ZaYa OS: A tear from your eye - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
beautifully written
excited for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
loved the update
enjoyed reading it
Gauhar is upto something 😕
waiting for the next part
thanks for the PM

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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
wonderful update!!!👏
beautifully written.👍🏼.
loved it ❤️
ty so much for d pm
plzz continue soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Chapter 6(A)

Place : ZaYa Room.
Time : Around 5 at evening.


Aliya keeps the towel in. She thinks for a moment and takes it back and went into the bathroom.
Zain was about to leave when he saw what Aliya was doing he smirked.

Aliya : Oh God...Why this Zain is trying to trap me down. What have I done,? I just gave my food. He is acting like a police now. Oh Alaah just make his mouth shut. I dont want to get embarrassed.

Zain was behind the door. He was hearing all her monologue.

Aliya : Oh God now he had left the door ajar..!! How can I make this man understand things? Uff...

She pulls the door and sees Zain there.

Aliya screams.

Aliya : Ahhh...What are u doing here?
Zain : I am searching something...
Aliya : Behind the door.
Zain : Yes...Why cant I search things behind the door.
Aliya : Yes you can go ahead. Search.

Zain was simply looking at her.

Aliya : Search.
Zain : I found out.
Aliya : What?
Zain : That theres nothing behind the door.
Aliya : Whatever. Lemme go.
Zain : Where are you going?
Aliya : Kitchen.
Zain : Happy Journey.
Aliya : Thank you.

Zain scratched his head while walking down the room.


Place : Barkat Villa Drawing room.
Time : Around 6.


Gauhar : Aliya I need to go to shopping can you come with me?
Aliya : I think I wont be able to...I have some work and ...
Gauhar : Aliya I need to buy some things. SOME THINGS. Can you go with me.
Aliya : I will talk with the driver. He will...
Gauhar : Oh please just half and hour...
Aliya : I agree but...I need to tell Zain...
Gauhar : I'll text him. Its getting late lets go.
Aliya : Ok I'll go with you. Lemme take my purse.
Gauhar : No no no I'll buy you if you need anything. You can pay me later.
Aliya : Ok lets move.

Letting Aliya walk in front Gauhar took a step back.

Gauhar : (Monologue) Just wait and watch Aliya...This will be your best Shopping.

Both reached the shop.
Gauhar was buying some ladies stuff. while Aliya was looking at some night wears.

Gauhar : Do you like this?(Pointing out a lace night wear)
Aliya : No ...I was just looking.
Gauhar : Oh try this na...
Aliya : No...no...
Gauhar : Oh Please for me...
Aliya : Ok...

Aliya hands over the phone to Gauhar and a lady with the dress following her to the trial room.

Gauhar texts Zain as
"Zain I will get late. Dont worry I will come back tomorrow morning. Bye Take care"

Precap :
Gauhar calls Aliya from behind, when she turns she keeps a cloth in her nasal leaving Aliya Unconscious.


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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Awesome...Keep up the good work!!
ANd try to update fast...plz..plz..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Mentalmaths

Awesome...Keep up the good work!!

ANd try to update fast...plz..plz..
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Thank you so much.
I am trying to update at least one update for one day.
I only come active on late evenings.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
awesome
really superb
amazing
luved it
pls cont ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
its amazing
very well written
pls cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Gauhar 😡
loved the update
do continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
omg it's really interesting
plz update soon
I can't wait
uff awesome
plz update lengthy update
and plz update ASAP
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