ZaYa Drabbles| The A-Z series|F For..Page 27. 24/3/15 - Page 8

Originally posted by: ZayaFever

the family's reaction was hilarious🤣🤣
brilliantly penned😊

Originally posted by: Humzy

Wow awsm update

Loved it

Continue soon

Originally posted by: katmaan

Nice yummy brownie I want one brownie too

lol khyati

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Awwweesome. Continue soon.

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya

superb,awesome
beautifully written

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

ha ha family's reaction was hilarious🤣

loved the update dear

waiting for the next part

@All. Thank you soo much 🤗

Originally posted by: preeharsharora

its totally amazing keep writing more u r superb kudos to ur writing skills

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Totally fabulous

Continue soon

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose

brilliant brilliant
loved it
it's awesome
superb

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

omgg!!!That was amazzingg👏👏👏...awesome work dear..you r tooo goood.👍🏼...totally in love with this series❤️...Thanks u so much for d pm..

Originally posted by: Zayaforlife

Amazing

@All. Thanks a lot guys! [>:D<[

Originally posted by: princess5253

Ha ha ha ha they caught them u made me recall the bed scene LOL vry entertaining and well written and PLZ PLZ UPDATE REALLY SOON

lol,yeah. Updating in a while :)

Originally posted by: iman_harshika

It was super dooper!!

Ohhh god it was so so good!!

thanks Iman,ryt?

Family reaction was hilarious!!😆

I loved it to core!!

I m crazy now abut yur drabbles!!😉

Waiting for yur next update!!😊

Omg, crazy? 😆
Thank u! Updating in a while 😊

Originally posted by: pinki123

ohh amazing

love it

Thanks 🤗

aww brownies muh mein pani araha hai while reading how aliya eat brownie my mouth was watering😆😆

lovely keep writing

Socho,meri kya halat hui hogi 😆

Originally posted by: simran422

I want Brownie now! Hehe hmmm their first kiss was hawwt! Kiss hi sujhti pehle toh is gutter bhare dimag ko LOL family reaction was hilarious haha very well written loved it

Haan, humara dimaag gutter se hi bhara hai 😆
Thanks simran 😊

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

I was thinking how hard it must have been for Zain to watch Aaliya sensually lick off the chocolate..poor Zain! And the last part...was AWESOME...I was totally hooked to the chapter.Update soon,Sanika!

Lol,but zaim ne bhi toh badla liya na? 😉
thanks Anwesha>:D<]
updating in a while 😊

Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee

Ooosh very sexy update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
Update soon

thanks shiri 🤗
Ur welcome.
updating as soon as I finish replying :)

Originally posted by: sazebuna

When you were describing that how Aliya was eating brownie my mouth was also watering I was missing my aunts special brownies which she makes for me I love brownie even more than aliya loves brownie

Imagine how difficult it must have been for me to write 😆
LOL, We all chocoholics here. 😛

Originally posted by: poojaloveskajen

o god..this made me hungry for brownies! :D
haha but it was awesome...the families reaction was hilarious!

Ab aap san ka reply padke my mouth is watering 😆
Thanks. 😊

Originally posted by: kunakshafan26

cute the ;)

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-

Hello!😛
yo 😛 hermain ka guest appearence 😆

Pehli baat ke har update pe essay nhi milein ge 😆
haww.
Mai koi farigh nahi hun 😛 Parhayi karni hoti hai 😭

farigh?

Achaa.. you know what! I'm such a big dunce at descriptive essays and stories 😛 Descriptions pe tou i keep struggling for hours and hours! and you're sooo brilliant at it!
lol! Thanks 😛
The way you described the feeling while one eats brownie... AMAZZING! Why don't you give my english essay exam? 😆
are you ready to pay for my flight expenses, travelling expenses, forge ID's for me to give ur exam?
Please dedou.. I will get the highest score 😉 Pleasee 😛
read the criteria. Agar haan then ok. I will 😆


Hhahah, family's reaction LOL! Bechara Zain!! you write soo well.. I'm churaofying some lines. Kaam aeinge ye lines in writing descriptive essays at school 😆

Wonderfull! 👏

Le le, le le. Jitne lines chahiye le le 😛
I didn't think u will comment cause you don't like such stuff na? 😛
Anyways,Thanks hermy 🤗

And Thanks to everyone who liked A and B. :) :)
love u people.

C for Challenges.
(Unrelated to the previous drabble/os)

Aliya Ghulam Haider and Zain Usman Abdullah had shared a hate-hate relationship from times immemorial.
Both harboured bitter feelings towards each other. And both were convinced that their hate will remain strong forever.
When she was three,he four, he had challenged her to walk on the wall.
She did and broke her arm.
When he was seven,she six, she challenged him to steal the toffee from their Ramu kaka's shop.
He did and received thrashing from his mom.
She enjoyed the sweets.
He pulled on her pigtails,she tripped him.
He teased her mercilessly,she slapped him.
So now that it was established that their relationship was purely a hate-hate one from both their sides, he wondered why he felt so uncomfortable when he learned about her first crush.
He challenged to break up with her boyfriend,she did.
She cried for a whole week before deciding boy's weren't worth crying on.
She too wondered at the feelings she felt when she looked at him when she was seventeen.
Surely the smile that had spread on both their faces when they were together never indicated any hate.
Soon it turned into a frown when he introduced his girlfriend.
He had challenged her to challenge him.
She withdrew for the first time.
Maybe they had forgotten the smaller challenges which conveyed love rather than hate.
When she had broken her arm,he had challenged her not to cry.
When he had received the thrashing, she had challenged him to eat the sweet.
When she broke up with her boyfriend, who,he knew was cheating on her,he had challenged her to the movies.
He had challenged her to eat food when she went through her 'anorexic' mood.
She had challenged him to study harder when he failed his subject.
Both had challenged each other to smile when down, to laugh when they felt like crying.
Both had unknowingly,looked after each other.
So maybe, enemies wasn't the right word.
She realised she did not hate him the minute she saw his girlfriend.
He realised he didn't when she did not challenge him.
His proposal was quite unique.
He had called her upon the terrace where he used to challenge her to come and count stars with him.
He did not go down on his knees or something.
No,that was too cliche.
"Mamu ki bhaji?"
He had said. They were lying side by side, looking at the sprinkle of handful of stars across the velvety sky.
"Hmm?"
"Ek aur challenge."
She groaned but said "I'm listening."
"Soch lo. Bahut bada challenge hain."
She scoffed.
"Have I ever backed down from your challenges kitkit.?"
He did not reply.
"Toh challenge kya hai?"
He proped his head on his arm and said-
"Mamu ki Bhanji, I challenge you to-"
He paused.
She raised an eyebrow.
"To marry me."
****
Yayayayay, teen drabbles ho gaye.
23 more to go :/
Likes and comments are very much appreciated.
Pm criteria.
1. Buddy me.
2. Like and comment
So simple.
This is a bit different from how I usually write.
Never written in third person.
So healthy critisism is heartily welcome.
Please don't cite adjectives. I love it when you give me essays to read.
So, I challenge you to give a long review 😉
-Sanika

Wow re superb I mean amazing

aww... It was so cute update
loved it:)