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Read both the chapters
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It was so emotional!!!... aliya already loves him..when will zain realise😭... nd last part was superbb😆...Brilliantly written...Loved it❤️...please continue soon...
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Teri meri love story
Chapter 14

Hello all, here is the next update, it's lengthy, okay I feel it's lengthy😆
Let me know how it is... I planned something, but output was different, okay let me know, if u r feeling that I'm dragging too much😛




Barkat left to her office after dropping Aliya. Gulam and shabhana are happy to see their daughter home... Gulam asked Aliya to work in his office for few days to gain experience, Aliya accepted happily...and said she ll be attending from tomorrow.

She left to her room, she was feeling new and uneasy to stay in her own room which she was using from years... she started unpacking stuff..,

Flooding emotions in her heart were not allowing her to concentrate on anything... she felt weak.. she dropped on her knees at one corner of room and weeped silently...

His immaculacy , his Genuinity in his love for Sanam, his Affection and care for her, His immaculate behaviour when they were together everything, every thing about him made her to fall for him.. she liked teasing him, she loved him, when he was irritated bcz of her, she loved fighting, arguing with him.. she felt he is a Gem.. but she was helpless, she cannot ditch her friend, she promised her friend she will stand on words and will Return him to her.. But she didn't knew at that point , pain in loosing a very precious Rare Gem..

She was feeling only emptiness around her and she could sense the upcoming Emptiness in her future.. she simply laid down at one corner of floor weeped her heart out . Shabhana who witnessed her daughters state decided to talk wit Gulaam.


Zain came to Aliya's house and wished shabhana and Gulam. He asked them about Aliya, "she is in her Room Zain, unpacking her stuff..", " Can I go and meet her aunty?", " Sure zain". They showed him her room... He knocked and waited for her to open, she didn't open, door was not locked so he entered hesitently.. he saw Aliya lying on floor, he soon approached her and called out for Shabhana for help

She opened her eyes and saw shabana, Gulam and zain were sitting around her. She wants to behave normally, bcz she don't want to loose their friendship atleast.

" Zain, what are u doing here? , when did u come?", " I should ask u that, why are u sleeping here, on Floor?", " I was tired, I dnt know when I fell asleep.." Replied Aliya trying to make up situation. Shabhana and Gulaam were quite and listening to their conversation. " I still remember, the first day of our marriage u said me, that u ll sleep only on ur king size bed? And now y are u sleeping here?". Mocked zain . " May be, my Island habit". Aliya winked her eyes with smiling face. "Island habits? Lol, ha ha, Pagal, so u r going to eat Fish too here after...?" , " God, FISH never, never Zain, I cannot have it". she expressed her hatred for it with her horrified face. zain laughed at her. Shabhana and Gulam were totally confused with these two... She took rest for some time, Zain waited for her. They went to lawyer and filed a petition for divorce. They went out had lunch, watched a movie and returned to their home's.


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"Aliya when did u come, was it too cool yesterday nite ,u came to hug me" zain opened his eyes in morning and saw himself hugging a pillow, he realised it's not Aliya, it's his pillow and they are not at Island, scratching his head in displeasure, he took out his phone and dialed her number.
" Good morning Aliya!!!", " Good morning, but it's not morning, it's almost noon", " oh, I'm sorry, I just woke up, what are u doing?, any plans for today?". " No, Zain I'm in office, first day of my work, little excited, ll go later", "BYE" replied Zain feeling disappointed. He called Sanam and asked her same, he got the same answer.


He went to Aliya's office, he saw Aliya's father... " Hi zain, u r here,?" " hi uncle, yes I came to meet Aliya", " she is in that cabin, going through some files!!", " Uncle if u dnt mind, can I take her out, today it's her first day only right, half day work is enough, pls uncle", Gulam patted his shoulder and smiled ,
" u dnt need to ask me, she is still ur wife, divorce is not yet granted" Gulam walked away...leaving an amused Zain. " HUSBAND, okay".

He walked into the cabin and saw Aliya with her secretary, Aliya Was surprised, he took seat infront of her and was looking at both of them. Aliya was asking for some file to verify it. Zain stopped secretary and said her to bring tomorrow, secretary looked at Aliya seeking for some response, " I'm telling u, we both are going out, today ur Madam and her husband are going out, so get it tomorrow ", " Zain, r u mad, my husband? ", " Yes, it's me, Gulam uncle said, I'm ur husband, till we get divorce"
zain smirked at her, Aliya shook her head and asked secretary to leave. Zain dragged her out with him.

They came to restuarant, waiter gave them menu card, Zain asked Aliya place order, Aliya Ordered food, Zain was surprised " Hey everything is my favourite ", " I know and that's y I ordered". " this much about me even Sanam does not know " , " Zain, I stayed with u 1month, so I'll know right". Zain smiled to her. " hey does Sanam know's that u r out with me?", " No, she doesn't know, I asked her, she was busy, and what's wrong u r my Best friend, u r also part of my life, she needs to know it", Aliya was silent. " Anyways, u r there to protect me na, if she gets angry ", zain gave her a mischevious smile. Aliya nodded her head in disbelieff...


