zaya ff: Teri meri love story chapter 16update page 127 tiny dose - Page 70

Originally posted by: ZFA_Flower

This update is S.P.E.C.T.A.C.U.L.A.R

Loved and enjoyed it

Beautifully written

I was so lost in it and suddenly u decided to full stop to this chap😡

This update touched my heart

Feeling so bad for Aliya

~My favourite scene~

Passage no.23

Zain pulled her towards him embracing her waist, and looked into her eyes, they were sparkling in moon lit nite with tears, " why are u crying?, u cannot dance with me?, u r not committed ?, " Aliya pleaded him to leave. " what do u think?, how can u dance with someone?,how can someone touch u?" he cupped her face with both hands ..." How can someone else feel u, it should be only me to feel u, it should be only me to touch u, to dance with u" he kissed her on her earlobe making Aliya shiver,

~My favourite dialog

"You are someone else's Treasure safe in my hands, I cannot make use of it, I have no right to use it, my duty is to handover it safely to right person" , she decided to put a Full stop for all these...

It is very beautiful line

So,Zain has finally realised his feelings towards Aliya,at least in subconscious

Continue soon

Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak

Omg zain is jealous...hope he realizes his love soon
Waiting for the next update...

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Darling I donno, this.reply ll be uploaded or not😆 I typed many times

Yeah dear Aliya was.fwwling very bad, I too felt bad for her

Without kit kit they cannot survive na😳

Zain hugging pillow, he is phattu, do u remember once he hugged aliya and said I thought it was my pillow 🤪 and look at him now...phattu...

Zubbu ha ha, oh tho bhaag gay seeing angry zain..

Besharam zain ll come ha ha, zain angry young man😲 phattu hi yaar dekhnaaa

Sanam outing, zaya partying😆

Thank u so mucb for lovely comment darling

phattu Zain cute hai yaar

Originally posted by: zaya.harshika

Outstanding...Amazing...👏

Fabulous update! 👍🏼

Do u know...yesterday I was wondering what will happen next in ur ff n I made zubbu's entry n imagined jallu n possessive zain...😛

Awww poor zaya...n the kiss was awesome yaar!😉

Update soon...will be waiting for ur daily dose!😉

Originally posted by: Ilovezaya

Awesome Madhu 👏
I loved the jealous Zain 😆 😆
Hmmm so now will we get more romance 😉
Update the next chp soon 😊

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

res
unres..
sorry for the late reply of last chappy again..
coming to this..
i really loved this.
as i said zain fell in llove with her...
waiting for the day when he will realise..
he has started outing with her..
a new change in their relationship can be seen..
so u r dragging sanam dear out of the frame..
right?😉
aliya joined office and zain too..
wanted to read the day of lazy lad in office..
for this i am angry with u😡
and the kiss really made me blush in the deepest shade of crimson..😳
continue soon cc

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Thank u Vini😛

Romance😲dekhna, zain is phattu and u r expecting romance😆

Off course we can expect romance because it's "Madhu The Great" 😆 😆 😆
Always coming up with unexpected turns 😉

To any chance 🤣 batao 😆 😆

Aur haa update soon !!

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Amazing update madhu :)
Just loved it <3 <3
Chapter 14 is my favourite !!
Zubair ka tadka hamesha chalta hai ...
I jus luv it wen zain is drunken n jealous !!
Finally zaya kiss <3
M sooo happieee :)
Hope dey confess their luv for each other soon !!
N jus keep dat sanam away from zain lik u did in dis update ;)
Continue fast !!

Lol @ priya u commented twice

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

🤣 U know u commented Twice for last update😆 thanks for that

He ll.realise but not that easily, he is phattu na,

Sanam, only some times I ll use her that's it😉 but very crucial haaa, for Aliya

Y angry, I didn't understand

Seriously it made u blush...😲 I thought of explaining little about their kiss😉 but u know it ll spoil story so I dropped idea and just mentioned wild😆

Thank u my dear PC

lol..
i forgot...
i am angry that u didnot gave the first day at work of lazy lad MR.ZAIN ABDULLAH ...
ya it really made me blush..
waiting for some more romantic moments..