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nafisa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#661

It was awesome , mindblowing luved the intense jealous zain dooo keep writing

I'm now waiting for zain's reactions when he will come to know of what he did ...

Keeppp wrtinggg !! Luved it 😛😉

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katmaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#662

Wow man I love you for this story ...so now now pls pls update fast and the kiss aaahhh so cute

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Rope_of_Hope

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Posted: 10 years ago

#663

wow amazing update👏 loved it to the core..i like this drunken zain kissed aliya 😊very interesting yaar

sorry to ask this pls update soon😊

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Anagha

@Ana_rockz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#664

unressed on pg 96

n i am second 😛

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Kiran

@neenzz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#665

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***unressing***

Sorry Madhu for being sooo late, I was halfway thru, but my dad brought a new baby home Alhumdulillah (no not my sibling, our new Lexus 🥳) so I just had to go... then my maamoo maami came to our place, he'll keep the baby for two days.. he loves cars, and he's a very fun guy, and we're very close... then we had dinner, watched bigg boss, so i was all caught up. Just finished reading it, and dude it was awesome... yes a bit sad... but overall awesome... jallu Zain finally made an appearance, he finally realized how much he loves her... that kiss... O O O OMG!

Poor Aaliya cried herself to sleep, but I loved how Zain cheered her up. And when he went to her office he told her he was her husband... that ghulaam uncle told him so, and he is... he could have very well said k tumharay abbu ko kya hogya hai, samjhao onko me tumhara shohar nhi hn, but he didn't because somewhere he wanted it to be true, he wanted... um, scratch that... wants her, that's precisely the reason he didn't go to sanam's office. Both were busy, he could have chosen anyone of them, and he chose Aaliya... well, his subconscious did... but it did, right? And then the realization wasn't farther away... I alwaus love Zubbu's entry... he somehow is always the one who brings them closer (in BI, in soulmates, and now here) but if he was barkat's childhood friend too, then how come rehan didn't know him? He went to the same school as barkat and Aaliya, didn't he?

Anyway, I loved it, missed Suraiya and her pasta 😛 and u're amazing girl... update soon

My guess... when Aaliya goes to Zain to clarify things, she'll succumb to Zain's love, they make love, and then the realization will hit her... and hit her hard, and she'll leave?

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Ana

@Sobtian...

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#666

Really long.
Nice nd beautiful chapter..
I m glad that u r updating daily..

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#667

Madhu you killed me with your fabulous update

Iam dead yaar

Uff this is an incredible update

Bang on

Firdose is dead because of your outstanding update

Pray for my soul 😎

I loved it to the core

Awesome

Marvelous

Superb

Damn good

Brilliant

Fantastic

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suma madhuri

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Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose
Madhu you killed me with your fabulous update
Iam dead yaar
Uff this is an incredible update
Bang on
Firdose is dead because of your outstanding update
Pray for my soul 😎
I loved it to the core
Awesome
Marvelous
Superb
Damn good
Brilliant
Fantastic
Fantastic fantastic fantastic fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome
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Missing u😕

Thank u darling❤️

U r dead🤪, even me ha ha🤣

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Flower

@ZFA_Flower

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#669

This update is S.P.E.C.T.A.C.U.L.A.R

Loved and enjoyed it

Beautifully written

I was so lost in it and suddenly u decided to full stop to this chap😡

This update touched my heart

Feeling so bad for Aliya

~My favourite scene~

Passage no.23

Zain pulled her towards him embracing her waist, and looked into her eyes, they were sparkling in moon lit nite with tears, " why are u crying?, u cannot dance with me?, u r not committed ?, " Aliya pleaded him to leave. " what do u think?, how can u dance with someone?,how can someone touch u?" he cupped her face with both hands ..." How can someone else feel u, it should be only me to feel u, it should be only me to touch u, to dance with u" he kissed her on her earlobe making Aliya shiver,

~My favourite dialog

"You are someone else's Treasure safe in my hands, I cannot make use of it, I have no right to use it, my duty is to handover it safely to right person" , she decided to put a Full stop for all these...

It is very beautiful line

So,Zain has finally realised his feelings towards Aliya,at least in subconscious

Continue soon

Thanks for the PM

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#670

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose
Hai madhu
Iam back

Aww welcome dear😛

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