Originally posted by: ZFA_Flower
I am very emotional now
This update is
Marvellous
Magnificent
Excellent
Fabulous
Fantastic
Outstanding
Wonderful
Splendid
Spectacular
Bravo
This story couldn't get more perfect ending than this
This is the best update u have written till now
Loved and Enjoyed this rollercoaster-ride journey
And I love travelling and this was one memorable
~My favourite scene
Passage no.3,5 and last
"What is this Zain,", " Mom I ll handle this" zain went to her room. She was sitting on the corner of bed ". Osman, suraiya, shabhana and Gulam to followed and they stood outside the room secretly..spying them..
And
" Zain instantly answered her EARTH WORM" Aliya looked at him angrily .. " So u knew answer, they y did u answer white ants first" he turned her to mirror and pointed at her angry face.. " that's y, I want u to laugh...so that's y answered White ants". " well I have more answers, but I ll not tell now itself ll store for.our future, when ever u dnt talk to me I ll reveal one one answer, and u have to to talk to me ", Aliya gave little bigger smile this time pressing her lips trying to hold her laugh... " u can laugh, I have no problem" finally she gave a complete smile..
" u know Zain, I thought of changing myself bcz u dnt like my behaviour, but u were ready to marry someone else.. I HATE YOU.. for this".
And
Suddenly Aliya broke the Hug angrily. ". Now what happened" asked zain getting scared. " After marrying me u have to remove those pics from ur room's wall"
" What pics?" zain asked. " I saw ur pics with ur Girl friends on ur Rooms wall".
" oh, those photos, ha ha I ll remove, so u r jealous..., wait a minute,how do u know abt it..." zain asked getting shocked. " I went into ur room", " HOW".
" through window" she answered him casually moving his hand fingers...
Zain was super shocked, " u climbed through pipe and then went through window into my room" " yes, my child hood habit, I do that when ever I come home lately to escape from my mom's chanter" she said winking at him. " But Y MY SUPER LADY" he asked her placing his both hands on her shoulder, " bcz I was missing u, I dnt have ur pic too.. so I thought of steeling a pic from ur room" she said resting her head on his shoulder... he bent down to kiss her but Aliya stopped him placing her hand in between them..." u r shy?" zain asked in disbelief... she moved away from him.. " Shy my foot, u cannot kiss me now, u ll have to wait.." " Ufff, I HATE U My BITCH" " I HATE U TOO MY YAWNIE " she hugged him tightly and gave a small kiss on his cheek." hey dear, how did u know my home address" asked zain moving little away from her..." first u tell me how did u know my home address?"
"I asked that travel agency, he didn't give then after so much pleading he gave me"
" ha ha u r such a phattu Zain lol... u could have asked Ayat right, I got ur address from rizwaan..". she teased him to become brainey.. he just smiled to her .
"Okay my dear SPIDER WOMAN, come let's go and inform our parents." SPIDER WOMAN, stop giving names atleast now zain," " Awww that's tough my dear chatter box" CHATTER BOX, U... she started running behind him, after little struggle she caught hold of his t shirt and bent his head down to beat him...zain was struggling to escape.. shabhana, suraiya, Osman and Gulaam witnessed this. they stopped fighting stood quietly infront of them, feeling embarassed. They just burst into laughing concluding them as two ODD SOULMATES.
~My favourite dialog
Zain shook his head " let me finish dear" "" DEAR", u called me dear, but u call me Bitch every time..." U r my DEAR BITCH". he came towards her and rested his head on her Lap.
And why did u send the PM so late but still its the last chap so I want say goodbye to this ss while being angry with u and I think u must be busy with your exams at least u send me PM
I will miss this ss very much but I will miss u more
But u will have to come back soon
And I will be waiting for your new ff search for happiness
And one more thing congratulations on completing this ss
U see I am also a chatter box just like u
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