zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 45

OMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON...

Great chapter. Soo mch suspense because of how you eneded it. I wont be able to stop thinking about what's going to happen next. Please update soon.

absolutely brilliant update

Em having goose bumps al over my body..

Did any one tel u u r an amzng writter..

Awesome updt tht was...

Loved it
So zain was there..

Continue soon plz..

Omg u dedicated dis chp 2 me 😲 😲
Ty so much baby 😊
Awesome update..
As i alrdy tld u ki dat u r an awesome writter..
And finaly dey met wow
Ty so much 4 pm
Sry dear i was late in cmmntng 😭

A 2nd update in a day...OMG...I can't believe it...you just rockkk ...Thanksss..

Now moving onto the chapter...I tried visualising alia in shorts and tank top with a high pony but couldn't. ...then I tried from zains nazar and there stands the beauty who alone can play the strings to zains heart...

when Jonathan said a beach meeting my first thought was he was doing a surprise date...and I didn't like the idea...then I am like let's hope zain is the client...beach par milna. ..wooow that would have been some meeting...but then you had something else in store for us...


Moving to the next scene...Ayaaann. ..zain to aliya ka. ..so I can make do with ayaan. ..hahahaha such a sweetheart. ..He seems like that good boys who you can introduce to your mom on the first date...he he he he. ..


And what happened to my Sarah baby...that good for nothing sarvanah always gets someone into trouble..be it her dog Ross or she herself...sorry for being harsh on her...but it's all concern for our sarahhh. ...I love how Sammy is trying to be all strong and mature..bless aliya for getting back and risking a few bones to go in by the pipe and try rescue Sarah. ..


And then...omggg. ..comes in our maestro...non other than zainnn. ..I can't believe they finally meet...was waiting for it to happen...and now that it does...It is very hard to digest...Sarah and Sammy will look up to him as as a superhero from the marvel comics and aliya will be in a dilemma...omg. ..I wanna see her handle this situation...poor thing...zain will do the maths and figure out they r his kids...and she will not know what to do...


You have given me a double scoop with 2 back to back updates in 1 day...how about a triple sundae to complete the weekend...I'll try and add the cherry on top with my comments. .he he he he. .

OMG finally Aaliya and Zain came face to face...that was an unexpected update...poor baby sarah was scared hell out of her...

Originally posted by: naina927

im here to unres all those res i did...

i know im not that late... no honestly im...

but what to do...

1. i was busy

2. i didnt get the time to...

3. you are too fast in updating...

4. bcos of reason no. 3, i kept laging behind... 🤢

5. u didnt reply to my previous unres... 😡

( Bapre bap... itne saare excuses 😲 !! Dont worry dear... 1. I will be getting busy too after a week or so... 😭

2. 😕

3. I will be really slow after a week or so... trust me... then it will be ok I guess... 😆 ...

4. Aabtoh.. aadat si ho gayi hai... Tune jaab first iss update mein first comment ki.. I was like... 😲 yeh kya hogaya...

I did reply to your previous in pg 54 dear, you didnt see it ... I guess.. 😭... Pls.. jaake dekhle woh... Hum bewaafa hargis naa thei par hum waafa kar naa saake... 😭 )

ENOUGH OF REASONS I GUESS... 😳

( Pheww... )

this is the unres that i will be doing for how many chapters, i also dont know... 😳 again your fault... 😛

blame game going on... 😆 😆 😆

( Hai agar dusmaan jamaana.. gaam nahi gaam nahi... 😆 )

anyways my previous res ended when zaya slept together... 😳 ohh god it was chapter 4 🤢

isi liye kahun ke aisa lagta hai sadiya beet gayi... 😆 😆

( Saadiyon puraani aisi eik kahani rahe gayi rahe gayi... aankaheen 🤢)

so i was very sure zain will break aaliya's heart and he did it... what to expect from a jerk like him... 👏 👏 👏 very good zain... you maintained your image dude... 🤢 and the painful words he said to her... must have made her feel like a wh**e... i mean any girl would feel like this... if she gets to hear it from the man she wants to submit herself to... zain i will kill you... 😡 😡 😡 very efficiently he broke aaliya, her herat, her trust and everything she had in herself... and ohh god he sort of realised he feels something for aaliya... i felt like slapping him...

at that point, i really felt aaliya must have been a little strong and high headed. i really wanted her to stand in front of that jerk and tell him that THAT night also didnt mean anything to her... it would have been a slap on his face... but i know her character is not like ti, so i should expect much from her...

