zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 65

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Amazing!! Beautiful portrayal of emotions 👏👏.. Aaliya didn't believe him.. After what happened in the past it is pretty difficult for her to trust him again & I don't really want her to let him enter their lives this soon.. He needs to earn her trust again.. Loved the ending of the update.. Zain's pain and frustration is very well portrayed.. Eagerly waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care 😊

Originally posted by: kank_dah

nice update.loved it

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Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Frst of all srry dear 4 being super late ..
N thanks alot for ur regular pm dear. ...
Abt updates. ...13,14,15n 16..
Love all chapters. ...
Specially aaliya's bonding wd sammy n sarah..
Fire scene was tooo scary ..
Really feel sad for sarah..n the way aaliya try to save her child ..its amazing.
Its true now she is no more old aaliya..
She isgreat mother of two lovely children n successful business woman. .
Love this role of aaliya..
Vry beautifully u expressed zain emotions. ...
His inner turmoil n the way he scared of the thought of aaliya's wedding. ..
Aayan n barqt scene was also amazing. ..poor Aayan suffer bcz of zain..
Its great decision to telling abt children to zain...
Now he feel more guilty on his deeds..
Great wrk dear..
Keep rocking
Thanks again for regular pm..

Originally posted by: shaalivirman

woah Aaliya said him the truth man this was awesome

awww zain missing their frst things

aah continue sooonnn

thnx fr he pm

Originally posted by: kokubaba

loved the way u described the pain of aliaya n zain...zain reaction after learning the truth made me feel so bad for him poor guy...i know u will have some devil idea to bring in the new twist...eagerly waiting for the twist...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...kep going girll haats off n standing ovation...no words to describe how i feel after i read ur updates⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: iqrakanwal

continue this ...

Originally posted by: divikash

sorry yaar, went outside so couldn't read soon

but amazing, piece of writting like always even though its small

loved it more

and now i want to know how he tries his best get her...them

and i also want to see asad's reaction to this new...even osman's

OMG!!! :O :O I read all the 16 chapters in one go!
must say.. amazing work! 👏 😉

UPDATE SOON! WAITING! ^_^

Originally posted by: maclean

its really refreshing to read zaya after tiering exams :)))))))) take care thanks a llot fr pm

Originally posted by: nikhishanaik

OMG!!! :O :O I read all the 16 chapters in one go!
must say.. amazing work! 👏 😉

UPDATE SOON! WAITING! ^_^