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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zaya.harshika

obviously cute chudail...agar aj ka dose nahi liya to meri tabiyat kharab hojaye gi๐Ÿ˜‰...and Thursday ko mera 1st paper hai...so aaj ka dose zaroori hai!

Haye Rama, I ll give just little time๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Haye Rama, I ll give just little time๐Ÿ˜›

OK...I m waiting!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Teri meri love story
Chapter 15

Hello all, here I'm back with today's dose of torture,i hope u ll like reading it


Zain woke up in the morning , his head was spinning badly, he didn't understand why... he tried to recollect what happened yesterday... All he remember was he met Aliya and Barkat's friend Zubair and his displeasure towards him...

After so much struggle, he could recollect what happened, Aliya and zubair's Dance, zain stating Aliya As his Wife, the way he forced Aliya to Dance and how he kissed her... Zain jumped from his bed in shock, shocked at his own behaviour...


Rehan came out of washroom and Saw Zain sitting on couch holding his head... " So u woke up..", Zain looked at him with horrified face... " Yaar, what happened yesterday, What did I do?" Rehan was silent and was looking at him in confusion.. " What did u do, u drank and u danced with Aliya", Zain was relieved.. a bit bcz they dint see him kissing Aliya.. " Why didn't you stop me Rehan?" , " stop u from what?, from kissing Aliya, u r not kid zain, u are very much aware of what u were doing", Zain was completely embarassed. And felt ashamed of his behaviour...


" I donno Rehan, y did I Do that? , how can I do it? when I'm loving Sanam so much, we both are going to marry also..." Rehan left from there in Disbelieff..


Zain was struggling so much, he felt guilty once again for what he did, "what ever happened in Island was different, that was our need, but what I did yesterday was sin, how can I kiss Aliya, when I'm in love with Sanam, how can I cheat Sanam? How can I face Aliya"

He stood up from couch at that thought of facing Aliya... " what she ll think of me.., what she ll do with me... will she throw stones at me, the way she threw them on that Dog, it will be Horrific to face her in our next meet, wait ll she talk with me, what if she doesn't talk to me, God I should I apologise her , I should some thing"

His phone beeped... he saw MINNIE displaying on the screen of phone. Zain scared to open msg


MINNIE: Y did u drink yesterday?

GEM: I honestly don't know Aliya... pls dnt get Angry..

MINNIE: so, u drink regularly...? That's a bad habbit..

GEM: ufff.. u too brought 3 bottles vodka to have 2 tiny tiny pegs na

MINNIE: that was my first and last time, I just wanted taste, that's it

GEM: okay sorry yaar, leave it, I ll not drink again..

MINNIE: ur wish, u can do anything I'm least bothered, I want to meet u once

GEM: Me too.. ll meet at 2 Pm

MINNIE : okay


Zain was thinking how to tell her sorry, he remembered Aliya giving white Rose to his mom seeking her Apology... he thought that ll be great...


Zain was waiting for Aliya, he was scared to meet her. He saw Aliya coming towards him, he was looking all around except her, Ashamed to face her.. he wanted earth to swallow him at that moment to hide him from her fierce glares... she sat infront of him.. they were silent for few minutes. Zain didn't know how to start... " u wanted to say something, u called me?" zain asked gulping water to moist his dried throat. " u even wants to meet me, u can tell first", " No its okay I ll wait for my turn"


" what have u done yesterday, I didn't expect this from u, I treated u as my best friend, but u broke my trust", " Aliya, I was not in my senses, I'm extremely sorry, that was not deliberate". " Zain we were not in our senses when had Vodka on Island too, u didn't do anything bcz ur love for Sanam was that strong, seeing ur immaculate behaviour I thought u were one in millions, but u proved me wrong".


Aliya very well knew what she was talking, if she is affected by him, she know's even he ll be equally affected, she know's it was not his fault alone, but she wants to stop all these... Zain was silent through out her outburst. He could clearly see unescaped tears from her eyes.. he didn't know how to handle situation...

" Aliya, I'm telling u, trust me I didn't do it deliberately, I'm angry on myself for my behaviour, pls forgive me, he took out bunch of white Roses but didn't have Guts to give her on seeing her expressions, so he simply placed it on Table.

"Whether it's deliberate or not, either way it's wrong Zain, Sanam trusted both of us, We should not cheat her... so it's better we stay away, we should not meet often" Zain too felt what Aliya Telling was correct, so he agreed with her. " Aliya, what u r telling is true, but atleast accept my sorry...",

" Zain, giving those white roses and seeking for forgiveness, it means a lot to me only, I dnt believe in people giving me white Rose when they are seeking my forgiveness, bcz it's nothing to them, they jus know those Roses are my favourite...that's it, and they give me to convince me soon...

" Zain threw those flowers in near by dustbin and asked her to forgive him. " I believe u zain, u dnt need to do all those to convince me". Zain felt relief and thanked her. " Zain more than mine u need Sanam's forgiveness, okay bye, I need to go, I ll inform u about date of hearing of our divorce". She left from there without looking at him.


