zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 70

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

awesomdm update.i don't like aliya and jon kiss,i know there is time for zaya romance but plz no jon and aliya romance plz.
love zaya converation.zain have to work hard but again he is going other way,he want to take illegal help it will be make situation more worst.waiting for next part.

Awesome update!!!

This was a very short chapter.. 😭 I wanted more, but nice update! ❤️ Seriously Zain has crossed all his limits, I know that he badly wants Aaliya and their children but that guy better chose his words lightly instead of blackmailing my poor Aaliya! 😡 He should becareful with his harsh words cause hasn't he already created enough chaos? He barged into her and the two lovelies lives! Couldn't he try doing it in a more respectful way..?! 😡 Zain Grr! He's mad irritating in this story, I feel bad for him too but he's now acting stupid! He can never win back her love like this! Aaliya better give him loads of punishment. 😆

Thanks for the awesome update Lara! 😊 Also please do update your other story (Forever Yours) soon! 😉

Originally posted by: _Sayu_

Once again here you are with your unpredictable update..

( Yep... 😊 )

I liked that conversation between zain and aaliya at parking lot...their uncontrollable emotions for each other...then zain's concern feelings for his kids..

( I am glad tht you liked the convo )

But I didn't like that kissing scene between aaliya and Jonathan, rather I was expecting some romance between Zaya..I know,there will be some romantic moments soon..right??

( Yep.. there will be... wait a little while please...)

It will be very difficult for zain to make her understand how he feels now...poor zain...hoping that rude-rough type zain will make it possible..

( Lets see what happens.. know it by yourself.. stay tuned.. huh 😉 )

Waiting for their kitkit and romance..
Update soon...

( Thanks a lot dear.. take care.. )

Originally posted by: ZainXAliya

This was a very short chapter.. 😭 I wanted more, but nice update! ❤️ Seriously Zain has crossed all his limits, I know that he badly wants Aaliya and their children but that guy better chose his words lightly instead of blackmailing my poor Aaliya! 😡 He should becareful with his harsh words cause hasn't he already created enough chaos? He barged into her and the two lovelies lives! Couldn't he try doing it in a more respectful way..?! 😡 Zain Grr! He's mad irritating in this story, I feel bad for him too but he's now acting stupid! He can never win back her love like this! Aaliya better give him loads of punishment. 😆

Thanks for the awesome update Lara! 😊 Also please do update your other story (Forever Yours) soon! 😉

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome update!!!

Short 1 but an effective...Dis update has nly increased hatred fr zain's character, many may nt agree but he hasnt faced 10% of wht aaliya faced n struggled in past n present. ...he is aware of d pain n hurt he has caused yet he took d worse way to bring her n kids bk n now addin to dat pain...I knw d reasons of his action yt cnt agree to wht hapnd. ...u may nt like d comment but den I just couldn't help but hate zain here. ...!

I just hope aaliya doesnt give uo on her strenght...so eager to see d real clash...thanks for the PM Lara!!!!

That was one surprise lara...!!!!
A perfect one for me atleast - short n sweet... 😊
But that doesnt mean i hate reading long updates n stuff... hope you understand... 😉
Its 01:15 am n i was about to doze off when i accidently opened IF n i smiled seeing that u updated. So there was no waiting, i read it there n then... while reading i was listening to 'zindagi' by shael n i realised that somehow the song is perfect for the update or atleast from zain's pov... ❤️ such a soulful song it is, im in love with the song thats why i keep listening to it... 😃
Anyways coming back to the update, it was fab...!!!!
Loved zain n the fighting with her thing, if it meant getting her love back... awww... so romantic...
Very good zain... i liked this blackmailing idea of his n i can see its already working... 😃
Aaliya will definitely go n meet zain now... Waiting for the date... oops meeting... 😛
Awesome work... u rock... love u...
Thanks fr the pm...

Ps : another thing i love is zain staying in the neighbourhood n acting all musician at night... you know "meri saamni wali khidki mejn ek chand ka tukda rehta h" types romance... ❤️

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awesome update...loved it
aliyah and jonnathan kissed
and now zain is planning to go in legally
I think aliyah will bring Jon in her life so that the kids stay with her
continue soon
thanks for the pm.

ch 18

awesome update
now what will she do
continue soon
thanks for the pm