zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 44

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Posted: 10 years ago
finally they'll meet hope so
i cant believe you stopped there dear
now im having my heart at my throat,


lovely update, superbπŸ€—, here's my bone crushing hug
pls pls pls update soon yaar
cant wait at all
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was an amazing face off, hope you update soon Lara. I'm dying to read both of their point of views. 😳 Thanks for the PM. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi! I'm a silent member on the forum and came across you ff and have been reading it diligently! I think this story is absolutely wonderful and i look foward to your updates everyday! You write really well and i love the way you have developed the story. very creative! Great job! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey! I m in love with ur ff. u did not reply my earlier post.:( I had sent u buddy request n plz add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29

Nice update loved it!!
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Thanks 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: candy...

Hey! I m in love with ur ff. u did not reply my earlier post.:( I had sent u buddy request n plz add me in ur pm list.

Hey.. thnks a lot for ur comments dear... 😊😊...
Couldnt reply a few other peoples comments too... 😭
Will accept ur rqst and add u to my list definitely.. dont yaa worry...
Take care...
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Posted: 10 years ago
MY UNRES IS COMING...
JUST ON ITS WAY...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh it was a great update, but why a cliffhanger...hope u will update soon...would be great if within next few hrs...lolz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Zain and Aliya will finally meet eachother. What will be their reactions? Can't wait to read next. Loved it.:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
im here to unres all those res i did...
i know im not that late... no honestly im...
but what to do...
1. i was busy
2. i didnt get the time to...
3. you are too fast in updating...
4. bcos of reason no. 3, i kept laging behind... 🀒
5. u didnt reply to my previous unres... 😑
ENOUGH OF REASONS I GUESS... 😳
this is the unres that i will be doing for how many chapters, i also dont know... 😳 again your fault... πŸ˜›
blame game going on... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
anyways my previous res ended when zaya slept together... 😳 ohh god it was chapter 4 🀒
isi liye kahun ke aisa lagta hai sadiya beet gayi... πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
so i was very sure zain will break aaliya's heart and he did it... what to expect from a jerk like him... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ very good zain... you maintained your image dude... 🀒 and the painful words he said to her... must have made her feel like a wh**e... i mean any girl would feel like this... if she gets to hear it from the man she wants to submit herself to... zain i will kill you... 😑 😑 😑 very efficiently he broke aaliya, her herat, her trust and everything she had in herself... and ohh god he sort of realised he feels something for aaliya... i felt like slapping him...
at that point, i really felt aaliya must have been a little strong and high headed. i really wanted her to stand in front of that jerk and tell him that THAT night also didnt mean anything to her... it would have been a slap on his face... but i know her character is not like ti, so i should expect much from her...
so she did cry like a baby and tried to kill her... stupid aaliya...😑 😑 why to kill yourself for a person who doesnt even cares for you... a simple solution that i have found out from things is TO BE HAPPY IN FRONT OF THOSE WHO HATE YOU... IT KILLS THEM... πŸ˜‰ ⭐️ but on seconds thoughts, i understand she was emotionally unstable at that moment... so granted but suicide is never an option... cowards do that... 😳
glad aaliya didnt take that step and decided to stand for herself... good job girlie... love it... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ leaving everything behind isnt easy and it needs a lot of guts... aaliya is really a brave girl and this step of hers, showed it... im soo happy... πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ but that letter... oh my god, it brought tears in my eyes... 😭 😭 😭
coming to asad... ohh god i never thought he will be devastated after aaliya left... yes i thought he will be angry or something... but aaliya leaving, did brought out the brotherly side in his character. then the way he stormed out to meet zain... wowww i loved it... really had some action that time... dhisum dhisum... πŸ˜ƒ ohh god usmaan get to know all this and that too this way... 😲 zain toh gaya... 🀒 🀒 chalo he deserves this silent treatment and its the best bcos it eats up the guilty person... πŸ˜‰
ohh god... zain realised he loves aaliya... bad timing dude... 🀒 🀒 they all hell bent on finding aaliya... and what they found... aaliya dead... that scene was so touchy... again made me cry... 😭 😭 😭 it was like the beginning of zain's misery... pay back time zain abdulla... 😳 a phase of a new beginning... a beginning of things getting worse, guilts building up, lonelyness and repentence surrounding them...
aaliya also got to know that everyone thinks she is dead. this is better i guess... now she can start her life with a new name... i mean she did change her surname, and thats enough... 😳 a new identity, a new place, a new beginning... greattt... happy for aaliya... πŸ˜ƒ but sad for AsYa and zain...
after the leap, a new and confident aaliya... thats what i wanted to see... now she is complete in all terms i guess... life and time changes us and thats what exactly happened with aaliya... TWINS...???? 😲 😲 aaliya got pregnant... shittt... 🀒 🀒 i dont like it...
anyways coming to the story again, sammy and sarah... cute kidos... i love them... ❀️ unlike the show, i like barkat here... πŸ˜ƒ sammy is like his daddy... in real terms, junior zain he is... sarah is such a sweetie... cutie little baby... muahh... πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ sammy is soo protective of sarah... aww... u know i always wanted en elder brother, which i definitely not have... but thanks to god, i have this protectiveness freak now in my life... πŸ˜‰ 😳
i love the twins lara... ❀️ no doubt... and aaliya is doing a great job... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ being a single parent is not easy yaar... 😳 she loves her babies soo much and plus she doesnt regret that night... bcos if by chance she did, she would have never been able to love her kids, that way she does... cmon lets be practically... if she did regret that night and hate zain, she would have gone for an abortion and its not really a big thing these days... 😳 😳 thats what i think i would do if i face such a situation... 😳
anyways whats the use of thinking too much... its just a story... πŸ˜‰ and i should enjoy it... and im defintely enjoying it... πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ especially the boss asked me out phase that just started πŸ˜‰
i again liked the zain suraiya scene where suraiya said that aaliya is dead and zain should move on... i read that portion twice i think... 😳
zain found a way to escape but who knew that way will lead him on the way of getting his life, his family back... i was so excited for zaya to meet and i know you have written it in this chap... i mean in chappy 13... thanks to the comments i read πŸ˜† πŸ˜† i will also read it soon...
zain with his twins... what a scene...!!!! loved it ❀️
that balcony scene was also fab... do anjaane ajnabee type situation... though the two arent strangers... loving it more n more... good job... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
now i want to say something very important... an honest opinion which doesnt really matters now... 😳
i didnt wanted aaliya to get pregnant... i would have liked her without the kids because the kids would definitely one day push her towards zain... i would have liked to see a very very different aaliya... the one with no rule book... the one with hate towards zain and aaliya... the one with absolutely no emotions left... the one with a strong personality and never forgive attitude... ARE YOU GETTING WHAT IM SAYING...???? 😳 😳 😳
but seriously im liking the flow of the story now as i have accepted the storyline, the characters and most of all sarah n sammy...
PS : I feel like i typed an update... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
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