zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 73

Suri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#721

Did that man really stepped on Barkat's folder?😆 really people today are soo...

aliya's dhisham dhiasam on Zain's face was awesome. Of course he cant expect her to think of anything sane from him. he is desperately tryind to do so but it aint gonna be easy.

and awh the poor babies saw them fighting... i know what sammy feels for his Mr. Stranger right now... wait for it Zain wait for it!

i pity him at the same time too😕 poor poor zain...

You write so good. and please no second thoughts i love this story and would want you to continue it please!

Continue soon!

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Edited by AshesToDust - 10 years ago

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manny136

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Posted: 10 years ago

#722

lovely update, aww poor zaya both in so much pain, so zains plan failed, i wonder what is going to make aaliya give him a chance even just to c the kids. Aww the twins saw them n now sammy is angry, i always felt one of the twins would be not so receptive to zain n who else his carbon copy lol. Ayaan n Barkat part was cute n funny lol. Can't wait for the next update

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jazz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#723

Awwwn poor babies

They gonna hate their father

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suma madhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#724

amazing updatpe dear

I seriously loved it , conversation between zain And aliya was tooo good

pls dnt think to stop ff abruptly I seriously love it actually I got addicted to ur ff dear

thanks for quick updates yaar ...I

I felt bad for zain but he deserves his approach was not correct ,hope next time he tries some thing good[SIZE=3]

And sammy is too angry for making his mom cry it will be too good to imagine if t he warns zain[/SIZE

Once again thank u for Awesome Upd

Waiting for next update 🥱

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sania

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Posted: 10 years ago

#725

Superb update

Luvd it

I'm addicted 2 ur ff ...plz don't end it

Sorry I've never commented b4...can't w8 4 d nxt upd8

Plz pm me!!!

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Syed695

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Posted: 10 years ago

#726

Fabulous Update⭐️!!!

Barkats reaction on meetin d real zain was gud...in a way he would knw sum mistakes have to b paid heavily!

I like aayan...dis guy spks sense n has more senses dan zain...he still hasnt matured yet in terms of understanding his own deed...he needs to knw d grave digged yrs bk..hez sinkin now. ..u see ders always a time to repay on mistakes!:)

( I knw wierd xample lekin nuthin came up in mind xcpet dis😆)

Loved aaliya...she didn't give in..forget give in did not meet him..he may affect her but shez learnt hard way no to trust n make d same mistake twice...n yes zain needs to knw d person he hurted in d past isnt d same, ..hez d sole reason for d change n also would gt d taste of his own medicine...he liked bully n use of harsh words. ..dis guy has to face allot b4 forgiveness even kicks in, kids r sweet n smart specially sammy he now will protect mommy frm pain his way n sarrah may b sweet but again she has aaliya's characteristics, she has tigress in her too...!

u'v bought smile...I was grinning while readin...loved d update...thanks for the PM Lara!!!!!

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niki795

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Posted: 10 years ago

#727

awesome update
loved it
aaliyah didn't agree to go with zain
both the kids saw them arguing
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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ZainXAliya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#728

Very nice update and please don't ever think about ending this beautiful story, people may be busy lol 😆 But please don't ever think about ending this story! Come on people wake up! Like and Comment please! 😭 Nicely written, so Sarah and Sammy saw Mr. Stranger and their mommy having an argument.. how sad..

Zain is so dumb, he thinks whatever he's doing is right but he does not think about the consequences after that! 😡 I really want to see him try harder next time.. I felt bad for Aaliya, now she's going to have to deal with her next door neighbor.. & Now the kids are thinking of their father as a very bad man.

Thanks for the update Lara! 😊

Edited by ZainXAliya - 10 years ago

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