zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 68

I m hpy u added janthon here
Nd he kissed hai !!!

Hmm o m g zain hv to work hard now
Awesome prt

lovely first class...im lost in words...miss. unexpected

Superb update!! 👍🏼 Liked the heated conversation between Zaya.. So Zain is going to follow Ayaan's advice.. Bad move Zain.. Aaliya is not that shy and docile girl anymore.. She is a strong, independent woman who will not allow anyone to come between her and her kids.. And I like her that way.. Zain's legal approach will only add fuel to the fire.. Like I said earlier he needs to prove himself in front of her and for that he needs to be more patient.. Aaliya has suffered enough now it's his turn.. Jonathon is also making his moves.. Not bad 😉.. I like it.. Eagerly waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care 😊

wooohooo!!!

awesomdm update.i don't like aliya and jon kiss,i know there is time for zaya romance but plz no jon and aliya romance plz.
love zaya converation.zain have to work hard but again he is going other way,he want to take illegal help it will be make situation more worst.waiting for next part.

Hi :)

superb dasu update devil..loved it hpe zain doesnt go to lawyer zain should do something

heyy Lara 🤗
here goes my views on chap 16th and 17th..sorry i'm late again :P
chap 16
was waiting from so long to know what it would be like when Zain comes to know abt Sarah Sammy being his kids..and the way u have wrote that chapter..it was superawesome.. I felt so bad for Zain..the feelings of Zain who just came to know that he is a father of 6 yr olds..and mother of his kids is none other than Aaliya,love of his life ..were potrayed so damn well..felt so bad for him..i just wanted to forget what he did with Aaliya but alas I cant..what he did with her was cruel and he deserves this ! the last lines of your chapter were so beautiful..just cant help but feel bad for this jerk..Zain Abdullah who is so rich..yet so poor!!
Kudos to your for writing this chapter..👏

chap 17
Ahh problems have only increased for Aaiya when Zain Abdullah entered her happy little world once again! Jon is sweet..Aaliya and Jon are dating ..well well Zain you are in for more surprises in few days😆 Cant wait to know his reaction after knowing this :v Zain and Aaliya's convo yayy yayy..this time also their convo was intense..Zain wants to be with his kids..and Aaliya wants him nowhere around her kids..he tries to convince her that he has changed but she doesnt believes him..how could she trust him again?Zain sure has to work a lot harder to gain Aaliya's trust..and oh my! talking about Lawyer was one smart move ZA ;) Cant wait to know what happens next..😛
Loved both the chapters Lara..you are a brilliant writer...Thankyou for updating🤗

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr

heyy Lara 🤗
here goes my views on chap 16th and 17th..sorry i'm late again :P
chap 16
was waiting from so long to know what it would be like when Zain comes to know abt Sarah Sammy being his kids..and the way u have wrote that chapter..it was superawesome.. I felt so bad for Zain..the feelings of Zain who just came to know that he is a father of 6 yr olds..and mother of his kids is none other than Aaliya,love of his life ..were potrayed so damn well..felt so bad for him..i just wanted to forget what he did with Aaliya but alas I cant..what he did with her was cruel and he deserves this ! the last lines of your chapter were so beautiful..just cant help but feel bad for this jerk..Zain Abdullah who is so rich..yet so poor!!
Kudos to your for writing this chapter..👏

chap 17
Ahh problems have only increased for Aaiya when Zain Abdullah entered her happy little world once again! Jon is sweet..Aaliya and Jon are dating ..well well Zain you are in for more surprises in few days😆 Cant wait to know his reaction after knowing this :v Zain and Aaliya's convo yayy yayy..this time also their convo was intense..Zain wants to be with his kids..and Aaliya wants him nowhere around her kids..he tries to convince her that he has changed but she doesnt believes him..how could she trust him again?Zain sure has to work a lot harder to gain Aaliya's trust..and oh my! talking about Lawyer was one smart move ZA ;) Cant wait to know what happens next..😛
Loved both the chapters Lara..you are a brilliant writer...Thankyou for updating🤗

Originally posted by: musicxolover

Hi :)

So, I read all your chapters in one go and I seriously love your story! ❤️

I hate what Zain did to Aaliya 😡 I think this is the first time I hate him :P

Btw, when I was reading the latest chapter, I was listening to a song called "Back From The Dead" and the lyrics just clicked with what Aaliya was going through! You should really listen to that song :P

Anyways, love your story :D