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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Nice update
Waiting for d next part
Zaya getting close!!
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Finally zeeshan exposed...
Continue it asap
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TEASER for CHAPTER 7

Zain and Surraiya are invited at haider's house for dinner.
So,Zain left ealier from office.
And aaliya was on her way to home.
Zain and surraiya reach their house.
Shabana:ZAIN!!!!!!!!
Zain:Kya hua aunty?
Ghulam:Zain...woh Aaliya nahi aayi ghar...uska phone bhi nahi lag rha...woh office se nikli par ghar nahi aayi...Woh jaroor kisi musibat mein phasi hain
Surraiya:Ghulam shab aap chinta mat kareye ZAIN dhundega aaliya ko...Jao ZAIN
Zain leaves form there...he is running fast...trying her phone but no one is answering.
Where is Aaliya???What happened to her???
Will Zain be able to find her???
To know more stay tuned...
#BEINTEHAA
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"Yahan bhi hoga...wahan bhi hoga...
KYA???
Mera hi Jalwa...Mera hi Jalwa!!"
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Chapter 7

A new morning at haider's house.
Ghulam:Waise...aaliya tumne bataya nahi ki Zain tumhara dost hai...
Aaliya:haan...woh mere saath office mein kam karta hai.
Shabana:Acha...
Both shabana and ghulam gave a smile to each other.
Aaliya:aap dono kuch bhi mat sochiye...hum sirf dost hain.
Ghulam:Achhaa
Aaliya:Abbu...huh...ja rahi hoon.
She left for office,while Ghulam is thinking of Zain as his son-in-law.
Ghulam:kitna achaa miya hai woh...aaliya ki kitni chinta hai use...
Mai use aaliya ke pass lani ki koshish karunga.
Aaliya was travelling in a auto.
She was thinking about Zain.
Aaliya:Woh jabse aaya hai tabse zindigi patani itni badal si kyu gayi hain...patani achanak se jor jor si hava chalne lagti hai...Patani kyun jab main uske saath hoti ho to mujhe aacha lagta...man karta hain main uske saath hi rahoon...par kyun??
Kya mujhe use pyaar hogaya hai??
Pagal hai aaliya!!!!!Tu aur woh kabhi nahi...
Auto Driver: Madam aapka stop aagaya..
Aaliya:jee bhaiya...yeh li jeye.
While here Zain has already reached.
Zain with his group of friends:
Rahul:Wah bhai...tune to pata li aur batayi bhi nahi...
Zain:Kya bol raha hai??Aur kisko patalia??
Rahul:Zyada bhola mata ban...wahi Aaliya...humari hone wali bhabhi!!
Zain:Ohh...chup rahe woh sirf meri dost hain...
Rahul:koi baat ni bhai...mat kar accept par...tu usse pyar jaroor karta hai...
Aaliya enters...comes near Zain.
Aaliya:Good morning Zain!
Rahul hits him with his hand
Aa gayi bhabhi...
Zain:Good morning!
Aaliya:Woh mujhe...tumse alag se baat karni thi..kya main kar sakti hoon??
Rahul:Hann haan bhabhi aap kijeye baat...
Aaliya:Kya??
Zain:isko chodo tum bolo...(PAGAL HAI??)
Aaliya:Woh mujhe tumse yeh kehna hai ki...
(Bol do aaliya plz...main bhi boldunga)
Ki...THANK YOU
Zain: KYA?? i mean kyun??
Aaliya:Woh...jo tumne mere liye kiya tha...kal raat ko...
Zain:aree woh to mera farz tha...Chalo coffee peete hai...
Aaliya:theek hai...chalo chalte hain...
they both leave
At the cafeteria
Zain:yeh lo tumhari coffee.
Aaliya: thank you
she drank the coffee...while a white layer was formed over her lips.
Aaliya:Kyun has raho??
Zain:Woh...
Aaliya:Kya???
Zain wipes it with his fingers.
Aaliya feels shy...
They both have a cute eye-lock.
Waiter:Sir kya main yeh cup le jao??
Zain and aaliya break the eye-lock
Zain:haan...le jao
Aaliya's Monologue:
Kyun...kyun aisa lagta hai jaise yeh mere liye his bana hai??
Kyun mujhe Zain ke saath rehna aacha lagta hai?
Kya sach mein kahi...
Zain:Aaliya...chalo hume work site pe jaana hai.
Aaliya:Chalo...chalte hain
They both reach the work site.
Zain is hurt...on his hand.
Aaliya tears a peace of cloth from her duppata and ties on the hand of Zain.
Aaliya:Pagal ho kya??...Dhyan se kaam nahi kar sakte??
Kuch ho jaata to?
Zain:toh...kya tumhe kuch hota??
(Abh bol bhi do Aaliya)
Aaliya:Mujhe kya hoga?
Chalo kaam karo...
While Ghulam enters with a gift.
Ghulam:Zain yeh tumhare liye...
Zain:iski kya zroorat thi??
Ghulam:Tumne jo humare liye kia...woh koi apna bhi nahi karta...THANK YOU
Aur haan...aaj tum humare ghar aa raho...apni mummy ke saath dinner ke liye
Zain:aree?
Ghulam:Tumhe aana padega aaliya ki kasam..
Zain:theek hai main aunga
(Aur aaliya ka haath bhi maanglunga aapse...I LOVE HER)
As Zain and Surraiya are invited at haider's house for dinner.
So,Zain left ealier from office.
And aaliya was on her way to home.
Zain and surraiya reach their house.
Shabana:ZAIN!!!!!!!!
Zain:Kya hua aunty?
Ghulam:Zain...woh Aaliya nahi aayi ghar...uska phone bhi nahi lag rha...woh office se nikli par ghar nahi aayi...Woh jaroor kisi musibat mein phasi hain
Surraiya:Ghulam shab aap chinta mat kareye ZAIN dhundega aaliya ko...Jao ZAIN
Zain leaves form there...he is running fast...trying her phone but no one is answering.
Zain:Kaha ho aaliya???
Main tumhare bina nahi jee sakta...Plz...phone uthao!!!
Where is Aaliya???What happened to her???
Will Zain be able to find her???
To know more stay tuned...
#BEINTEHAA
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Precap:
Aaliya:yeh main kahan hoon...
she sees her hands and legs are tied up...
She shouts Zain...ZAIN!!!!!
She sees someone and is totally shocked!
Who is he/she??
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"Yahan bhi hoga...wahan bhi hoga...
KYA??
Mera hi jalwa!!!!"


