down.


"I love you."


"I love you, too."


"I love you more." I swirl her into me. A small dip and then pull her into my arms. Reaching for her hands, I take hold of them and pull them up. I breathe her toxic scent.


"Dr. Aaliya, pls Children's Ward me report kre." The loud speaker calls out loudly. Perfect timing!

"Aah, my call. Sorry baby, later."

"Aaliya!"

"Sorry!" She runs off.




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There u go!

I am late, ya I knw.
I promised a lot bfr.
Bt I was packing!


Ok b-bye. :)



-Tanu.
Edited by harshadcrazyfan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc update.
Starting ws very emotional n cancer ward padhte hi I ws gng 2 leave dis stry.
But thankfully kuch nhi tha
it ws amazing.
Continu soon.
Edited by Sobtian... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
ignore typos.
I hv replaced cancer by children's.
May everyone stay fit forever. :)
Hope I didn't hurt any1
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

ignore typos.
I hv replaced cancer by children's.
May everyone stay fit forever. :)
Hope I didn't hurt any1


No di srry agar bura laga.
U didnt hurt any1
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing chp
beautifully written
aww...their dance
loved it
do cont asap plz !
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