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I hate to hate you
Chapter 2
At Barkat Villa
Zain: This nikkah doesn't hold any importance for me now. I don't need you in my life. "DO YOU UNDERSTAND," he shouted. Because of you, my dad has gone into comma, my mom was beaten up. I am going to cut every relation with you because I don't want you anywhere near me or my family. I am going to give you talaaq Aliya Ghulam Haider. "TALAQ TALAQ TALAQ," he shouted his lungs out as he uttered those words out and left everyone shocked.
Shabana's phone rang. She pressed the button to decline the call but she didn't realize that instead of declining she has accepted the call, which made the other person on line to hear whatever was going on at Barkat Villa.
Aliya: "Talaq, " she said in despair. Zain you can't divorce me. You can't end our relationship like that.
Zain: Why can't I divorce you Aliya Ghulam Haider. You can file complaint against me and I can't even divorce you. Now just get lost from here. I can't tolerate you for a split second even and never ever try to come near my family otherwise I won't spare you.
Ghulam: Zain enough is enough. Stop blaming my daughter for someone else's deeds. Aliya beta let's go from here. There is no use in staying at a place where no one respects you.
Aliya: Abbu what are you saying ? I can't leave Mamu like this and I have to prove my innocence. Zain is saying all this in anger, he still loves me. Trust me Abbu. Zain you still love me right ?
Zain: I hate you. JUST GO AWAYYY . If you have ever loved me you will leave this house right away.
Aliya: Thik hai Zain if this is what you want me to do to prove that I love you I will do it. I will leave this house right away. I will pray everyday from Allah for Mamu's recovery. I hope that one day you will get to know about my innocence. Allah se yehi dua rahegi ki tum apni zindagi mai khush raho. Khuda Hafiz, she said by trying really hard to control the tears in her eyes, which were soon going to overwhelm her.
Ghulam: Before going I want to tell you one thing Mr. Zain Abdullah that YOU WILL REGRET YOUR WORDS. There will come a day when you will hate yourself to hate her.
Zain: That day will never come. I will hate her forever. I will send you guys the divorce papers soon and after these three months we will be legally divorced as well.
Outside Barkat Villa
Ghulam: Aliya beta we will go to our hotel now and then tomorrow we will leave for Bangalore.
Aliya: No Abbu I don't want to go with you guys. I don't want to be a burden on you. Moreover, I can't ever forget that you guys betrayed me. If you guys wouldn't have made me sign those papers, this all wouldn't have happened. Aap logo ne sab khatam kar diya, SAB KUCH, she fainted as she said those words, but Ghulam held her so she didn't fall on the ground.
Shabana : Aliya Kya hua ise. Ghulam Sahab let's rush to the hospital.
At City Hospital (Doctor is checking Aliya and Shabana and Ghulam are waiting outside the room)
Shabana: He called. We shouldn't let him know what happened at Barkat Villa. He won't spare Zain and other Abdullahs.
Ghulam: You are right, but how we will keep this as a secret. Wouldn't he realize that something is fishy seeing Aliya in this condition. Oh, look Doctor is here. Doctor how is my daughter ? What happened to her ? Anything major ?
Doctor: Nothing major Mr Haider. She fainted due to low blood pressure. You can meet her when she wakes up. We have given her an injection so she will not wake up till next three hours.
Ghulam: Thank you doctor. Can we discharge her tomorrow because we have a flight tomorrow?
Doctor: Yeah, sure but do ensure that she eats properly otherwise she can get weaker.
Ghulam: We will, doctor!! Thank you once again.
After three hours
Doctor: Mr Haider Aliya is conscious now and you can go meet her.
Shabana and Ghulam went inside the room. Aliya was crying and reminiscing her good memories with Zain. These lyrics were playing in the background
"Kyun mujhse khafa, tu hai mere khuda
Deewane se tere, kya ho gayi khata
Jo ho gaya juda
Jo ho gaya juda...
Ho jaaunga tabah
Ho jaaunga tabah"
As soon as Aliya realized that her parents are in her room, she tried to hide her tears.
Shabana: Aliya don't hide your tears beta. Let them flow away. You will feel lighter.
Aliya: Ammi can you please leave me alone ? I don't want to talk with anyone right now.
Sahabana: Beta if you will do like this, toh kaise chalega. I will leave if you will eat something. Now be a good girl and eat something.
Aliya: Please leave me alone. I need sometime of my own.
Ghulam: Begum let's leave her for now. We can come back later.
Shabana and Ghulam leave Aliya alone.
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Aliya's POV
He said talaq three times before even thinking about me. It was so easy for him to break our relationship. He didn't even keep his promises. He told me that he would always support me, but what happened to those promises? How easy it was for him to throw me out of his life ? Does he realize that how much I love him ? Did he ever love me like the way I did? He threw me out of his life as I never mattered to him. My life is incomplete without him. Why he was calling me Aliya Ghulam Haider, I am Aliya Zain Abdullah I guess not anymore... He hates me... he hates me to the core but I can't let him hate me that much. I need to do something. But what can I do ?
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Millions of questions were coming in Aliya's mind. The questions didn't have any answers. She couldn't accept the fact that Zain actually said talaq. She couldn't stop reminiscing good memories with Zain. She was in denial mode. All she could see was a vision where she was completely alone, no one holding her hand, not even Zain, a future with darkness where not even a single ray of light was visible. And there came a point when she tore apart completely, she lost her senses and started screaming.
Shabana: Ghulam Sahab we have to get Aliya out of this situation. He is the only person after Zain who can get her out from this situation.
Ghulam: First of all we can't let him know what happened with her and even if we do how will he take care of Aliya when she isn't even ready to come with us to Bangalore. Things are getting so complicated. I wish Usman Sahab get well soon and handle the situation before it gets worse. He would have never let this happened.
They were interrupted by Aliya's screams. They could hear Aliya screaming, "I can't let this happen. He can't divorce me. I am innocent. I am innocent. No He can't do this to me. He can't do this to me . I can't live without him. I need him."
Ghulam: Begum, ask the doctor to come immediately.
Ghulam immediately rushed to Aliya's room.
Ghulam: Aliya beta what happened ? We know you are innocent. Zain will come back beta. Beta don't lose hopes. Be Strong.
This was the first time when Ghulam saw Aliya in such a condition. A girl who could fight against all the odds was completely heart broken today. Ghulam wasn't able to handle Aliya and amidst all this he was cursing himself of making Aliya sign those papers. That was the moment when Ghulam felt guilty, guilty of betraying her own daughter whom he loved more than anyone else in the world. As soon as he saw doctor coming in, he took a sigh of relief because he realized in the past three minutes that handling Aliya in this state was not his cup of tea.
Doctor: Mr Ghulam, Excuse me. I think I will have to give her injection again to make her fall asleep.
As soon as the doctor came close to Aliya to inject her, a hand held his hand leaving Shabana and Ghulam shocked.
I know this was a short and a bad update but next one will be long for sure and I will try to make it good.
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Originally posted by: musicxolover
Omgg this was so sad, Aashi 😒
I love how you showed Aaliya's pain! Poor girl, hope she's proven innocent soon...Who's the guy who held their hand?? 😕Great update!You have to update soon okay? Okay. 😆
Originally posted by: -Saheba-
Very nice Update Aashi👏
And i love the way you are slowly gearing up for Barun's entry. I'm so excited 😃And Poor Aaliya 😭 I'm glad that you showed her breaking down though😊Please update soon😛😛
Originally posted by: zaya-firdose
really so nice
very well written
poor aliya
whose the person (suspense)
plz reveal it soon
continue ASAP
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