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Aliya was drawn out of her memories when Saif disturbed her. She hurriedly closed her Album and locked it in a closet. "Momma, I'm hungry...", " Oh my little Gem is hungry?", Aliya lifted Saif and made him sit in her lap. " U r feeling hungry at 4.30 am!!!", " haan momma", " Okay what do u want to eat my little Gem?" , " I Can adjust with chocolate pudding ma" , " u can Adjust?, Chocolate pudding at this time, Not at all possible" saif didn't accept which made Aliya irritated , " God, he is just a carbon copy of his father, very stubborn


" Aliya dropped few fake tears which melted saif.. " Okay momma, I dnt want come let's sleep... " saif got up and pulled her to bed with his little hands. "Awww, how can my Little Gem sleep with empty stomach" , Aliya bent down on her knees and placed her head near saif's stomach " Awww Saif... too many rats are running inside, come come, u should have something... are u okay with chocolate milk shake?", " thank u momma, I like chocolate milkshake " they went to kitchen Aliya made 2 glasses of milkshake one for Saif and another for Sarah. as sarah was sleeping she stored it in freezer.


Saif sat on Aliya's lap and started enjoying his drink.. Sarah who was awake and pretending to be asleep felt jealous of Saif...she sprang up from bed and went to dining room rubbing her eyes with her folded little palms... " Momma, milk shake for me?" Aliya laughed at her and asked her to take it from freezer.. Sarah took out milkshake and looked at it... " Momma, I dnt want chocolate, I want Vanilla flavour.." Aliya shook her head and placed saif in the chair next to her. When she was about get up from chair sarah jumped into Aliya's Lap and started teasing saif showing her both hands, making different sounds, " yeah yehh yeahhh saif I'm in my arm chair, I'm in my chair", Saif looked at her furiously narrowing his eyes..

Aliya turned her michevious daughter to her side and kissed her, " So this is ur plan", " ha ha yes Momma" Sarah kissed Aliya and hugged her holding her milk shake...

Saif was Adamant, he asked sarah to get down they both started fighting for their Arm chair... Aliya's lap is their favourite Arm chair they always fight for it... when ever they fight an acute pain touches Aliy's heart, bcz if zain was with them his lap would be their another favourite arm chair... Twins don't need to fight for this, it would have been perfect...


She Regrets for her decision at times, bcz she feels guilt when ever she thinks she was separating twins from his father... And she doesn't let him know about his kids existence too..

She took responsibility of a father too, she tried her best to fill the Gap, but she knew Zain could have been much better, could hve loved them more, pampered them more, she sighed and shrugged her thoughts thinking it's too late think about...

She settled the issue between saif and Sarah offering them their bed time tales, as she didn't narrate them yesterday nite bcz she was disturbed. They heard stories and slept on both sides of Aliya.. Aliya too slept along with them bcz she didn't sleep that nite..

That's all buddies, I know all of u r very angry at Saif for disturbing Aliya๐Ÿ˜†
Leave him bechara... let me know how it was, waiting for feed back, comment and hit like button๐Ÿ˜› compulsory from all my chudails, I ll not spare any one

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Posted: 10 years ago
I am first๐Ÿฅณ
But last to unres... chorry * kaan pakhad ke *
Amazing update
Awesome fabulous fantabulous superb n everything else
U are a commendable writer
Aww Zain realized his mistake
N phattu Zain is back ๐Ÿ˜†
Zain bring Aaliya white roses was a good gesture but later him throwing that n asking sorry was too good
Proud of my Zain
Zaya saving each other's no as Minnie n gem was so sweet
I actually should hate saif for disturbing Aaliya but he is soo cute that maaf kiya
The present was cuteness overloaded
I absolutely loved it
Continue soon
I seriously can't wait to read Zains
Edited by anaghazaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
HOLA I am second...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Past and present madhu...nice...loved it once again...it was awesome...

ZAIN = SAIF and aloo =Sarah...I like that...

And the PHATOO is back...๐Ÿ˜†...I loved that roses part...Aawww poor ZAIN...SANAM ki DIWANGI mein KYA KYA kar baithta...๐Ÿ˜†

..loved it...the present was fully loaded with cuteness...

Ok if you are free check my FF post in this forum and tell me your view...I will update it after that...๐Ÿ˜†

CONT SOON...
Edited by 786ahf_bi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ZayaILoveU

Ehh...

I really don't like being late in commenting when i have actually liked the chapter very very very much!!!
But i did not sign in for long...
I noticed the chapter just now and read it!!!
Fabulous yaar...
Please continue soon
Eagerly waiting to kow what happens next.
Will zain realise his love for aaliya??
I m eagerly waiting...

Thank u so much for lovely lovely comment,
Commenting lately not a problem๐Ÿ˜›
I love reading comments, something is better than nothing๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: neenzz

Hehe ๐Ÿ˜†
That's perfectly legit, considering u're only 14 ๐Ÿ˜›

Chudails, I too don't know read some where๐Ÿ˜›, so I added it in my ff๐Ÿ˜†
Let's not discuss this, mai Bahuth shareef huuu...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

I am first di ๐Ÿ˜Ž

Dekhliya maine, meri PPC
Di?๐Ÿ˜ฒ Kya hua thujhe๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kunakshafan26

it was lovely!!! ekdum mast i loved it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thank u dear ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya

superb...aww zain jealous 4m zubair...very well written...i guess in next chap confession ๐Ÿ˜† btw i loved it โค๏ธ waiting for d next part cont soon!!!!!!

Thank u deepika for lovely comment๐Ÿ˜Š
Confession Kabhi nay hoga๐Ÿคฃ
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