( Yep.. I had to maintain the charachters 'cause this was needed for the future.. right ?? Story line had to be like only this... )

so she did cry like a baby and tried to kill her... stupid aaliya...😡 😡 why to kill yourself for a person who doesnt even cares for you... a simple solution that i have found out from things is TO BE HAPPY IN FRONT OF THOSE WHO HATE YOU... IT KILLS THEM... 😉 ⭐️ but on seconds thoughts, i understand she was emotionally unstable at that moment... so granted but suicide is never an option... cowards do that... 😳

( Again you are right but situations make us do the wrong things sometimes... but aaliya could stop herself in time... isn't that the best thing... 😊 )

glad aaliya didnt take that step and decided to stand for herself... good job girlie... love it... 👏 👏 👏 leaving everything behind isnt easy and it needs a lot of guts... aaliya is really a brave girl and this step of hers, showed it... im soo happy... 😃 😃 😃 but that letter... oh my god, it brought tears in my eyes... 😭 😭 😭

( Aww... naina cried... 😭 )

coming to asad... ohh god i never thought he will be devastated after aaliya left... yes i thought he will be angry or something... but aaliya leaving, did brought out the brotherly side in his character. then the way he stormed out to meet zain... wowww i loved it... really had some action that time... dhisum dhisum... 😃 ohh god usmaan get to know all this and that too this way... 😲 zain toh gaya... 🤢 🤢 chalo he deserves this silent treatment and its the best bcos it eats up the guilty person... 😉

( Silence speakes louder than words... )

ohh god... zain realised he loves aaliya... bad timing dude... 🤢 🤢 they all hell bent on finding aaliya... and what they found... aaliya dead... that scene was so touchy... again made me cry... 😭 😭 😭 it was like the beginning of zain's misery... pay back time zain abdulla... 😳 a phase of a new beginning... a beginning of things getting worse, guilts building up, lonelyness and repentence surrounding them...

( Khudrat ka badla... 😕... what did I just say 😲... this name can be used for a film... ⭐️ )

aaliya also got to know that everyone thinks she is dead. this is better i guess... now she can start her life with a new name... i mean she did change her surname, and thats enough... 😳 a new identity, a new place, a new beginning... greattt... happy for aaliya... 😃 but sad for AsYa and zain...

after the leap, a new and confident aaliya... thats what i wanted to see... now she is complete in all terms i guess... life and time changes us and thats what exactly happened with aaliya... TWINS...???? 😲 😲 aaliya got pregnant... shittt... 🤢 🤢 i dont like it...

( Wanted to write a story with kids involved... 😳... that desire actually was the reason for the twins arrival. )

anyways coming to the story again, sammy and sarah... cute kidos... i love them... ❤️ unlike the show, i like barkat here... 😃 sammy is like his daddy... in real terms, junior zain he is... sarah is such a sweetie... cutie little baby... muahh... 😃 😃 😃 sammy is soo protective of sarah... aww... u know i always wanted en elder brother, which i definitely not have... but thanks to god, i have this protectiveness freak now in my life... 😉 😳

( I am so happy for you... teri khwaaish puri hogayi... bhaagwan ke ghar mein der hai andher nahi... 😃 )

i love the twins lara... ❤️ no doubt... and aaliya is doing a great job... 👏 👏 being a single parent is not easy yaar... 😳 she loves her babies soo much and plus she doesnt regret that night... bcos if by chance she did, she would have never been able to love her kids, that way she does... cmon lets be practically... if she did regret that night and hate zain, she would have gone for an abortion and its not really a big thing these days... 😳 😳 thats what i think i would do if i face such a situation... 😳

anyways whats the use of thinking too much... its just a story... 😉 and i should enjoy it... and im defintely enjoying it... 😃 😃 😃 especially the boss asked me out phase that just started 😉

i again liked the zain suraiya scene where suraiya said that aaliya is dead and zain should move on... i read that portion twice i think... 😳

( Really ?? 😊 )

zain found a way to escape but who knew that way will lead him on the way of getting his life, his family back... i was so excited for zaya to meet and i know you have written it in this chap... i mean in chappy 13... thanks to the comments i read 😆 😆 i will also read it soon...

