zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 50

Originally posted by: preity_d

amazing... the perfect apt reactions they gave... Way to go in writing girl... Superb...

awesome update
loved all the emotions you portrayed
continue soon
thanks for the pm

superb...zain reactiion ws out of the world...storyy is progresssing beaitifully loving it...loads of hugs to you...for such a beautiful story...eagrly waiting to know wat wud be the next step of zain n aliayaaa 😳

Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak

Amazing update!

( Thank u so much... muaahh.. )

Arghh zain left?? but why? didnt he realize that they are his kids??

( All these questions will be answered in the next up... 😊... )

Cant wait for the next update!

( That will be updated soon... hold on.. )

OMG i just realized that you dedicated this update to me...Thank you so much dear🤗

You made my day😃

( My pleasure dear... 😃... and no probs... sooner or later you did see tht huh... 😳 )

I was so excited to read the update that i didnt notice it earlier sorry

Originally posted by: gowtu

Aaahh awesome prt..
Amzng expressions thy gv after seeing ech other..
Perfectly written

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Fast n superb updates dear...

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

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Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

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wow, sorry yaar i saw it now only

Amazing update... Written beautifully... Loved it 😃