zaya ff: Teri meri love story chapter 16update page 127 tiny dose - Page 66

seriously???

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Res...😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Updated, sorry for making u all wait, no power it was ready but no wifi!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I will not throw egg u are a vegetarian na so will throw tomatoes k??? 😉😆😆

tomatoes kisi aur update ke liye this update was awesome

Amazing

Mind blowing fabulous

emotions beautifully portrayed

aaliya weeping in a corner

it must be so difficult for her 😭

aww zaya start thier kit kit again !!

zain remembering their stay in d island & hugging his pillow thinking it was aaliya 😳

zain and aaliya still husband and wife 😃

aaliya knows zain better than sanam !!

zain is a gem he can do anything

phirse zubbu 🤢

uff jealous zain is so hot

urgh... zubbu aaliya dance

besharam zain manghatha u brought angry young man

" You love me when u r Subconscious, but when u r conscious U love only Sanam", "I know it zain, but y u r doing this to me" she silently sobbed hugging her knees. "You are someone else's Treasure safe in my hands, I cannot make use of it, I have no right to use it, my duty is to handover it safely to right person" , she decided to put a Full stop for all these...

😭 😭 😭

OMG poor aaliya

u know i like sanam again cuz of her only zaya could go on outings

unknown dis likeness for zubbu back

Guessing time

considering u are our torture queen i think aaliya will leave zain n go for their good ???

it is a dumb guess i know

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: madhufx9...
Updated, sorry for making u all wait, no power it was ready but no wifi!!!

it's k dude

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: zaya-firdose
Read both the chapters
Chapter ( 12 13 )
Both the chapters are outstanding
Just Iam speechless girl
Fabulous
Emotions, feelings, change in behaviour of zaya are perfectly portrayed
I can imagine the whole story
Marvelous madhu
U are fantastic
I need your autograph now

🤣🤪

Firdose dnt make me Rofl Autograph lol🤣

Thank u so much for lovely comment😆

Acha I missed u dear😭, busy kya.these.days?

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Amazing Update Madhu!!!

Woh sorry mein apni garndparents ke ghar gyi thi jahan internet nhi tha...so late comment

Just saw the scrap n read this update dude!!!

Aww aliya realized but when wil zain realise

And last part was totally bang on with suri aur uski jaan pasta...

Yaha i wil b waiting for next update

Jaldhi jaldhi krna...

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suma madhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Agrata23
madhu excellent eagerly waiting for next update dear😃

Thank u dear, I updated dekho na😛😆

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suma madhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: iluvuzaya
first i am again very late..
i thought i commented...
it was really awesome..
really loved it girl..
emotinal mein bhi itna hasaya toh aage kya hoga..
what i think know zain is falling in love with aliya..
sanam ki entry karva hi di..
was waiting for her only..
suraiya-osman and shabana-ghulam are so good..
loved them a lot..
barkat and aliya scene was nice..
at the end of the chapter i was totally laughing..
hehehe pasta sauce..
love u for this..
thanks for the pm..
continue soon.
and yes update fast warna spamming

Darling u commented🤣 ha ha🤣

Okay thank u for.double comment🤪

Love u too dear

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Beintehaa_ZaYa
Amazing Update Madhu!!!
Woh sorry mein apni garndparents ke ghar gyi thi jahan internet nhi tha...so late comment
Just saw the scrap n read this update dude!!!

Aww aliya realized but when wil zain realise
And last part was totally bang on with suri aur uski jaan pasta...
Yaha i wil b waiting for next update
Jaldhi jaldhi krna...

That's okay not a problem😳

Soon zain to will realise dear😉

Updated dekhna😆

Thank u so much for lovely comment

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi
Res...😃

Wohooo...me first...FINALLY...🥳

Ok first a very looong update..BINA mere pasta SURI ke...😭...ye KYA NAINSAAFI YAAR😆

Second...loved it...another awesome update...I loved that ALIYA asking ZAIN to go get a job part...aw my sweet ALIYA...

Third...JALLU AND POSSESSIVE ZAIN IS BACK...😎...but I still see that PHATTU somewhere😆

Lastly...HAMESHA ZUBBU KO KYUN PHASATI HO YAAR...😆...I mean ZAINs jealousy reaches heights when he sees him...😆...and the last part I felt sad for ALIYA...I remembered that ILU PARTY episode..but that kiss was 😲...and in the end ALIYA...felt so bad for her...

HAMESHA ALOO KO KYUN RULATI Ho...ISKA HISAAB ZAIN KO ZAROOR DENA PADEGA...😆

Ok...LOVED IT OVERALL...AND CONT SOON...

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