zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 49

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr

Heyy Lara..
( Hey dear... 😊 )
Sorry I know i'm late :P( Its ok... I guess I am way too fast these days... 😆 )
so here I am with my comments :)

Chap 12
Sarah and Sammy are such cuties..(i kno I m saying this for hundredth time..just cnt help it :P)just love them..They towed the dog with two leashes and both were pulling him in opposite directions..Poor Ross😆

( Two kids and one dog.. yeh toh hona hi tha... 😆😆 )

Ayaan wearing Pink apron..making pancakes and singing a love song..🤣 This cracked me up😆
and Omg Zain and Sarah Sammy's first meet was scary..and Sweet..!!I loved loved loved Zain and the twins part..esp the part where he felt unusual when he Sarah or Sammy touched him..very well written👏👏

( Thanks 😳 )

Haha the kids..they drenched Barkat..well she deserved it..and zain encouraging them to go ahead with their plan was awesome😆Aaliya punished kids and Barkat too😆
and the last part was just beautiful.. loved the chapter!!

Chap 13
Zain immediately recognized her voice..and ran after Aaliya..sad he wasnt able to see her face..he really thought that girl wasnt aaliya coz she wore revealing dress.well Zain Aaliya is changed for good now!She is no more that old Shy Aaliya..she has grown into a Confident woman!!( You are right... )
Good that Ayaan also knows about Aaliya..Ayaan took Zain with him for grocery shopping😆 LOL Zain and Ayaan's kitkit is a treat to read..I'm glad he has a friend like ayaan 😃
Oh Zain and Aaliya were about to come face to face..but this time too he missed seeing her face :( Sarah is in danger..the caring mother that aaliya is..she jumped in that room which had caught on fire to save her baccha oh man such amazing scene..Loveddd it..Zain is going to save them right..Omg cant wait cant wait to read the next chapter!!

Lara both the chapters were fab..you are just amazing...Big Big Hugs for giving us longg updates🤗🤗 and Thankyou for updating🤗
( Aww... hugs you back munchkin... 🤗🤗 thnks again for the beautiful comment... take care... love u... )

Originally posted by: preity_d

Lara from the last few chapters I couldn't comment but I loved every bit of it...

( It's ok dear... now you commented, it feels so good to read your comments... 😊 )

The way Aaliya managed herself n became confident... She all alone created her new identity in a foreign, truly commendable...

( Yep.. a lot of good things came out of her struggles in life... a new herself is the first one... )

The much I read Jonathan seemed sweet to me, I hope he plays a vital role in this story... U know I hate the name Barkat now a days thanks to serial that though this barkat is so nice I can't stand her 😛 n aaliya and Sammy Sarah's bonding so superb, the way they prayed in front of window and Zain looked at them from far, reminded me of Kal ho na ho... Aww Zain meeting his babies so heart whelming, n then he saw Aaliya jogging but he was sure she will not wore shuch sexy clothes... he he he maza aaya padke... 🤣 ab dekhna hain what will be Aaliya's reaction to see Zain as her savior, n what will be Zain's reaction to see Aaliya in new Avatar... Lara update soon... 😉

( I do updt soon preity dear... 😉😉... thanks a lot for ur comment... love u a lot.. take care.. have fun... )

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

<font size="3">Well it feels really great to knw tht you like this story that much... a big hug to u.</font>

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<font size="3">But dear... u need to concentrate on ur studies too... Otherwise I will feel really guilty</font>

<font size="3">if u do bad in that case... 😕...</font>

<strong><font size="3">All the best for ur exams...</font>

<font size="3">Take care...</font>

Originally posted by: RiyaDutta

WOW...this is getting better n better superbly written👏

early waiting for next chapter😳

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