zaya ff: Teri meri love story chapter 16update page 127 tiny dose - Page 54

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sobtian...

Superb update..
Loved d dog part.

Thank u Aanyaa😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Res

Dude will unres tum
Mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai

I ll wait😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

My name is nazmin ...
M eagerly waitin for next part ..
But do zain and sanam get married later ??
Honeymoon was beautifully written as in d island was nyc and plus dey even came close ova der n even got to noe each other

Dear, u ll know in just few more updates😉, thoda suspense
Yes for that reason only,i created that horrendous situation in their island
They should know each other, it ll not happen if they are st home😆
Thank u Nazmin for lovely comment😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ZFA_Flower

This update is S.P.L.E.D.I.D

M.A.G.N.I.F.I.C.E.N.T
Awesome
You really have tortured them so much, poor ZaYa
~My favourite scene~
First passage
Next day they made a small hut with the help coconut tree leaves, to protect themselves from hot sun during daytime. They learnt to live in Island.
They were worried about how their parents are, their parents don't know where they are. " Zain u fool!!!" zain looked at her sudden outburst... " y what happened" " y did u fell down from stairs, when dad informed us abt her honeymoon to switzerland" zain was totally confused and unable understand what she was talking about. " u know, in switzerland, there is no Island, there are no such isolated places, now look, where we are..., I dnt know whether we ll go back or not". she bursted out with broken voice..tears started rolling down her cheeks. Zain wrapped his hand around her shoulder and pulled her for a side hug, wiping her tears with his other hand. " how would I know dear, I'm not a an astrologer to predict all these, and who knows there too we might struck somewhere in killing snow,". Aliya looked at him in disbelief " No zain, Island is far better than snow". She shivered at the thought of being struck in snow. She thanked Zain for falling down from stairs. Zain laughed at her innocence.
~My favourite dialog
" Now ll u give me food I'm dammm hungry, I'm feeling weak tooo" said Aliya dramatically to make situation lite. Zain laughed at Drama queen infront him... they had food and again started waiting for cruise...
When r u going to send them home they r missing their home so much
Continue soon
Can u Plzzz send me PM after u update the next chap


Thank u dear for lovely comment😳, missed ur comments so much😛
Pakka I ll sendpm.dear, lil busy that's y I didn't send
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lol that was so funny
Specially e part about the dog
Nice part overall
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hahaha awesome yaar !
Tu hame pagal bana ke hi choregi 😆
My part also included where

Update soon next part 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ilovezaya

Hahaha awesome yaar !
Tu hame pagal bana ke hi choregi 😆
My part also included where

Update soon next part 😉

Fish part yaar, life of pie, he will give fish to tiger
Her our zaya ll give to Dog🤣
Thank u for lovely comment dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woww I love it
Plz do cont. Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
***unressing***
But it was hilarious. So, i definitely will say that... lol
As soon as I reached the end "mast magan" started playing... and it seems like the perfect song for that moment... like when they were only talking to eaxh other ignoring everyine else 😛

I hate dogs... actually, i hate pets. My sister calls me heartless, I don't even let her cat near me... and her cat was the reason i couldn't enjoy our recent trip to Orlando, neither did i let my parents enjoy 😛 I was continously bugging them about the cat... like i won't share the room with it and it Aksa (my sister) should go in maamoo's car... like me q billi k liye apni car choru?
Mene tou new ipad ki demand bhi ki, billi k saath janay k liye... ggr aanay k baad dad ne mera old ipad bhi lay liya 😔
Ya Allah... dekho me poora topic say bhatak gayi... itni pagal hn may... tauba
So, dog... yeah that part was hilarious, esp when Aaliya threw stones at it 🤣
It's good they were stranded on that island, they got to know more about each other, talk about their past... be honest about everything with each other.
Coconut water... abhi Aaliya has grown tried of it, but aagay yeh oski favorite drink bun jaayega na?
Just imagine Zain supporting Rehan now 🤣 🤣
I know baba ur rehaan is different, but imaging that just made me laugh

Oh and imagine our vegetarian harshu carrying a fish😆... I don't think he'll ever do it
Edited by neenzz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Kiran it won't be that torturous, our zain's approach to her shades will be different😳, trust me u r going to fall for this zain more
But we are not half way of story too dear, too much is there😆, their bonding is going to be fevicol bonding u know😳😆
🤣 U forgot story, she stays at Masoori with her kids na, in first 2 updates it's there na😆 and Zain with Sanam😕🤢

Oh yeah, forgot that was masoori 😛
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