Originally posted by: florine_20
Wonderful part. I loved the way you written it especially the last part of Zain and aliyas pov. The depth of theirs feelings was seen there and the kids and Zains conversation was also fabulous
Amazing update...
U described it very well...zain and kids face off...then their conversation...and then that aaliya's window scene...
Just awesome...
Now eagerly waiting for zain n aaliya crash...
Plzzz do update soon...
Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
Thank you so much Lara for the dedication!! It's really very sweet of you 😃.. Love you Gulab jamun 🤗🤗..
Update was fantastic!! ⭐️ Savanah is really one of a kind :p.. She named her dog after her late hubby!! 🤣 That's hilarious.. Poor Ross (both the late husband and the doggy) 😆.. Sarah and Sammy are so adorable.. Loved their first meeting with Zain.. Liked the way you have described Zain's feelings during their conversation.. He felt some strange connection with them and he also noticed the similarities between him & Sammy.. Now Aaliya wants to thank Mr. Stanger in person.. Eagerly waiting for it 😳.. Btw she is very unpredictable.. She grounded Barqat also 😆.. That was superb! And there Ayaan was acting like a house wife, wearing a pink apron 🤣.. Bechara Zain 😆.. Ending of the chapter is beautiful.. Very well written.. Aaliya could feel his pain through his music.. Now what will be her reaction when she comes to know that Mr. Stranger is Zain only.. Can't wait for their encounter.. Please continue soon.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care 😊
Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak
This is such a lovely FF...read all the updates in one go...
beautiful story...i almost had tears while reading the story!Looking forward for the next part!
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