( Haa.. jaaldi sei paarlein.. will be waiting for your comment... )

zain with his twins... what a scene...!!!! loved it ❤️

that balcony scene was also fab... do anjaane ajnabee type situation... though the two arent strangers... loving it more n more... good job... 👏 👏 👏

now i want to say something very important... an honest opinion which doesnt really matters now... 😳

i didnt wanted aaliya to get pregnant... i would have liked her without the kids because the kids would definitely one day push her towards zain... i would have liked to see a very very different aaliya... the one with no rule book... the one with hate towards zain and aaliya... the one with absolutely no emotions left... the one with a strong personality and never forgive attitude... ARE YOU GETTING WHAT IM SAYING...???? 😳 😳 😳

( Yep.. I can totally understand what you are trying to say. This story.. I wanted to do something different with it.. you see. As what you are saying.. or were wanting.. I already wrote that kind of story line on virman .. my other ff " beintehaan ".. right ?? On zaya.. I wanted to involve kids and see how things go... )

but seriously im liking the flow of the story now as i have accepted the storyline, the characters and most of all sarah n sammy...

( I am so happy that you did and now you are liking it... 😊..

Thank u so much for this wonderful looong comment, I love reading your comments and I love long ones.. you are a sweetheart naina... love u... muaaahhh )

PS : I feel like i typed an update... 😆 😆 😆

( That's the typical naina style... and the style I adore... comment mein bhi eik update chupa hota hai... 😆 )

Originally posted by: hakunamatata

A 2nd update in a day...OMG...I can't believe it...you just rockkk ...Thanksss..
( The pleasure is all mine dear... 😊... Readers happy toh writer happy... )
😊Now moving onto the chapter...I tried visualising alia in shorts and tank top with a high pony but couldn't. ...then I tried from zains nazar and there stands the beauty who alone can play the strings to zains heart...
( 😳)
😳when Jonathan said a beach meeting my first thought was he was doing a surprise date...and I didn't like the idea...then I am like let's hope zain is the client...beach par milna. ..wooow that would have been some meeting...but then you had something else in store for us...
( Yep.. I wanted to do something masala wala, beach would have been a little too much typical or laid back type... I guess, no woner that would have been a romantic thing but .. you know what I mean ? 😕 )

Moving to the next scene...Ayaaann. ..zain to aliya ka. ..so I can make do with ayaan. ..hahahaha such a sweetheart. ..He seems like that good boys who you can introduce to your mom on the first date...he he he he. ..
( You are right buddy... Ayaan is a cute thing here... 😳 )

And what happened to my Sarah baby...that good for nothing sarvanah always gets someone into trouble..be it her dog Ross or she herself...sorry for being harsh on her...but it's all concern for our sarahhh. ...I love how Sammy is trying to be all strong and mature..bless aliya for getting back and risking a few bones to go in by the pipe and try rescue Sarah. ..
( Mommy's the best ⭐️ )

And then...omggg. ..comes in our maestro...non other than zainnn. ..I can't believe they finally meet...was waiting for it to happen...and now that it does...It is very hard to digest...Sarah and Sammy will look up to him as as a superhero from the marvel comics and aliya will be in a dilemma...omg. ..I wanna see her handle this situation...poor thing...zain will do the maths and figure out they r his kids...and she will not know what to do...

( Lots of trouble on the way.. [ evil laugh ] )
You have given me a double scoop with 2 back to back updates in 1 day...how about a triple sundae to complete the weekend...I'll try and add the cherry on top with my comments. .he he he he. .
( Sugar level baar jayega honey... control...😆
And thnks a lot for your beautiful long comment dear...

Love you... take care... will try to updt asap... )

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Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak

OMG finally Aaliya and Zain came face to face...that was an unexpected update...poor baby sarah was scared hell out of her...

excited for the next part for zain's reaction...