zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 41

I woke up all gloomy knowing it's the weekend and no ZaYa. ..but then little did I know there would be an update on one of my favourite FFs waiting to be read...you made my weekend dear...Thanks so much ..perfect start..

The kids r so adorable like the perfect bunch u would want in your neighbourhood. ...naughty yet responsible innocent yet smart...love them...could pull them into a bone crushing hug if they were in front of me...

good that they splashed Bar kat. .bow could she be so careless...hawww..

But then if she didn't sleep..how would the father and kids ever meet...wwwooowww loved the emotions the simple reunion the familiarity zain felt...amazingly penned...

The evening scene With zain on his guitar and aliya lost in thought is so beautiful...but only kebab main haddi is Jonathan. ..shooo shooo. ..set Ross on him..lol..

hope they insist on meeting aaliya meet Mr. Stranger and that's when we can see years of separation nights of sleeplessness and all the love yet hatred clash of emotions...can't wait for it...

Originally posted by: naina927

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( Oops... how I didnt reply to this long and beautiful comment of yours... considering that I love reading long comments... ... Anyway, here I am replying now... such a bhulakkar I am... 🤢 )

Oh my god... i never noticed that u dedicated this part to me... thank u lara... 🤗 🤗 i just saw ur update and res a place. then at night when i read the last 2 parts together, i saw that u dedicated this chappy to me... that was one pleasant surprise... thanks again hun for not keeping me waiting... 😃 😃 😃 😃 and it just hows how much you love me... 😉 arrey i love you too meri jaan... ❤️

( Hmmm... yeh pyaar na hoga kabhi kam ... 😃... Jaara samhal kei.. aapke woh kahi jealous naa ho jayee... 😉)

usmaan uncle sent aliya and zain alone ona raod trip... good good but while reading i was thinking " will it work...??? 😳" and by the end of the chappy it did help... that particular night was the first step towards the changing times...

( Yes... it was the first blow in zain's fattoo heart, though he didnt realise it... 😭 )

it was soo filmy yaar... spending night alone in a deserted place...

( Sometimes I become so filmy yaar... 😳😳 )

wowww... ek dum romantic types but alas zain and aliya werent romantically involved at that time... but it did ignited something... 😊 zain looked at aliya carefully and noticed how beautiful she is... soo romantic... 😃 ❤️ coming back to present, zain and asad met... soo... soo rude and cold... 🤔 asad n zain were toh buddies then what happened that they are so far awar... asad kinda hates zaina nd why is he blaming zain... and most importnatly for what is he blaming zain... 🤢 it scared me thinking what if something really bad happened with aliya... 🤢 🤢

( Bad toh bohot bara wala hogaia hai... next chapters have the details... )

suraiyah and zain talking... i liked that part... 😊 though zain sounded rude but cmon dude its you who are at fault... 😳 anyways then asad hates aaliya... ohhh god that hate story where the elder child hates the younger child... but this hatred has reached heights...

( You are right... the hate's too much and that's why they have to suffer too much too... tit for tat.. huh.. 😉 I love to make the charachters to suffer.. I guess you are familiar to my ways.. huh )

their mother died, and asad is still blaming aaliya for the loss... not done asad... 😡 😡 and the way he was talking to humaira... 😆 😆 i thought you will be bringing zoya for asad... but quite a nice change...

( Humaira was a small fling, zoya is the one for asad... again next chapters... 😊)

😉 so now i know what happened at that party,... earlier i thought aaliya got abused or something... but it was kinda unexpected... 😳

( I hope you loved this unexpected twist huh... 😊)

zain and aaliye hooked up and made love... nope... it wasnt love, atleast for zain... it was his lust... 😳 they slept together while drunk... and now i know zain will break aaliya's heart... 💔 im very sure of this...

( Dil ka tutna... yeh toh hona hi tha... 😭 )

still have to read the remaining chappies... im not slow but u are way too fast these days lara... slow down buddy... 😉 😆 😆

( Dont tell me to slow down buddy... 😕 ... when I slow down I really get aalsi number 1... then you will throw sandals at me... ouch !! .. hee hee... 😆 ...

Thanks a lot for your comment, reading your comments makes me encouraged so much .. so much.. that I cant express.. exactly how much... ermmm.. 😕 I guess I should go now...

Comment soon on the next chappy's ... waiting over here...

Take care... tada... )

Originally posted by: hakunamatata

I woke up all gloomy knowing it's the weekend and no ZaYa. ..but then little did I know there would be an update on one of my favourite FFs waiting to be read...you made my weekend dear...Thanks so much ..perfect start..
( Aww... feeling like flying in the seventh sky to know that my updt could make your gloomy day to change.. Dont thnk me dear.. the pleasure is all mine... 🤗🤗 )
The kids r so adorable like the perfect bunch u would want in your neighbourhood. ...naughty yet responsible innocent yet smart...love them...could pull them into a bone crushing hug if they were in front of me...
( hee hee.. I wish I could present them before you, hell.. even I want to hug them now... An idea.. why dont you hug the lappy while reading the chapter... 😆... just kiddin... )
😆good that they splashed Bar kat. .bow could she be so careless...hawww..

But then if she didn't sleep..how would the father and kids ever meet...wwwooowww loved the emotions the simple reunion the familiarity zain felt...amazingly penned...
( Yep.. everything happens for a reason.. 😊 )
The evening scene With zain on his guitar and aliya lost in thought is so beautiful...but only kebab main haddi is Jonathan. ..shooo shooo. ..set Ross on him..lol..
( You know what.. 😲 setting ross after someone is really a great idea... seriously haww... I can see it happeing in my mind... If I use this brilliant idea of yours.. I will defo dedicate the chappy to you... You are too good... 👏... )
👏hope they insist on meeting aaliya meet Mr. Stranger and that's when we can see years of separation nights of sleeplessness and all the love yet hatred clash of emotions...can't wait for it...

( Lets see what happens next... how they meet... 😉😉...

Thanks a lot for your comment buddy...

Take care.. wil updt soon... )

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update Lara
loved it
Sammy and sarah are cute..loved them
waiting for zain and aaliya face off
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr

fab update lara 🤗

thans for updatingg 😛

finally Zain is in NY yayy !! and the kids are so cute..and Aaliya knows how to handle her kids very well..sammy's hawee was very cute😆

and Zain is staying so close to aaliya's apartment..omg amazingg !!

the last part where zain is watching aaliya and kids pray was so beautifully written..brought smile to my face😊

i really like ayaan..glad zain has a friend like him..!!

cant wait to read the next chapter already !!thanks for updating..loved this chapter :)

do update soon😊

Originally posted by: AshesToDust

oh my another lovely update! just love the kids! and the descriptionsare too good! the guitar part was lovely! i love this!

Wow..
It was so amzng prt..
I jst loved it..

Originally posted by: arshipotterfan

I dont know why, but i liked this the best! Out of all the updates.. it was so serene! So beautiful. It touched my heart. I loved this update. It was so... peaceful. Yeah peaceful cause even in their heartache, they managed to find solace in each other, although unkowingly.:-) keep up the good work :-)

Originally posted by: gowtu

Wow..
It was so amzng prt..
I jst loved it..

Wonderful part. I loved the way you written it especially the last part of Zain and aliyas pov. The depth of theirs feelings was seen there and the kids and Zains conversation was also fabulous