zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 46

Lara / Clara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: gowtu
Em having goose bumps al over my body..

Did any one tel u u r an amzng writter..

Awesome updt tht was...

Loved it
So zain was there..

Continue soon plz..

Awww.. dear thank u so much...

It feels really out of the world to know that how much you are liking this story... really 😊...

Will try to cont asap... infact I'm gonna go start writing now... 😉

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Riya Dutta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#452

Wow chap 13 already 👏 loved this chapter ⭐️
Zain feeling that lady is Aliya 😳

Loved it. N wen in need Zain came to his family's rescue 😳

n I adore those kids 😛

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Meera Chaudhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#453

Wohoo one more super fast update!! Thank you Lara 🤗..

Finally Zain & Aaliya met and that too in a very dangerous and complicated situation.. Brilliant update!! 👏 I want to give a big hug to Sarah and Sammy.. They were so scared.. I felt so bad when little Sammy was trying to hold back his tears and poor Sarah was locked inside the room :(.. I really want read Zain's pov now.. He will be extremely shocked after meeting all of them.. Liked those moments when Zain couldn't see Aaliya's face but felt her presence around him.. Btw Ayaan sounds so funny.. He is annoying Zain a lot and I'm loving it ;p.. Eagerly waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care 😃

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kokubaba

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Posted: 10 years ago

#454

oh my Ghosh...

so soon face offf wat an entry zain gave..loved hari vali entry...eagerly waiting for faceoff

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niki795

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Posted: 10 years ago

#455

awesome update
zain so close to meet aaliah but couldn't meet her
finally they both will meet now... Hope Sammy asked help from zain
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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Sayali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#456

Awesome update...i was imagining while reading...n then u stopped that face off scene incomplete... Couldn't u wrote just little more in this cahpter abt their face off..
U r making us more eager now...
I hate u for this...
Update soon... Waiting...

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Maneesha Reddy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#457

The moment i saw this edit...i can only remember your FF...😆

Aaliya, zain sarah & sammy 😉

Edited by Maneesha_Shanak - 10 years ago

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Syed695

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Posted: 10 years ago

#458

Fantastic update!!!

Zain got d jhatkedar start of d day...

Previously he hallucinated her wen she appeared in real he thought hez day dreamin...humans r strange creatures..😆 sachai kabhi nahi maante...!!

Lekin like d small missed encounters, cz dis only increased his restlessness. ..and like d differene in aaliya..den n now...shez d hotshot moma with d tigress attitude..d quite aaliya is no more der..she was killed in d past..n dis is even interesting as dis will make an awesome face off n dis time he has no option to walk over her...d tables have turned now...n yes like d way dey r bought face to face...waitin for next n thanks for the PM Lara!!!!

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