Short Story - Painful Love ~ UPDATED Part 4 ~ PG 13 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: zainaliya-12
I really feel bad for aliya, I hope zain find's out soon
Aliya needs Zain right now😔
Amazing update and please continue soon
And thank u so much for the pm, and pm me the next part aswell😛

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Originally posted by: rinku95
Amazingly written continue soon

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Originally posted by: .Anisha.
Poor Aaliya my heart goes out to her
totally loved this chappy dear 👍🏼 brilliantly penned down
waiting for the next part

Thank you for commenting and liking the update. Glad you enjoyed it, I have so much planned for this, just pray it all goes well :) shall update soon.

Originally posted by: Beintehaa_ZaYa
Awesome Dear
Send me a pm when you update part 3

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Originally posted by: zaya-firdose
superb update
plz continue soon
and try for pm

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Originally posted by: Priyakna
Astonishing :)) please continue

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Originally posted by: iluvuzaya
It was super duper amazing...
Felt sad for aliya..
Wish truth comes out fast...
Update soon...

Glad you liked the update, it will all unfold soon just watch this space 😆 Shall update soon.

Originally posted by: arshipotterfan
Both of the parts were beautiful.
You write so well!!!
👏 👏
amazing job.
Update soon 😊

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Originally posted by: -Saheba-
OMG this update was so amazing.
I love how you made Aaliya strong..where Aliya is hurt and in pain inside..suffering on her own with the idea of her death nearing and yet she manages to put a straight face in front of Zain.
And I'm glad that you showed that little change in her behavior that triggered Zain that something was wrong. I'm sure this all this would nicely fit together like a puzzle when Zain will find out in the end about her cancer.
after reading this I want more now😆
Please hurry and update the next part soon.
Oh and do pm if possible,
If not that's fine, I'll hunt for it.😉

Thank you so much for like the update, and for such a detailed comment, I hardly expect anything like this on my updates cos I don't believe they're good enough compared to the works of so many other people. Appreciate your time to read and comment on my work. I shall update soon and also if possible would you be able to buddy me so I can send the pms? Many thanks :)

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya
beautifully written
cont soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA
that ws awesome!!!!!..really very emotional update...beautifully penned👏...loved it❤️...waiting for d next update..😊

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Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
wow awsum SS..
red both the parts...
plz cint soon and pm me plz
cont asap plz

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Originally posted by: zaya-firdose
really interesting
continue soon

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Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh
Oh my. This is truly beautiful. You are an amazing writer. Loved every word of it!! Looking forward to the next update!!

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