zaya ff koi fariyaad (thread 2)- Last Chap nd Epilogue, pg 30. Dec2015 - Page 5

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So you officially are now my Lara di! Yayaya! :D
First of all di, thanks for the very very lovely dedication. What I felt while reading that para is inexplicable.. Especially the part where you called me your Li'l sister! I'd never be able to thank you enough for that! *Touched* ❤️🤗

Now coming to the story :
Oh God! Tell me how, just how do you manage to put so much of magic in a single chapter! This was once again full of wonders (not that I need to tell you, you already know right? :D )

Barqat's encounter with Ayaan:
Aahahaha! This one left me in splits! "Satan and Baqrat"- you guys deserve a chocolate cake. How unlucky of Barqat to crash into her sworn enemy just after she felt she has met the love of her life! And oooh.. Ayaan smells like a burnt toast! 😆.
Jokes apart, I guess apart from being light hearted, this chapter also gave some depth to the equation between the two. Ayaan shows his protective and possessive side by giving some good reality checks (which can be pretty harsh :P). But you know he'll always stand up for the girl- knowingly or unknowingly, willingly or unwillingly. Loved it!

Jonathan and Aliya:
Aliya woman, may I please know why you're procrastinating to tell Jon and end things with him- if only you could see his real face, you would realize your making a mistake even bigger than what you made 6 years ago. And Jonathon- what would you take to leave my lovely ZaYa in peace man?

Zain and Aliya's romantic moments:
Now that gave me GOOSEBUMPS (good ones, obviously!) Magical. Beautiful. Romantic. Aww-worthy! The song was amazing and totally suited the situation. Kudos to your song selection sense!
A girl needs nothing but love, faith and respect to run into your arms. Zain has nailed the first and third, he still has to work for the second one, though!
And may I please demand a tagda waala face-off between Zain and Jon after the revelation? Like that total dishuum- dishuum, bollywood types- and then Aaliya taking care of Zain! (Haaye, so very bollywood- I know.. but kya karun? :P)

The shocking revelation:
You're on a bombshell dropping spree- aren't you?! Usman knowing about Aaliya's existence was very, very unexpected! Maamujaan, bas ab ghar laao chaaron ke chaaron ko :P
But Asad though, quite a sadist brother, I must say.

Oh man. I just realized that I made a really really long comment, so without wasting much of your time, I'll pen off here! But hey, enjoy your break- but pretty please complete the story once you come back! And yeah- you have another gem- "Forever Yours". Please update that too soon!.. You might not know, but I read that too! :)

P.S.: I know, since the chappy was dedicated to me- I should have commented earlier. Really really sorry for that! Hope the long comment makes up for it! :D

P.P.S: There was something I just remembered. Isabella ke place par I should have been the one kissing Sammy! He's sooo CUTE!!!!! ❤️

Hasta la Vista! Come back soon! Enjoy life!

loved it

hate jon

loved ayaan nd barkat's part

nd i don't know about others but i found suraiyya hilarious

excited for the next part

continue sooon

nd thnx 4r pm

AAahh this ff is one of the major reasons why I wanted to join IF ...plz plz plz update fast can't wait tooo much plz plz plz ...

Luv u so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so much!!

❤️

I have been reading this for a few day now... initially i did 10 chapters a night for two night... then the 3rd night i read 5 chapters... and then i had to put a halt to reading... got busy with stuff.

Bur i have finally finished it now... loved how u write... the pain, the romance, the mischiefs of the kids... i could feel all of it... loved the addition of Asad and Zoya. I imagined shilpa anand for Zoya though, I was a huge KaSh fan back in the DMG days!

I wanted to write a review on each chapter separately, but I was so lost in the story.. I just couldn't pause to write... only stopped when i was super sleepy. But I give u individual reviews for all the upcoming chapters... although, it's not vwry hard to guess that all those reviews will say that it was absolutely perfectly awesome

I loved how u started it with Zain sitting by a lake at night and then it progressed, loved that it was continuous, but had flashbacks... very Hollywood style. First time, in the story, Zain saw Aaliya, he yelled at her... poor girl... she had to go through so much pain, her own brother bullied her, the guy she loved always insulted her... but she's a very strong girl (now woman).

Funny moments between barkat and Aayaan (imagined vishal singh) bring the lighthearted-ness to the story... they seem to be the kitjit couple here...lol

The night of Zain's arrival, when he first saw Aaliya praying with sarah and sammy, couldn't have been perfect. Ayaan doing all the housework is an added bonus for Zain... ek managing director ki salary pr ek maid free... free... free 😉

Mrs. Savanah and her dog... a very nice addition... Zain's first, in person encounter, with sarah and sammy was left me spellbound, barkat throwing all the trash on ayaan was hilarious... the airport scene too was very funny... the morning run, the supermarket scene, the kiss, ZaYa's romantic night after the party... and everything the led to it, and everything that followed... it was all perfect... there are so many moments i wanna mention, but then i'd be writing every scene, cz it was so so so good, and then it would be too long a comment to fit in one single post... lol

Thanks Lara for such a wonderful FF, I can't wait to read the rest of it... i hope u update soon 😊