zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 63

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RiyaDutta

Too good...loving itπŸ‘

well written story⭐️ n I adore those kids 😳

Thank u dear... 😊😊...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Arul97

Its as usual excellent dearπŸ‘πŸ€—, sorry i was lacking in time these days to comment about your update, sorry again. Waiting for the next one dear.

Its ok dear.. but its also true tht I missed u... 😭...
Thnks and take care... tada... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ZainXAliya

Awesome work Lara, really loving your updates and falling in love with these cuties. ❀️ Really awesome! πŸ˜‰ Also you expressed both Zain and Aaliya's feelings beautifully. 😳 Thank you for this awesome chapter, incredibly done. πŸ‘
I'm still on Aaliya's side, I don't know if you already planned your next update but I am hoping Zain to keep trying harder, I mean she's not going to fall for him again but she will believe him within time. Also I do hope to see more ZaYa moments in the next update with Jonathon as an extra. πŸ˜‰ So great work haha! πŸ€—

Obviously zain will have to try harder... 😑... lots of more pain in his way I guess... πŸ˜‰...
Thnks a lot for ur lovely comment.
And definitely there will be jonathon in the next updt...
Take care.. love u...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: j&b84

Wow just great no words to desc I really love ur ff on zaya.. It's been ages I read just a beautifully written ff... Pls update soon

Ohh... 😊.. thnk u so much dear...
Glad tht u liked it... πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
zain deserves all this pain
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Thank u so much dear... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow

absolutely brilliant
totally loved it

Thanks yaar... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Lovely update!!!

Aaliya is her world goin bk in time with all hurt..she has built d wall around her...nw is d strenght test, dis sudden entry of past may bring in cracks for d start cz he lived In regret but wouldnt let aaliya leave.

Johnathan wil play nice role is brining in d possessive side of zain, cz aaliya still thinks dat he hates her n playin his charm to have d kids...so trust needs to b wrked 1st...eagerly waitin which step will b taken next n thanks for the PM Lara!!!

You are right dear... lets see what happens... πŸ˜‰..
Take care... and thnks honey..πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nofan

ayeee such an amazing update

update soon :D
and make them a perfect family :D

Ayee... πŸ˜ƒ thnks dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29

Amazing update...the much needed convo was here..bt it shud gt betrrr..bhott kam dialouges the..i thot dey r gonns hav a big heated fight..bt never the less..it was nice!!
Zain helplessness was beautifully been described.n aaliyaas pain too!
πŸ˜†

I suck at writing dialogues... and I guess I really sucked at the last updt... 😳😳...
Thnks for bearing me anyway...
Take care... 😊😊... will see you soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zainaliya-12

I loved it, it was amazing😊

Thnks...😊

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