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Posted: 10 years ago
I don't know from where I should start .
I have read all the parts and its beyond awesome . am running shorts of words to describe ur work .. ok here I go
sarah and saif are so cute .. looking forward to see their bonding with Zain .. am excited for ZaYa's face off after 6 years ..
Zain with sanam 😭🤢 I wanted to describe about each chapter how I felt by reading but I am lazy to type
all the chapters r amazing . I loved each and every chapter . adjectives r not enough to describe ur work ..
chapter 13 made me cry but pasta scene was hilarious lol
am excited to read how the story will unfold ..
can't wait to read next part . please do update soon
. hats off to you 👏👏 keep writing more on ZaYa 😳
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Sobtian... thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb chapter..
Pasta part was awesome.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice chapter !!
M sooo happiee dat zain has developed feelings for aliya :)
N aliya is rele vry matured n kind !!
Dnt make zain n sanam marry pls...
I cant c zanam at all :(
Keep updating regularly lik dis :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

Res...

UNRES...yes now I completed reading...😆

YAAR first time I cried with ALIYA...awww...that is the real ALIYA...sweet and considerate...😳

SANAM ka DIWANA ko KYA kar diya TUMne...😆You know the current montage of BI...I think ZAIN is the one in b/w here...🤣

Loved it overall...first time I see you have written this so serious...AUR END MEIN KYA THA YAAR...PASTA KA TADKA...🤣...

Ah my SURI...the way she said will you visit me again...I went awww...😆

Cont soon...
Btw...Didn't you read my previous comment...😕😆


Hubby, first I'm extremely sorry,
Lagta hai hamari dosti mai zareena aur Rehan ki khala saaya padgay,
I typed reply almost 20 times, but every time it dint upload, I don't know whether this too will upload or not hope fully😭

Okay chapter 12 reply:

I was rofling visualising ur dp rose rofling while updating 🤣 , I donno u na🤪
U know life of pie there hero ll give fish to tiger here our hero ll give fish to Dog🤪

Okay chapter 13 reply

Yeah first time I wrote seriously, oh I made u cry😃 thank u thank u
End me pasta ka TADKA, I should make u all laugh na😆
Aww u visualised montage God🤣🤗
Suri my saifu ma crush😳 u know
God now pls...I completed typing, pls plss madad karo😆


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...


Hubby, first I'm extremely sorry,
Lagta hai hamari dosti mai zareena aur Rehan ki khala saaya padgay,
I typed reply almost 20 times, but every time it dint upload, I don't know whether this too will upload or not hope fully😭

Okay chapter 12 reply:

I was rofling visualising ur dp rose rofling while updating 🤣 , I donno u na🤪
U know life of pie there hero ll give fish to tiger here our hero ll give fish to Dog🤪

Okay chapter 13 reply

Yeah first time I wrote seriously, oh I made u cry😃 thank u thank u
End me pasta ka TADKA, I should make u all laugh na😆
Aww u visualised montage God🤣🤗
Suri my saifu ma crush😳 u know
God now pls...I completed typing, pls plss madad karo😆



Hainaaa uploaded
I'm dancing😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...


Hubby, first I'm extremely sorry,
Lagta hai hamari dosti mai zareena aur Rehan ki khala saaya padgay,
I typed reply almost 20 times, but every time it dint upload, I don't know whether this too will upload or not hope fully😭

Okay chapter 12 reply:

I was rofling visualising ur dp rose rofling while updating 🤣 , I donno u na🤪
U know life of pie there hero ll give fish to tiger here our hero ll give fish to Dog🤪

Okay chapter 13 reply

Yeah first time I wrote seriously, oh I made u cry😃 thank u thank u
End me pasta ka TADKA, I should make u all laugh na😆
Aww u visualised montage God🤣🤗
Suri my saifu ma crush😳 u know
God now pls...I completed typing, pls plss madad karo😆



😆...CURSE YOU ZARI REHAN...I think our love for SURI must be one of the reasons...😕😆

I did not watch life of pi...but I am sure dreaming about LIFE OF ZAIN here...😆...PHASA DIYA DONO KE BEECH...

I see you are SHAZIA type...serious situation mein be comedy lana...I mean that salt thing dude...😆


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hiranrocks

I don't know from where I should start .

I have read all the parts and its beyond awesome . am running shorts of words to describe ur work .. ok here I go
sarah and saif are so cute .. looking forward to see their bonding with Zain .. am excited for ZaYa's face off after 6 years ..
Zain with sanam 😭🤢 I wanted to describe about each chapter how I felt by reading but I am lazy to type
all the chapters r amazing . I loved each and every chapter . adjectives r not enough to describe ur work ..
chapter 13 made me cry but pasta scene was hilarious lol
am excited to read how the story will unfold ..
can't wait to read next part . please do update soon
. hats off to you 👏👏 keep writing more on ZaYa 😳

Thank u So much Hiran😳
U cried😭, even me
Pasta😆 u know I'm nuts
Zain with sanam🤢 mujhe bi aisa lagraa🥱
Thank u so much my dear for lovely wonderful comment
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sobtian...

Superb chapter..
Pasta part was awesome.

Aanya dear, thank u so much
Pasta t😲, anything for my dearu's😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Nice chapter !!
M sooo happiee dat zain has developed feelings for aliya :)
N aliya is rele vry matured n kind !!
Dnt make zain n sanam marry pls...
I cant c zanam at all :(
Keep updating regularly lik dis :)

Thank.u so much Nazmin for lovely comment😳
Yes he developed feelings for her😳, but still he is a confused soul, 😆
It takes time for him to come to a conclusion😉
U can't see zanam🤣 even me🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi


😆...CURSE YOU ZARI REHAN...I think our love for SURI must be one of the reasons...😕😆

I did not watch life of pi...but I am sure dreaming about LIFE OF ZAIN here...😆...PHASA DIYA DONO KE BEECH...

I see you are SHAZIA type...serious situation mein be comedy lana...I mean that salt thing dude...😆


Allah😲 shazia😆, okay thank u
Yeah our love for suri
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