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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: neenzz

Is it freedom or Frieda pinto? I always thought it was Frieda
Wow u have a dog... they scare me... cats too, but as long as mere aas paas nhi aarhi, and ghr may khuli nhi ghoom rhi, woh ghr may reh skti hai... but dog is a big no no...
10 rabbits 🤣🤣 how many did u and ur sister buy? I really hoping u say more than 2
Yeah... perfect couple... deserve each other... lol
Lol... Zainu halat was still much better than pi's... and he had his Aaliya to accompany him..
Madhu flashback end kb hoga? Zain ko sarah and saif ka such kb pata lagega? That one would be epic

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We bought 2 rabbits🤣, yes perfect couple yaar🤣
We are not even half way of flash back, but I ll come to present some times to show zain and kids bonding and Aliya's different.shades😆
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FAbulous yaar...u r a brilliant writer..nd am loving this..I could actually place myself in Aaliya's shoes,when she was scared f dat wild dog..
there's a small request..in the future updates,can u make them ponder over d moments that they had spent..even if dey want 2 forget it..and some accidental romantic moments...please.. if only its possible:)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

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We bought 2 rabbits🤣, yes perfect couple yaar🤣
We are not even half way of flash back, but I ll come to present some times to show zain and kids bonding and Aliya's different.shades😆


Knly two produced 10... Ya Allah!
Yeah that would be great :)
I actually went over ch 1-3 just to refresh, and I was wondering Aaliya ki yeh raat kitni lambi hai... Kitnay saarat din ka ek he raat may soch liya
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Knly two produced 10... Ya Allah!
Yeah that would be great :)
I actually went over ch 1-3 just to refresh, and I was wondering Aaliya ki yeh raat kitni lambi hai... Kitnay saarat din ka ek he raat may soch liya


Kiran🤪 Aliya ki raat lambi hi🤣

Acha okay update is ready, shall I update?
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Update is ready, shall I update😉


Yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai?
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Update is ready, shall I update😉

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Kiran🤪 Aliya ki raat lambi hi🤣

Acha okay update is ready, shall I update?


Yes, definitely... Naiki or pooch pooch
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Teri meri love story
Chapter 13

Hello all, here u go with next update, let me know how it was, bcz it's new for me writing emotions and all😛, I hope u ll like reading it, ignore typo's😳 plsss..

After having Dinner, they went to their suit, all were sitting together, shabhana, Gulaam, Osman and Suraiya were explaining them how scared they were about them, how they searched for them, Zain and Aliya felt bad for their parents...

Rehan and Sanam came to their suit, Sanam started shouting.at zain " I said u, I said u not to go Honeymoon with Aliya, but u didn't listen to me, where were u, I was so scared for u, what's wrong with u, y don't u listen to me" , Zain tried to control her...their parents were little shocked and confused about her outburst. " Did Something happen between u And Aliya?". Zain became numb for a moment and he tried to explain her, gripping his fears about her reaction for truth... Suddenly Aliya stepped in to their conversation stopping zain.


" Sanam, nothing like that happened between us, we were struck there badly, and we were out of contact with everyone". But Sanam didn't listen to Aliya and was continuously accusing them. Aliya dragged sanam to middle of Room ..she decided to reveal truth about their marriage to parents.. Zain tries to stop her, but she didn't listen to him... " No, zain we cannot cheat our parents Anymore, we realised value of our parents, they love us so much, they will understand our situation, they will forgive us, but we ll not cheat them, " zain stood at the place where he was and was looking at Aliya with perplexed eyes.. She explained everything about their marriage, Zain's love to Sanam, her priorities in her life everything.. " we did mistakes, we agree pls Forgive us, we Reproached so much during our stay in Island, we came to know ur value, we were scared that we can ever see u all, by God's grace we are here with u all again, so please understand us, understand their love for each other" pleaded Aliya holding tears which were pooled when saying last line... Shabhana And Gulaam who were scared for her daughter, who prayed for her daughter safety since 10 days realised nothing is important for them other than their daughters happiness. They felt happy atleast she is Alive and. She is with them . They forgave her and said sorry for not understanding her. Aliya hugged her parents with tears of happiness as well as Pain..


Osman and Suraiya too forgave zain and accepted for his marriage with Sanam, they blessed both of them. Sanam thanked Aliya and hugged her for helping her, Aliya hugged her back with assuring smile..and she walked away.

Zain followed her, who was followed by, Rehan, Barkat and Sanam... zain held Aliya's wrist and stopped her " Why did u do that, so suddenly , u could have talked with me first.." Aliya smiled and replied him " Now nothing happened, see even one month got over, u r free from me Zain, and even ur marriage is fixed" zain was silent. " aren't u happy, I know there ll be no boundaries ". " oh yeah, I'm very happy actually, thanks a lot Aliya for settling this Issue easily" Aliya smiled to him and went to her room.

Zain stood there with confusion, y he was not very happy, Sanam cam to him and hugged him from back side, she expressed her happiness, zain was silent she kissed him on his shoulder, Zain felt uneasy with her touch and just moved away, " I'm drowsy, feeling tired,I need to sleep" and he just walked away.


