zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 84

Originally posted by: naina927

Res...

Im not well but will unres soon...

Originally posted by: katmaan

Awesome man

I read all the parts in one to do update soon pls take a short break and write soon

Originally posted by: AshesToDust

Oh God what are these little things up to...do me a favor please...update sooon!

Originally posted by: Syed695

Amazing Update!!!

Aaliyas decision to inform kids deir father..n she has already thought dey would love zain, nt knowin d little monsters plan of action to annoy zain...but d reaction would defntly awesome n I feel different:) (nt just kids but jonathan too)

Zain has no slightest idea dat aaliya is nt just hurt but also thinks hez fake, evrythin abt him is planned facade...m so eager for d jhatka he would gt wen she will inform her bounderies...Jonathan seems a nice frnd and its nice dat aaliya has given afair chance to her life, would love to see her introduce both kids n her relationship to zain..he will have d happiness to meet b d kids as father and d same time knowin d fact aaliya has moved on...love isnt easy n d most difficult thing abt it to sustain while d bumpy ride:)..eagrr to knw nxt n thNks for d PM Lara!!!!

Originally posted by: luckyzaya14

hey lara 😊
i hope u remember me but if u dont then its not your fault...( Hey... obviously I remeber you honeybun )
actually after reading the first chapter of ur story nd being the first one to comment there :p
i had taken a break from IF 🥱 ( Well I noticed that... everyone has the right to take a little break sometimes.. )
now after returning back after a pretty long time ... nd missing whole 20 chapters of ur FF 😃 u cant even imagine how much anxious i was to read them

... nd i think u will be very proud of urself when i will tell u that i read the whole 20 chapters in matter of 2 hours ... nd i cant stop commenting right now at about 3:00 am in the morning/night whatever u may call. 😳 ( nd i m not joking)
( Haww... really :O ... 20 chapters in two hours. I definitely now understand the amount of your anxiety to read them. And yeah.. its making me so excited to write write and write. But the problem is I cant really write for a while now. Me break time it is... :( ... )
now about the FF... can i tell you that i so want to hug u and blabber out a BIG BIG thnku for writing this beautiful FF of yours 🤗 which has got me addicted like anything 😊
( Aww... I want to hug you too, you are always welcome to the grand jhappis... hee hee... )
from the pain, the anguish , the fear which i directly connected to in the first few chapters to the love of a mother for her children, the feeling of protection of a father ... u have all the right to know buddy how well you write nd infuence the readers.. 😃
( Thank u so much... its because of all you readers supports and your comments and tips help me to improve... )
U know there even came a moment when i was literally crying as if i was feeling her pain... as i was in her place ...nd that shows how great u r at writing

nd can i tell how much i luv those kids... i hope i had such a great imagination as yours
( All have great imaginations dear, just need to sit and write them down... )
u know what? when i imagined all this while reading .. i suddenly wondered if it could have been a tv show or a film... which would definitly would have gone a grand hit for sure...
( TV show or film.. hmmm... if it was possible... feeling dreamy.. )
I normally dont read FFs but urs truly a beautiful exception... nd i have become a kind of greedy.. nd so im very sad that i would not be able to read this wonderful story of yours..
( You obviously would be able to read dear.. after my break ends... )
PS: wishing u a best of luck nd hoping that u will soon get well and over ur health nd other hurdles of life very easily... take care buddy nd have fun
( Thanks for your well wishes buddy... You too take care and have fun huh... : ) ... )

PPS: sometimes my like button doesnt work so i hope u understand that.. nd here im assuring u that i luv each part of this story toatally dil se

- Lucky 😳 ❤️

( Love u lots... Your beautiful comment really made me so happy... thnk u thnk u thnk u so much... )

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Its awsm update dear. ...
Love again sammyn sarah...
They are souls of the story. ...
Again jon part was outstanding. ..
Again there is no feelings for zain not good or nor bad...
Tire puncture. ..its sammy na...hahaha love these cute pies...
Outstanding update dear. ..


About note...
Its ok dear...Don't be wrry...
We also going to miss u n ur passionate wrk. ..for a month
But life is more important. .
Our best wishes wd u dear...
Good luck dear..
Keep rocking

Originally posted by: preity_d

first of all a big all the best hug for u... 🤗 I am sure u'll achieve ur goal... n I'll terribly miss ur writings but I'll wait for the better... but please make the break short *puppy face*

( Hey... hugs you back... thnks dear. I will too miss writing them yaar but I am sure you are aware of how difficult it is sometimes to find time for writing.. specially when you find yourself in new challenges... you are doing a new job naa... I know you will understand. So.. I will try my best to make this break as short as possible but I dont see any further hope to start writing before a month or two but I will definitely updt like tufaan mail as soon as I come back... )

The update, was so blowy, not stretched not short.. perfect. not an extra word and not any less... so Aaliya is not in love with Jonathan, I knew it before. But Zain have to do extra efforts to win beack his family for sure, waiting to see the roller coaster and bumpy journey of my ZaYa...

( Yep.. a very bumpy journey awaits for zaya... )

Personal note: u know our this aaliya is so much similar to our Manvi. Sometimes my fingers unknowing writes down Manvi's name, and my conscious has to erase them 😆 loving koi fariyaad ❤️

( I am very much aware of the disease named " virman mania "... hee hee.. blame that... )