A week passed like this, Aliya went twice to zain's home to meet Suraiya and Barkat. Zain was getting bored, there are no friends, everyone are busy, he use to talk with Aliya in evening, no much outing too...

"Aliya I'm getting bored, everyone has something to do, everyone are busy, including u, u know sanam mocked me bcz I'm jobless, I just asked her to spend little time with me... even u r working but u are allocating little time for me... ", " Zain, should not compare us, when am I giving time, u r taking my time". Zain was silent and little confused too, "It's high time, u should join in office, Osman uncle too will feel happy..., In our batch everyone is working except u, and about sanam's words, yes no girl will like her husband, if he is Jobless, even though u r Rich, no girl will like to ask money from her in laws for every need, not only Sanam even I dnt like, if my husband is like that..." Zain was silent for few minutes. " Okay Aliya I ll join", Aliya felt very happy and wished him. " But Aliya, will I be able to work...?" Aliya simply smiled to him. " you are a Gem Zain, U ll work, it ll be little tough for u in the beginning but, u ll adjust for It I know." Zain smiled to her and left from there to meet his Dad. He met his Dad and said about his decision, Osman was very glad on hearing this , he know's who might be behind this change in him.

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Next Day Zain went to Office, with so much difficulty he worked for 8 hours. He called Barkat, Rehan and Aliya for a get together, bcz it's his first day in office... Sanam was not present bcz she was on onsite... Rehan and Barkat were shocked bcz Zain started going to office... they were talking about his first day experience... Suddenly some tapped on Aliya's shoulder , Aliya turned back and was pleasantly surprised to see zubair, Zubair was Barkat and Aliya's childhood friend they introduced him to Rehan and zain, they talked for sometime, barkat teased Zubair saying how he use to have crush on Aliya Every was laughing except zain, he was silent... feeling embarassed Aliya asked them to leave that topic. Barkat said she was committed with Rehan, zubair asked About Aliya she was silent for few seconds and replied " No, not yet".

After few minutes of conversation music started playing and interested couple were dancing, zubair asked aliya for a dance, she agreed, Zain didn't like it at all... Barkat and Rehan were noticing every change in zain's expressions carefully, they were enjoying Jealous zain, zain kept staring at Zubair and Aliya... they started dancing for music, Zain clinched his fists with anger and grabbed a glass of wine from near by counter. " Barkat, I think it's Going to be Fun", " Yes Rehan, I'm very excited"


zain ordered for more 3- 4 glasses, barkat asked Rehan to stop zain, But rehan didn't stop him... Zain walked to zubair and Aliya and stood infront of them, Aliya who was feeling Uneasy to dance moved little away "May I have the pleasure of dancing with my Wife" Zain said politely in a strained tone. Zubair was bewildered, " are u both married?", " oh...oh.. actually Zubair it's little complicated, it's a contract marriage not a Normal marriage " Aliya tried to explain... " whatever or however at this moment ur my wife" Zain looked at her with blood shot eyes, which made Aliya scared. Zubair excused from there thinking it's their peronal... Aliya looked at Barkat and Rehan, but they pretended looking at something else.

Zain grabbed her into his arms and made her dance with him, Aliya struggled to escape, but Zain was adamant and didn't let her go.. somehow Aliya made her free from his clutch and ran out from there...


She was standing in the middle of garden and was crying silently...she decided to leave from there and started moving towards her Car, Zain blocked her way and walked towards her... Aliya got scared looking at him, he was looking wild, his flint Gaze was targeting prey infront of him, he stood exactly infront of her, towering her, Aliya collected courage to speak out.. " Zain I think I should go, it's getting late".

Zain pulled her towards him embracing her waist, and looked into her eyes, they were sparkling in moon lit nite with tears, " why are u crying?, u cannot dance with me?, u r not committed ?, " Aliya pleaded him to leave. " what do u think?, how can u dance with someone?,how can someone touch u?" he cupped her face with both hands ..." How can someone else feel u, it should be only me to feel u, it should be only me to touch u, to dance with u" he kissed her on her earlobe making Aliya shiver, " for God sake Zain leave me, u r not in ur senses, this not correct". Aliya pushed back Zain little Away, he pulled her towards him , caught hold of her head and kissed her lips wildly, Aliya was shocked at his sudden action, kiss was so deep and wild , it made her understand how angry he was she felt weak in her knees and started feeling dizzy, she pushed him away using all her strength...she left from there and rode back to her house.

She silently went to her room locked it and dropped down on her knees and started crying...

" You love me when u r Subconscious, but when u r conscious U love only Sanam", "I know it zain, but y u r doing this to me" she silently sobbed hugging her knees. "You are someone else's Treasure safe in my hands, I cannot make use of it, I have no right to use it, my duty is to handover it safely to right person" , she decided to put a Full stop for all these...


That's all buddies, now tell me how it was, any guesses, what's going to happen next
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