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Posted: 10 years ago
Unressed on pg. 97
And congratulations girl on crossing 100 pages... partayyy 🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

abhi se mujhe rona aa reha hai

Romance nhi hai tou saif or sarah kaha say aaye... Aasmaan say tapkay?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

@ cucumber welcome🤗

But throw it after cutting😆

Kitni demands hai Madhu
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Chudails peep in, just now one pagal os striked my brain😉

Shall I pen it down?
Os: Revenge😳 kaise hai title😆

Awesome title... and u should definitely pen it down
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: neenzz

Res

***unressing***
Sorry Madhu for being sooo late, I was halfway thru, but my dad brought a new baby home Alhumdulillah (no not my sibling, our new Lexus 🥳) so I just had to go... then my maamoo maami came to our place, he'll keep the baby for two days.. he loves cars, and he's a very fun guy, and we're very close... then we had dinner, watched bigg boss, so i was all caught up. Just finished reading it, and dude it was awesome... yes a bit sad... but overall awesome... jallu Zain finally made an appearance, he finally realized how much he loves her... that kiss... O O O OMG!
Poor Aaliya cried herself to sleep, but I loved how Zain cheered her up. And when he went to her office he told her he was her husband... that ghulaam uncle told him so, and he is... he could have very well said k tumharay abbu ko kya hogya hai, samjhao onko me tumhara shohar nhi hn, but he didn't because somewhere he wanted it to be true, he wanted... um, scratch that... wants her, that's precisely the reason he didn't go to sanam's office. Both were busy, he could have chosen anyone of them, and he chose Aaliya... well, his subconscious did... but it did, right? And then the realization wasn't farther away... I alwaus love Zubbu's entry... he somehow is always the one who brings them closer (in BI, in soulmates, and now here) but if he was barkat's childhood friend too, then how come rehan didn't know him? He went to the same school as barkat and Aaliya, didn't he?
Anyway, I loved it, missed Suraiya and her pasta 😛 and u're amazing girl... update soon
My guess... when Aaliya goes to Zain to clarify things, she'll succumb to Zain's love, they make love, and then the realization will hit her... and hit her hard, and she'll leave?


that's okay not a problem Kiran...
Jaanu...u don't know how much I loved ur comment..
U understand's me very well dear😭 * tears of happiness*
Yes, he could have asked her, about her father's statement, but he was quite...and he himself stated it giving lame excuses throwing blame on Ghulam..

He chose Aliya Against Sanam, he could have gone to sanam's office no, he didn't and leave that tooo, he first called Aliya for outing she denied then only he made call to sanam...

No Rehan is not their child hood friend, only Barkat and Aliya are child hood friends

Zubbu's entry... bechara he ran from there when he saw Angry Zain😆

U guess Aliya will go away after this, how she go, leaving her parents, afterall just now she realised her parents value

About kiss... he did it when he was not in senses, this is going to cost him...
Aliya will not give up, that easily to zain, torture abhi Baaki hi😆 Aur Zain😆 dekho he is phattu As of now... he will still try to love his infatuation
Love u darling... for beautiful comment❤️🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: neenzz

Romance nhi hai tou saif or sarah kaha say aaye... Aasmaan say tapkay?

Ha ha... Romance too much time it ll take, Aliya has to.suffer, Zain has to struggle so much to realise
After this much...it ll happen, but how it all happened, if u know u ll ROFL
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: neenzz

Romance nhi hai tou saif or sarah kaha say aaye... Aasmaan say tapkay?

Ha ha... did u forget what happened between them in island😉, but kiran I love u, u understands my chudail brain..
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
do cont. Soon tnx
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveBeintehaa

awesome update
do cont. Soon tnx

Thank u dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Hey moon...
I'm madhu...
Ur Comment made my morning dear, thank u so much for lovely lovely comment,

Zain was HOH in love with his infactuation..., he tried and is trying to love his infactuation Genuinely, he changed himself a lot for her, but now he dnt need to, he Got someone who ll accept him the way he is... but he just have to realise...

Aliya she was a carefree career oriented girl, but she changed into a matured woman,
At the same time she still tries to be the way she was, she doen't like changing herself for others, she is a chirpy Girl, I ll maintain that, I dnt like people crying all the time.. that's not practically possible to...Afterall she is a Human...but still she is going to suffer a lot...

Once again thank u so much for lovely comment dear...
Btw ur name?


Yup you are right...

Isn't it Bard who had said, " True love doesn't alters when alteration finds"???

What is love if it is NOT unconditional??? U are right again Zain's feelings for Sanam was an infatuation that he mistook as love... What Zain and Aaliya feel for each other is love... Being their for each other and accepting each other with flaws.. This is what I simply love about this ff the most. Also on Zain's part the realization of love is not yet at the conscious level.. It would be a treat to read the awakening dawn on Zain.. The greatest love stories are complicated after all... But again, true love does find its own course hence I do have a faith in love and YOU as well : that this is gonna be one hell of a ride and the end would be worth it..

Hi Madhu, Yasna here...

P.S : Thanks for making me feel good about myself that I made your morning with my comment. The fact is the brilliant os/ss/ff/drabbles writers of the Forum including you make each of my day by catering to my appetite for good readings..
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