Zaya Drabble| Ten things|*Awarded* Note-Page 62 - Page 46

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Posted: 10 years ago
Woaah that was a really amazing part
Update soon
And I loved the last line...wow
And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Zains emotions were penned down so beautifully
loved the update as always dear 😳
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
yah..i told u i will be late...
res
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Phew,...i m such a calm person u see? so calm..everything is puurfect...😳..NOT...!!
There was a time..jab dayano pe bhi reham hota tha...
There was a time..when i used to think that my life, my luck was with me...but now..its all gone...
My life is clearly destroyed..my hopes are shattered...and i m left numb here...
How am i even typing? What is left now? Didn't i have dreams? Some little,small dreams which i wanted to see being fulfilled? But in just a split of a second..its all gone...
What worse can possibly happen to me...
Here i am...left lifeless...what is the purpose of living? I just don't need to right? I should actually give up..and i do...I can't take this anymore..!! What am i being punished for? My life is the one who decieved me...the one who broke me...the one whom i trusted..was proud about..the one who i thought was with me...and now..i m so harshly..cruely thrown away from that particular LIFE...which does not even mean anything to me...anymore..!! Because its gone...
The first res is gone...
Call me Dayan n names as i keep kitkiting about that...but that is how i am...😳u may like..or go to hell...Hermoine and Emani...i wont say i hate u...
and both of u..i know u wont..but still


Coming back to the chappy...
Too good Sanika...
mY MY MY...zain was so disheartened..when he said he would hate her if she doesnt get up...that line just ruled the whole drabbles...
no tears..no shouting...clearly shows how much painful all this was for him...
You know I love u..and am i fan of ur workπŸ€—
The sad thing is that the drabbles are going to end..plz bring part 2 of these series..plz
You rock baby..keep giving such awesome updates...πŸ˜ƒ..on the most ridiculous time possible..!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
But love ya..!!❀️

Edited by ZayaShiz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome! Loved it! Poor Zain :( cont soon~
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Emaani.95


Yeh drabble update ho or main na aaun? Ho hi nahi sakta. πŸ˜›
Ohh it's for the second half. So does this mean the second half part is also for me Sanika?


Hahha, haan shayad whole 10th will be for you bhaii πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
Over 10000 views 😲 I feel like I am floating :P
thank you guys 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res! πŸ˜ƒ
I am first! πŸ˜†

UnRes! πŸ˜ƒ
Hamesha ki tarha, I am late! πŸ˜›

Yayyy.. another one for me?
I love you Sanika. :*

This one was such a sweet part. A lovely end to an outstanding drabble. Loved it!<3

"I don't care. I fell in love. You made me fall in love. Now when I want to grow old with you and have seven kids with you and read books with you and eat chocolates with you- you are backing off?"

Seven kids!!???? Is he serious? 😲
Zain ka toh kuch nahi jana per Aliya ke baray mein toh sochna chahiye na usse. πŸ˜†

You know what I loved the most in this update?

This segment:

"Why do you love me?" Her voice raspy again.
"Because- because" Zain tried, his hands busy in making motions of the words he could not speak.
"I just do.! That should be reason enough"

The last 'Awiieee' moment of the drabble. ❀️
Zain was so cute here. 😊

Thanks a lot for writing this drabbke Sanika and also for updating it frequently. :)
This fiction has given me some memories which I'll always remember. :)
Ab jaldi se apna doosra SS update kerna start kerdo. πŸ˜‰

I love you πŸ€—

Edited by Emaani.95 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome awesome awesome! Beautifully written. Loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
fabulous updateπŸ‘
very well written
loved it❀️
Thanks for the pm ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update and very cute end.
They got engage, how sweet!
Love their conversation.
Awesome Drabble series.
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