zaya ff koi fariyaad (thread 2)- Last Chap nd Epilogue, pg 30. Dec2015 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Hahaha super cute update...
Loved it :)))
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Congo on the new thread
Amazing update😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Superb Update!!!!
Jonathan is only interested in aaliya n nuhin else in her life matters to him...I guess its time she discusses disbissue with barkat so it can b sorted b4 its too late...zain handling child bully well..he cnt change d past but defntly rectify in d present...kids damn mischievous...but lovely..thanks for the PM Lara!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Wow... What a lovely update
I love it specially d kids part:)
So Sarah saw their parents...Amazing hahah
Plz plz cont. Soon... Tnx
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Awww...you welcome with my previous comment and guess what..im on my computer again so im gna type as much as i can lol..
ur so sweeettt...love you tooo..

Now to the chapter..
well first of all..congrats for the new thread..amazing job
u r first person on this forum that i know of that has started second thread on an ff and tbh i think this is also the longest running ff on this forum so well if i was u id be very proud and happy..
ur basically malika-e-zaya ff for the beintehaa forum (lol at my randomness)
this was another amazing chapter
i loved it
it was so cute
loved the bit where sammy's imagination is running wild where he doesnt kno what has happened to sarah..he's the perfect brother lol..kaash mera bhai aisa hota lol
and well i can also tell now tht jon just ants aliya and cant stand zain so i think there may be a showdown between them
and OMG th twins saw zaya kissing??!!!:0
lol thats so funny and very cute the way they said it...and sammy and isabella scene was also very cute
and when sarah is telling aliya about isabella kissing sammy..so adorable lol
kaash mere bhi bache aise ho lol


so yeah..basically it was amazing
and continue soon if u can lol...
love yaaa
looking forward to the next chappy
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
congrates for the new thread!!! and amazing update once again
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

aww!!! such a cute and lovely beautiful update!!!! 😳😳😳Loved Sarah and Sammy❤️... amazingly written👍🏼...really enjoyed reading it 😳especially food fight and last part 😆was superbb... ...thank u so much for pm😊...eagerly waiting for d next part...😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Hey! I've been a silent reader of your story for a very very long time.. and this has been my favourite FF of all times (along with your other ZaYa OSs)!
I used to read it as a guest, but couldn't resist joining IF only to comment on your stories! I've been inactive since a very long time, but now that I'm active.. I'll comment on every update from now onwards, and if I find time.. I'll even comment on the previous thread and other OSs :D It's got me so hooked!
All the characters are so beautifully penned down- not perfect, but realistic.. Relatable..and the beauty of the lines you write is absolutely inexplicable! Salute! :D
Btw, I'm Radhika- 14 years old and a newbie.. Can I get your introduction too? Like name, gender and if you're older to me- so that I know if I have to refer you as di/ bhaiya/ by name?
Thanks once again for giving us all these amazing pieces, fave writer! :D

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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Plz update "FOREVER MINE " too
Pretty please 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Firstly congrats on the new thread and plzz update soon.
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