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AnnRosewood thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Did i ever confess my undying love fr dis fic..yes dear am being dramatic..bt really ur work is simply amazing..continue soon!
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it was superbbb!!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘... loved jealous and possessive zain๐Ÿ˜ณ...very beautifully written..loved itโค๏ธ
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Madhu first congo on the century ur thread hit!
Loved the chaper!
Fianally Zain did something, subconscious but still atleast he did
Aliya accepted she loves him but yup zain was a gem to her which she had to polish and care for but at the ends it isnt hers do treasure as, if Sanam gets the simple fact or Zai when hes concious, now i can actually connect the dots to the present but want to see hw u do it,

Hopefully u.'ll take me beyond my expectations and leavw no card unturned to impress me! And ur ryt u gotta knw wt the reader thinks, well the reader thinks...GOTTA READ MORE! NOW! Honestly evry time i get halfway thtough the chappy i'm like i need one more now! Whr is it? Hw long? Whn?why? How evrything for the nxt strts from halfway the current! Expectations are high, At last I'm waiting for the next from halfway! So plz dnt make me wait!

P.s only write long comments for u! And only give u the ryts for long ones myt nt write dis much for someone else!

P.p.s Im still waiting for the nxt chappy, soon dear!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wat
Yaar please don't make them get married
I hate to see zain sanam married ๐Ÿ˜ก
Edited by zaya-firdose - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose

๐Ÿ˜†

Wat
Yaar please don't make them get married
I hate to see zain sanam married ๐Ÿ˜ก

Said na no marriage, living together๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
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Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

Did i ever confess my undying love fr dis fic..yes dear am being dramatic..bt really ur work is simply amazing..continue soon!


๐Ÿ˜ญ Even I'm being dramatic Ann, tears of happiness ๐Ÿ˜›
Thank u so much for lovely lovely comment..๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

it was superbbb!!!!๐Ÿ‘... loved jealous and possessive zain๐Ÿ˜ณ...very beautifully written..loved itโค๏ธ

Thank u blue Ruhiii...
Thank u so much for lovely comment๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Originally posted by: zayacrazy

Madhu first congo on the century ur thread hit!

Loved the chaper!
Fianally Zain did something, subconscious but still atleast he did
Aliya accepted she loves him but yup zain was a gem to her which she had to polish and care for but at the ends it isnt hers do treasure as, if Sanam gets the simple fact or Zai when hes concious, now i can actually connect the dots to the present but want to see hw u do it,

Hopefully u.'ll take me beyond my expectations and leavw no card unturned to impress me! And ur ryt u gotta knw wt the reader thinks, well the reader thinks...GOTTA READ MORE! NOW! Honestly evry time i get halfway thtough the chappy i'm like i need one more now! Whr is it? Hw long? Whn?why? How evrything for the nxt strts from halfway the current! Expectations are high, At last I'm waiting for the next from halfway! So plz dnt make me wait!

P.s only write long comments for u! And only give u the ryts for long ones myt nt write dis much for someone else!

P.p.s Im still waiting for the nxt chappy, soon dear!

Sakeenah thank u so much for lovely comment!!!
Yes dear, zain is her Gem, but she feels he is someone's treasure,
She needs to understand anything is fare in love, but will she understand? Hopeless lady..
Aww I'm so overwhelmed with ur comment, u want to read more and more Aww thank u..
Expectations high๐Ÿ˜ฒ, I'm scared!!!! I ll try to reach them๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi there...
This is the first time I'm commenting on any of your work... I had to cause this fff is simply superb..

I loved the light hearteness that was between Zain and Aaliya in the previous chapters.. Then you took it to an entirely different level with the intensity depicted in the latest one.. Kudos!!! Zain's transformation from a guy who gets married for his own selfish reason to a guy who has fallen in true love helplessly was simply praiseworthy; so was Aaliya's trajectories from a girl who agrees for a contract marriage but ends up falling irrevocably in love with her husband... Love is one helluva journey... With difficulties and obstacles but beautiful nevertheless.. Love their journey of a month...

Please update next chapter soon... As Diwali is nearing can I expect some fireworks???!!!! Hey just kidding... I'll be all eyes for the next update which I'm sure will be as beautiful and nail biting like the chapters so far...

Bows to a master story teller for holding me spellbound in each chapter...
Edited by bashful_moon - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bashful_moon

Hi there...

This is the first time I'm commenting on any of your work... I had to cause this fff is simply superb..

I loved the light hearteness that was between Zain and Aaliya in the previous chapters.. Then you took it to an entirely different level with the intensity depicted in the latest one.. Kudos!!! Zain's transformation from a guy who gets married for his own selfish reason to a guy who has fallen in true love helplessly was simply praiseworthy; so was Aaliya's trajectories from a girl who agrees for a contract marriage but ends up falling irrevocably in love with her husband... Love is one helluva journey... With difficulties and obstacles but beautiful nevertheless.. Love their journey of a month...

Please update next chapter soon... As Diwali is nearing can I expect some fireworks???!!!! Hey just kidding... I'll be all eyes for the next update which I'm sure will be as beautiful and nail biting like the chapters so far...

Bows to a master story teller for holding me spellbound in each chapter...

Hey moon...
I'm madhu...
Ur Comment made my morning dear, thank u so much for lovely lovely comment,

Zain was HOH in love with his infactuation..., he tried and is trying to love his infactuation Genuinely, he changed himself a lot for her, but now he dnt need to, he Got someone who ll accept him the way he is... but he just have to realise...

Aliya she was a carefree career oriented girl, but she changed into a matured woman,
At the same time she still tries to be the way she was, she doen't like changing herself for others, she is a chirpy Girl, I ll maintain that, I dnt like people crying all the time.. that's not practically possible to...Afterall she is a Human...but still she is going to suffer a lot...

Once again thank u so much for lovely comment dear...
Btw ur name?
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