zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 58

Originally posted by: kank_dah

every chapter is written so beautifully.loved it.want zain to know that sarah nd Sammy are his kids.continue soon

Originally posted by: divikash

pretty good, loved barqat and ayaan

i eagerly wait for your update after reading the current, but i get to see it at the unexpected time

which makes me scream in excitement

waiting for the same eagerly

Ohkay so I have school tomorrow and I am up til 1:30 am just, having finished reading all the parts of ur fiction.

At last im done wid d last three chapters...
Wat a relief...!!!!

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Unexpected... 😉 thts my other name...

so here im again lara but sorry this time i have to be quick... i am really busy these days... but next tym pakka bda wala comment... ek dum nainu istyle... 😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: aparnalokam

Your update is awesome...
Aaliya is avoiding zain...
Each nd every part is superb...
Ty so much 4 Pm

Originally posted by: naina927

so here im again lara but sorry this time i have to be quick... i am really busy these days... ( Ok.. I understand..😊 ) but next tym pakka bda wala comment... ek dum nainu istyle... 😃 😃 😃

( Fine... I'll wait... for the naina style comment... 😃 )

this one is for chap 13, 14 n 15

i just read them last night...

chapter 13 beginning, i thought bas iss chappy mein confrontation pakka... but no... ( Wanted to spice things up..😳 ) zain just saw aaliya... ayaan... god he stopped zain from meeting aaliya... and somewhere zain did belive he hallucinated aaliya... and again they met... but thsi time thanks to ayaan... he is really behaving like some housewife dude... 😆 😆 😆 but i like him... he seems fun loving and i love people who are chilled out n happening 😉 sarah... aww my baby... i also got scared for her sammy is such a protective brother... i like that young boy as well... 😃 wohhhuuu the hero came to help aaliya and the twins... daddy superhero... ⭐️ ⭐️ yes zain was a rude scumbag but i cant hate him you see... ( Afterall.. hero hai humara... ⭐️ ) looking at him, melts my heart... 😉 ❤️ ( Aaye haaye... 😳😳 ) anyways he did save aaliya and sarah... then the moment he looked at her... awww... and that comparision thing... sitting on knees on the floor... 👏 👏 👏 zain was shocked will be an understatement but he kinda knows that he is the father... yes he was scared and who wouldnt be... losing your love and finding it back after 6 long years and then scaring what if his love was still his... ohhh god how much i love to read such things... stories with this topic interests me a lot... 😉 😳 😳 zain now wants to talk to aaliya but she is scared... thats also kinda usual... agree with her pov... aaliya n ayaan... 🤣 omg... 🤣 what a beginning...!!!! reminded me of ruchi n karan... 😉 😃 😃 ( Yeh.. tht was one similar jodi 😉 ) their love story will be interesting, for sure n now waiting for zain n aaliya confrontation... 😊 😊 😊

( You wont have to wait for long then... 😉 )

thanks for being patience with me n my res unres thing... 😳

( Ekhi comment mein thnks and sorry eik saath... hawww...😲 )

love u tons... muahhh... ❤️

( Love u too... muaahhh... 😃 )

Originally posted by: TashaForever

Ohkay so I have school tomorrow and I am up til 1:30 am just, having finished reading all the parts of ur fiction.

Take a bow mam :'')

Awesome!

You earned, yourself a new fan.

Update soon!

Love,

Tanya

Originally posted by: divikash

nice, your other name is unexpected

then

miss. unexpected😉...why aren't you updating your other ff, of which im a big fan too

come on...u update 15 chapters...thats still in 11th😭

so preety pls...with cherry on top, update that also😳