Originally posted by: Sobtian...
Superb update..
Loved d dog part.
Originally posted by: Sobtian...
Superb update..
Loved d dog part.
My name is nazmin ...
M eagerly waitin for next part ..
But do zain and sanam get married later ??
Honeymoon was beautifully written as in d island was nyc and plus dey even came close ova der n even got to noe each other
Originally posted by: ZFA_Flower
This update is S.P.L.E.D.I.D
M.A.G.N.I.F.I.C.E.N.TAwesomeYou really have tortured them so much, poor ZaYa~My favourite scene~First passageNext day they made a small hut with the help coconut tree leaves, to protect themselves from hot sun during daytime. They learnt to live in Island.They were worried about how their parents are, their parents don't know where they are. " Zain u fool!!!" zain looked at her sudden outburst... " y what happened" " y did u fell down from stairs, when dad informed us abt her honeymoon to switzerland" zain was totally confused and unable understand what she was talking about. " u know, in switzerland, there is no Island, there are no such isolated places, now look, where we are..., I dnt know whether we ll go back or not". she bursted out with broken voice..tears started rolling down her cheeks. Zain wrapped his hand around her shoulder and pulled her for a side hug, wiping her tears with his other hand. " how would I know dear, I'm not a an astrologer to predict all these, and who knows there too we might struck somewhere in killing snow,". Aliya looked at him in disbelief " No zain, Island is far better than snow". She shivered at the thought of being struck in snow. She thanked Zain for falling down from stairs. Zain laughed at her innocence.~My favourite dialog" Now ll u give me food I'm dammm hungry, I'm feeling weak tooo" said Aliya dramatically to make situation lite. Zain laughed at Drama queen infront him... they had food and again started waiting for cruise...When r u going to send them home they r missing their home so muchContinue soonCan u Plzzz send me PM after u update the next chap
Originally posted by: Ilovezaya
Hahaha awesome yaar !
Tu hame pagal bana ke hi choregi 😆
My part also included where
Update soon next part 😉
Originally posted by: madhufx9...
Kiran it won't be that torturous, our zain's approach to her shades will be different😳, trust me u r going to fall for this zain moreBut we are not half way of story too dear, too much is there😆, their bonding is going to be fevicol bonding u know😳😆🤣 U forgot story, she stays at Masoori with her kids na, in first 2 updates it's there na😆 and Zain with Sanam😕🤢
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