zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 60

Originally posted by: AshesToDust

another wonderful update... how i love this story! finally zain is there all helpless all because of no one but he himself.

i loved these lines...

he successful business tycoon... the man with all the wealth and the power to get everything he wished for... sat in someone's back porch steps, suddenly realising how poor he was... when his whole world lies there in the house.. and he wanted nothing else but to be a part of that world... a part of them.

beautiful

Update soon!

Originally posted by: madhuxyz

I didnt realise when it ended
Too good I Really loved it
U r amazing dear
U portrayed zains emotions very well
Well done
Thanks for such a nice update

Originally posted by: zaya93200

omg!!!! i am so in love with it!!!

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Too good...loving it👏

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

u make me emotional with this update.u write so beautifully that i can feel ZaYa pain,frustation and anger.
last part was best,what Zain did that morning he deserve this pain but again feel bad for him as he repenting badly.can't wait to see what he'll be do to make his family his forever.

Its as usual excellent dear👏🤗, sorry i was lacking in time these days to comment about your update, sorry again. Waiting for the next one dear.

Originally posted by: RiyaDutta

Too good...loving it👏

well written story⭐️ n I adore those kids 😳

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Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

<font size="3">Yes it ended soon.. cause it was a little short... 😳..</font>

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<strong><font size="3">Thnks for ur comemnt dear... take care.. love u... </font>

No probs dear
U know what I read. It thrice to satisfy my self
Great update yaar seriously loved it
U made My day 😳 😳 😳 thanks. A lot for regular updates

Awesome work Lara, really loving your updates and falling in love with these cuties. ❤️ Really awesome! 😉 Also you expressed both Zain and Aaliya's feelings beautifully. 😳 Thank you for this awesome chapter, incredibly done. 👏
I'm still on Aaliya's side, I don't know if you already planned your next update but I am hoping Zain to keep trying harder, I mean she's not going to fall for him again but she will believe him within time. Also I do hope to see more ZaYa moments in the next update with Jonathon as an extra. 😉 So great work haha! 🤗

Wow just great no words to desc I really love ur ff on zaya.. It's been ages I read just a beautifully written ff... Pls update soon