You Are My 'Aaliya'(FF)Pt3upPg4 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
So guys after getting 10 replies on the 1st part
I am back with second part!!!
Wanna know na what happened??Then here u go...
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Barkat Villa

Fahad:Phoops main police ko leke jaata hoon!!!Zain ke piche
Surraiya:Fahad nahi!!!
Fahad:Ha mom my jaunga wo meri behen hai!!!
*He then left from their*
JAliyawala Bagh

REhan:Aur agar tum yaha se nahi hate to main tumhe mardunga
ZAin:MAr do mai khush rahunga...kyuki main aaliya ki mohhabat me fanaa hogaya
Aaliya:Zain...
Zain:Shhh



And Rehan click the trigger but...something happened
It was not Zain who was shot...
Aaliya came in between and she got shot and was all bleeding red...and then fahad bhai entered with police and caught REHAN KHAN
while aaliya was falling on the ground...Zain lifted her in his hand..
Aaliya:Zainnn...Main tumse bas yeh hi kehna chahti hoon ki meri har saas par sirf tumhara naam hainn...aur main tumse apni aakhri saas tak pyaar karti rahungi...
*I closed my eyes as i couldn't bear the pain*
Zain:*I shouted*AALIYAAA ...tum mujhe aise chod kar nahi jaa sakti aakhen kholo!!!!!!
Did she leave me...No she can't i am her HUSBAND ...her LIFE!!!!!She can't leave me!!!
Fahad:Zainnn...jaldi se aaliya ko hospital leke jau...lo meri gaadi
I Just quickly picked her up and rushed to the car...
Car scene

Aaliya tum mujhe aise nahi chod sakti...I saw my hand it was all smudged with blood...
My AALIYA's blood!!!!

Zain:Aaliya plz mujhe mat chodo...Main tumse PYAAR karta hun
*I gave her jerks but still she didn't respond...My heart has stopped working and then we reached the hospital...*
Hospital Scene
My LIFE...My WIFE...was on strecher and I was begging for her life...
I continuously saw the blood which was coming out of the place where she was shot...

Zain:Aaliyaaa...main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga...*Holding her hand*
Doctar:Zain Abdullah yaha se aage nahi jaa sakte...
Zain:PAr kyu woh meri biwi hai...
Doctor:Yeh rules ke khilaf hai and left...
Fahad and all the member come and ask where is aaliya?
Zain:*I pointed toward the door of icu*Bhai wo theek to jaegi na...
I was totally broken from inside...
Fahad:Zain use kuch nahi hoga...
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DOctor:Aap logo ko chinta karni ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...
ab woh theek hai par unka bahut zyaada dhayan rakhna padega..
Zain:Main rakhunga!!!
*Allah aap ka lak laakh shukr hai ki aaliya theek hai..*
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To be continued...
Ok guys this was second part hope u like it...
and remember if i don't get at least 10 replies on this then no next part...
PLs tell me how's it?
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Thanks for reading
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Lovely update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Hayee wow
Its was awesome
Loved itt
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
This is awesome.I love it..Please continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
very nice update!!!!!...loved it ...plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
fabulous part
waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Ok i was not able to control myself so i wrote the 3rd part
Here it is...ENJOY!!!
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DOctor:Aap logo ko chinta karni ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...
ab woh theek hai par unka bahut zyaada dhayan rakhna padega..
Zain:Main rakhunga!!!
*Allah aap ka lak laakh shukr hai ki aaliya theek hai..*
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I came inside and saw my LIFE...AALIYA on the bed...Allah isse kitni takleef hoi hogi...
Zain:Kyun Aaliya?? tumne mujhe chodhna ka chah bhi kaisa
He was there with me...I was so happy...Aah this pains alot
Aaliya:Zain tum mere zindigi ho agar tumhe kuch bhi ho jaata toh main zinda nahi reh paati...
Zain:Aur Mai????
Tumne socha mera kya hota???Main to jaise bade maze se jeeta...hain na??*I gave her a fake smile*
Aaliya:Awww...Koi baat nahi
*I kissed him on his cheek* Ab toh mujhse mat naraaz rah Pls...Pls...


How can anyone be so cute...How???...She is so pretty
Zain:Main man gaya!!! Ab meri baari...
Aaliya:Kya???
Zain:Ha...tumne mujhe kiss kiya ab mai bhi karunga...
*Aaliya zain abdullah main bhi zain abdullah hun...and i pecked her on her cheeks*


Awww my old zain is back...I am so happy
Aaliya:Zain yeh kya kar rahe ho??
Zain:Main nahi rukunga...*Bilkul bhi nahi aaliya zain abdullah*
*I kissed her forehead and continued*



Nurse come in...
Nurse:Ummm Sir hume medicine theni hai
Zain:Ha sur dijiye
Both felt embaressed...
To be continue..
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So deal is the same give me 10 comments so that i can
move to next part
and next part gonna be in BV
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Plz...Plz commentšŸ¤—
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Ok i was not able to control myself so i wrote the 3rd part
Here it is...ENJOY!!!
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DOctor:Aap logo ko chinta karni ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...
ab woh theek hai par unka bahut zyaada dhayan rakhna padega..
Zain:Main rakhunga!!!
*Allah aap ka lak laakh shukr hai ki aaliya theek hai..*
...
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I came inside and saw my LIFE...AALIYA on the bed...Allah isse kitni takleef hoi hogi...
Zain:Kyun Aaliya?? tumne mujhe chodhna ka chah bhi kaisa
He was there with me...I was so happy...Aah this pains alot
Aaliya:Zain tum mere zindigi ho agar tumhe kuch bhi ho jaata toh main zinda nahi reh paati...
Zain:Aur Mai????
Tumne socha mera kya hota???Main to jaise bade maze se jeeta...hain na??*I gave her a fake smile*
Aaliya:Awww...Koi baat nahi
*I kissed him on his cheek* Ab toh mujhse mat naraaz rah Pls...Pls...


How can anyone be so cute...How???...She is so pretty
Zain:Main man gaya!!! Ab meri baari...
Aaliya:Kya???
Zain:Ha...tumne mujhe kiss kiya ab mai bhi karunga...
*Aaliya zain abdullah main bhi zain abdullah hun...and i pecked her on her cheeks*


Awww my old zain is back...I am so happy
Aaliya:Zain yeh kya kar rahe ho??
Zain:Main nahi rukunga...*Bilkul bhi nahi aaliya zain abdullah*
*I kissed her forehead and continued*















Nurse comes in...
Nurse:Ummm Sir hume medicine theni hai
Zain:Ha sur dijiye
Both felt embaressed...
To be continue..
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So deal is the same give me 10 comments so that i can
move to next part
and next part gonna be in BV
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Plz...Plz comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Beautiful update
Loved it
Very sweet and cute
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
vry cute n beautiful update loved it cont soon :)
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