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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
damn interesting awesome
loved it
continue ASAP
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#36
Awsm update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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#37
Chapter 8

Aaliya is tied with a rope.
Aaliya:Yeh kaha hoon main??
Yeh rasi...yeh...
ZAIN!!!ZAIN!!!!
Suddenly the door opens...
Aaliya:Kaun hai??
Main kahan hoon???
Zeeshan:Tumhara hone waala shauhar...
Aaliya:Zeeshan tum!!
Yeh kya hai?Chodo mujhe...jaane do
Zeeshan:Chodne keliye thodi padka hai...tumse shaadi karna waala hoon...
Aaliya:Zeeshan tum bahut galat kar rahe ho...tumhe Zain chodega nahi...
Zeeshan:Chodega toh tab na...jab pakedga
Hahahahahhahaa
Abhi baat karata hoon main tumhari usee...
He calls up Zain.
Zain:hello...
Zeeshan:Hello...main zeeshan...tumhare liye ek bure aur ek acchi khabar hai...
Zain:kya hai??
Zeeshan:Buri khabar yeh ki aaliya kidnap hogayi hai...
aur achhi yeh ki woh mere pass hai...yahan samne...
Zain:Dekh...bata ki tu kahan hai...
Aaliya se baat karva...
Zeeshan abhi karvata hoon...
Zeeshan:Yeh le aaliya se baat kar...aur yaad rakhiyo...jeetne der tu usse baat karega...tab tak woh tadpegi...
Zeeshan holds her hair tight...
Aaliya:Ahh...Zain..Ahhh
Zain:Aaliya tum meri awaaz sun sakti ho...
Aaliya:Haan...Zain...
Zeeshan hits her with stick...
Aaliya:AAA
Zain:Aaliya kya hua...Aaliya
Aaliya:Zain mujhe bacha lo...plz...plz...
Za...
Zeeshan injects a injection to her
Zain:Aaliya...aaliya...
Zeeshan:Bas...itni baat ho sakti hai...warna wo to mar jati...
Zain:Dekh agar meri aaliya ko kuch bhi hua...toh...main tujhe chodunga nahi...
Zeeshan:Pehle pakad to le...and cuts the phone
Zain:Hello...hello...
Aaliya main tumhe kuch bhi nahi honedunga...
He goes home and informs everybody.
Shabana:Ya allah...kya kia tha meri beti ne jo aap uske saath aisa kar raho??Kyun???
Surraiya:Sambhalo apne aap ko shabana...
ZAin dhundu aaliya ko...kaise bhi ...jaldi...
Zain traces the no. of Zeeshan with the help of Police.
He reaches Bathibind.
There is a thin road which is leading to the traced area.
Zain:Aaliya...Aaliya...
Aaliya but can't speak...she tries to..but...
Aaliya:Za.,...aa...in...
Zain hears it somehow...and runs to the door.
He bangs the door.
No one opens it so he breaks it...
He sees Zeeshan...holding a gun at aaliya.
Zeeshan:Agar tu ne ek bhi kadam aage badhaya..toh...soch le...
Zain:tum aaliya kuch mat karna...main aag nahi badhunga...
Police comes from behind and...
Police:Abh tum jaoge jail...chalo...
He leaves aaliya from the gun point
Aaliya rushes to Zain...She is in his arms.
Zain:I LOVE YOU AALIYA!
Aaliya:I LOVE YOU TOO!!!
Zain:Dekho to...kitna zulm kia hai tum pe...main to uska muder kardu...
Aaliya:hhaaaha
Zain main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon...aur tumse alag nahi hosakti..after saying this she tightly hugs ZAIN.
Zain:Main bhi tumse bahut pyaar karta hoo...I LOVE YOU till my last breath...
Shaban,Ghulam and Surraiya:Hum bhi tum dono se bahut pyaar karte hain...
AAliya:Ammi...abbu...
Shabana:Meri bacchi...theek to hai na...
Ghulam:Aap dekh nahi rahi...Zain hai uske saath kyun nahi theek hogi...
They both blush
Surraiya comes near to aaliya.
Surraiya:Shaaadi karogi...mere ZAIN se...
She looks at Zain
Aaliya just shooks her head.
Ghulam:Meri beti ko kush to rakhoge na?
Zain:Haan hamesha...
After this Aaliya changed to Malika-e-Zain and Zain turned to Jaanu...Both of them Lived happily ever after.
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Thank You all for reading this FF.
Hope you all enjoyed it.
#BEINTEHAA
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"Yahan bhi hoga...waha bhi hoga...
Kya???
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Wow beautiful update
Loved it
Very nicely ended
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#39
Wow it was a amazing ending
Will be waiting to read more of your works
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#40
Such a beautiful ending and can u plzz give an epilogue also plzzz
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