zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 47

eeekkksss!!! they met!!! wowowowo!!! their reactions i wanna see

OMG OMG OMG I'm dieing waiting for the next chapter..I have an exam tomorrow but every 10minutes I keep going onto IF to see if out have updated or not..so I haven't really got much revision done :s ..pleassseee update really quickly:( I can't live like this hahaha eagerly waiting for the next update...QUICK...I'd do ANYTHING!!!!!!!!!

Heyy Lara..

Sorry I know i'm late :P
so here I am with my comments :)

Chap 12
Sarah and Sammy are such cuties..(i kno I m saying this for hundredth time..just cnt help it :P)just love them..They towed the dog with two leashes and both were pulling him in opposite directions..Poor Ross😆
Ayaan wearing Pink apron..making pancakes and singing a love song..🤣 This cracked me up😆
and Omg Zain and Sarah Sammy's first meet was scary..and Sweet..!!I loved loved loved Zain and the twins part..esp the part where he felt unusual when he Sarah or Sammy touched him..very well written👏👏
Haha the kids..they drenched Barkat..well she deserved it..and zain encouraging them to go ahead with their plan was awesome😆Aaliya punished kids and Barkat too😆
and the last part was just beautiful.. loved the chapter!!

Chap 13
Zain immediately recognized her voice..and ran after Aaliya..sad he wasnt able to see her face..he really thought that girl wasnt aaliya coz she wore revealing dress.well Zain Aaliya is changed for good now!She is no more that old Shy Aaliya..she has grown into a Confident woman!!
Good that Ayaan also knows about Aaliya..Ayaan took Zain with him for grocery shopping😆 LOL Zain and Ayaan's kitkit is a treat to read..I'm glad he has a friend like ayaan 😃
Oh Zain and Aaliya were about to come face to face..but this time too he missed seeing her face :( Sarah is in danger..the caring mother that aaliya is..she jumped in that room which had caught on fire to save her baccha oh man such amazing scene..Loveddd it..Zain is going to save them right..Omg cant wait cant wait to read the next chapter!!

Lara both the chapters were fab..you are just amazing...Big Big Hugs for giving us longg updates🤗🤗 and Thankyou for updating🤗

read the whole ff in one go

Originally posted by: _Sayu_

Awesome update...i was imagining while reading...n then u stopped that face off scene incomplete... Couldn't u wrote just little more in this cahpter abt their face off..
U r making us more eager now...
I hate u for this...
Update soon... Waiting...

Originally posted by: RiyaDutta

Wow chap 13 already 👏 loved this chapter ⭐️
Zain feeling that lady is Aliya 😳

Loved it. N wen in need Zain came to his family's rescue 😳

n I adore those kids 😛

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Wohoo one more super fast update!! Thank you Lara 🤗..

Finally Zain & Aaliya met and that too in a very dangerous and complicated situation.. Brilliant update!! 👏 I want to give a big hug to Sarah and Sammy.. They were so scared.. I felt so bad when little Sammy was trying to hold back his tears and poor Sarah was locked inside the room :(.. I really want read Zain's pov now.. He will be extremely shocked after meeting all of them.. Liked those moments when Zain couldn't see Aaliya's face but felt her presence around him.. Btw Ayaan sounds so funny.. He is annoying Zain a lot and I'm loving it ;p.. Eagerly waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care 😃

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
zain so close to meet aaliah but couldn't meet her
finally they both will meet now... Hope Sammy asked help from zain
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Lara from the last few chapters I couldn't comment but I loved every bit of it... The way Aaliya managed herself n became confident... She all alone created her new identity in a foreign, truly commendable... The much I read Jonathan seemed sweet to me, I hope he plays a vital role in this story... U know I hate the name Barkat now a days thanks to serial that though this barkat is so nice I can't stand her 😛 n aaliya and Sammy Sarah's bonding so superb, the way they prayed in front of window and Zain looked at them from far, reminded me of Kal ho na ho... Aww Zain meeting his babies so heart whelming, n then he saw Aaliya jogging but he was sure she will not wore shuch sexy clothes... he he he maza aaya padke... 🤣 ab dekhna hain what will be Aaliya's reaction to see Zain as her savior, n what will be Zain's reaction to see Aaliya in new Avatar... Lara update soon... 😉

Are u updating within 3 or 4 minutes??? say it? then I will wait..