Barkat and Rehan who was witnessing this was little socked and confused, bcz zain never left any chance to Romance with her . They looked at each other in confusion. " Rehan it seems equations are changed, we need to find out", Rehan nodded his head in Disbelief. Rehan left to meet Zain and Barkat to meet Aliya.


Barkat entered Aliya's room, she saw Aliya sitting in Balcony and was staring at empty sky... " Aliya what are u looking at, there is nothing, sky is empty, No Stars, No Moon" Aliya who was going through endless cosmic emotions, which she recognised few minutes earlier when she was asking their parents to accept zain and Sanam's love, gave a Faint smile to Barkat. " So are u happy, u r father is ready to make investment for u, u can start a company of ur own" Aliya nodded her head, gripping back emotions flowing in her body.


She started staring at empty dark sky again. She a felt resemblance of her future with empty dark sky... there are no stars and Moon which is making sky scary and dark... there can never be stars and moon in her life again, which ll make her life Empty, Dark... she cannot do anything bcz she know's he cannot love her and she cannot cheat her friend tooo.. she decided to throw all these emotions and feelings into endless dark empty sky where no one can come across them.


Barkat who was studying her expressions tried to bring her out of what she was going through...
" hello... where are u?". Aliya hugged her and silently sobbed holding back her tears... " No, where dear, I missed u so much these many days". , " Even I missed u Aliya, it's been many days". " u know barkat, we were talking about u, but Zain is very bad, he took Rehan's side, but I supported u only..." Aliya smiled to her. " So u both fought there tooo...". "FOUGHT" " u, know most of time we were arguing on every stupid thing, u know I teased him so much, he was so irritated, he teased me back tooo, but ur brother is Good", " Zain teased u,?" , " yes, he is bad at times" Aliya made a fake angry face. Barkat laughed with confusion.


Rehan went to Zain's room and saw him walking in room. " hi Zain, how are u? So are u happy?", " happy for what?", " ur marriage with Sanam..." , " I donno yaar, y I'm not very happy, I always wanted this, but... ". " u r not happy to marry Sanam?" Rehan asked in confusion... " No yaar, I'm very happy but what about Aliya?", " what's about her?" Rehan asked trying to read his mind.
" I mean she ll become alone..." , "but it was her choice, she dnt want to marry now, y are u feeling bad for her...? ", " I don't know Rehan, I ll get married to Sanam, U and Barkat ll be busy and u both too ll get married soon what about her?, who ll take care of her? ". , " yaar u r thinking so much, y she ll be alone, she ll go her home, her parents ll take care of her, and she ll get married after succeeding in her business". Zain kept quiet . " yes u are right, I'm thinking unnecessarily.."


After coming back to India, Aliya went to their room in Barkat villa and started packing her luggage... zain entered room and was confused on seeing aliya Packing her luggage.

he grabbed her wrist and turned her back to face him, "are u leaving..?", "yes", " but y... I mean y now?, we didn't file for divorce yet...", " what's the use of staying here, what should I do, every know's the truth..., we don't need to act, for anyone, so I'm leaving". " but atleast go tomorrow Aliya plss..." Aliya smiled and accepted to stay for that nite but she continued her packing...


Aliya went to suraiya and returned her necklace which she gave on the day of reception. Suraiya Asked her to keep it with her, but Aliya said no and asked her to give it to Sanam. Suraiya was silent for few minutes... " mom, I know u r confused about Sanam, but trust me she is good and she loves Zain so much...they ll be happy...", " what about u Aliya, u too love him right...". Aliya froze for a second, she composed her self and replied her that she doesn't love him... " I m sorry mom, sorry for cheating u all..." Aliya hugged suraiya trying to control her feelings... " it's okay dear, mistake is with us too and I think u ll never forget me, u ll come to visit me Right..." suraiya asked her with teary eyes. Aliya said yes and left from there...


Zain entered room and searched for Aliya, she was nowhere in room, he asked Servant about Aliya, servant replied that she was in Barkat's room. Zain knocked door of Barkat room, waited for it to open, barkat opened Door, Zain smiled to Barkat and asked her about Aliya. " Zain she is sleeping, I think she is totally tired after packing" replied barkat. " But, y is she sleeping with you, here?", "Zain, where else she ll sleep, now everyone know's u both are not husband and wife" Replied yawning barkat closing door on his face. Zain left from there, thinking he is a fool...


Next morning after freshing up Zain went to barkat's room and he didn't find both Barkat and Aliya... he went to kitchen and he asked his mom about, Barkat and Aliya... " Barkat along with Aliya went to her home, Barkat went to help her, her luggage was heavy, so Aliya asked Barkat to accompaign her." Replied suraiya adding Pasta sauce 😛. Zain felt disappointed and left from there. " where are u going zain" asked his mom sauting pasta😆, " I'm going out mom", " To meet sanam?" Questioned suraiya inhaling aroma of Pasta😆😆, " No mom, I'm Going to Aliya's home...". Bottle full of salt fell in pasta on hearing this,😆😆😆 she was shocked, confused and happy.

P.s. Dnt scold me for last scene, socha, today there was no kit kit at all, so I added that, just to make u all laugh..🤣, bear with my nuts brain😛

That's all, now.let me know how it was.. comment and hit like button plsss pretty plsss

Edited by madhufx9... - 10 years ago
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