zaya ss: Soulmates, last chapter - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: neenzz

I liked it, but one thing i didn't get was why would aaliya check into a hotel just to check out minutes later?
I could totally imagine zain in his blue jeans, white t-shirt and blue sleeveless jacket, and aaliya was in black jeans, pink tank top and brownish peach loose open knit sweater, and also a beanie, that's just how it was in my mind when i read it, although i think turquoise or white tank top would have looked better, but anyway, that's just completely opposite of how aaliya dresses, she would look so cute with a beanie though, at least in my head she did!

God definitely she look hot, zain was phattu that's y he is calling her bitch, oddball bla bal😳😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: madhufx9...


I ll clear it in next update dear😊 when they start talking to each other, 😆
And even I wrote this ss imagining them in almost same costumes
Thank u for super comment, glad that u liked it

Now that should tell u how good u are, a writer's work is afterall to convey his/her imagination to others😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

Really well written...it took me back to the good old days of BI...ahhh...their KITKIT...

And the best part...NO KMH...ONLY ZAYA...😃

CONTINUE SOON...really worth reading...

Aww thank u, yes forum is filled with emotional updates so I thought I shud try something else
Out of. ZaYa obsession I penned it ,i planned differently but output was diff from that
Yes I loved their kit kit, thank u for comment dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: neenzz

Now that should tell u how good u are, a writer's work is afterall to convey his/her imagination to others😉

Oh dear, come on I'm not a very good writer
P.s. Did u read my ff on zaya? Teri meri love story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
very nice
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Are jan-e-maaan itna acha post deke puchti ho aage du ki nahi!!
jaldi do bhai...hum sab mar rahe he
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Amazing concept plzzz do pm me and update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
It was amazinggg!!!😳..wonderfully written👏...Loved it. ❤️...eagerly waiting for d next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Woah.. This is amazing...
Rizwan made ZaYa sit together...
Unintentionally or intentionally... that was cute!
And plus... Monster when she is sleeping?
This is so good..
Also, can you pm me the next time you update?
And thanks for commenting on my works..
Thanks a lot and take care.

-Tanya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Little_Johnny

Are jan-e-maaan itna acha post deke puchti ho aage du ki nahi!!

jaldi do bhai...hum sab mar rahe he


Seriously😛 thank u, thank u dear😊
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