Originally posted by: AshesToDust
( First of all congratulations... first comment huh... 👏👏👏 )Did that man really stepped on Barkat's folder?😆 really people today are soo...( yeah... such kind of people we see so many around everyday... )aliya's dhisham dhiasam on Zain's face was awesome. Of course he cant expect her to think of anything sane from him. he is desperately tryind to do so but it aint gonna be easy.( Dhisham dhisam... 😆... yep... that medicine was needed to taught him some lesson... 😉 )and awh the poor babies saw them fighting... i know what sammy feels for his Mr. Stranger right now... wait for it Zain wait for it!( Yes.. wait... )i pity him at the same time too😕 poor poor zain...You write so good. and please no second thoughts i love this story and would want you to continue it please!( Decrease in response makes me this discouraged yaar... 😭... Thanks ... will try to cont asap... )Continue soon!🤗( Ok.. will do... Thanks again for ur comment..😊 )
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Originally posted by: manny136
lovely update, aww poor zaya both in so much pain, so zains plan failed, i wonder what is going to make aaliya give him a chance even just to c the kids. Aww the twins saw them n now sammy is angry, i always felt one of the twins would be not so receptive to zain n who else his carbon copy lol. Ayaan n Barkat part was cute n funny lol. Can't wait for the next update
Originally posted by: madhuxyz
amazing updatpe dear
I seriously loved it , conversation between zain And aliya was tooo good
pls dnt think to stop ff abruptly I seriously love it actually I got addicted to ur ff dear
thanks for quick updates yaar ...I
I felt bad for zain but he deserves his approach was not correct ,hope next time he tries some thing good[SIZE=3]
And sammy is too angry for making his mom cry it will be too good to imagine if t he warns zain[/SIZE
Once again thank u for Awesome Upd
Waiting for next update 🥱
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