zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘This is really good...no more wordsvto describe my happiness!!!πŸ‘ i m sooo w8ing for ch-8...plz keep up d awesome work!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was definitely a beautiful shock :D.. Aaliya is a mother of two lovely kids!! Amazing twist.. I'm really liking her character's growth.. She has become a strong, independent woman.. Superb.. Though Zain and Asad didn't leave any chance to break her yet all those bitter memories couldn't stop her from becoming who she is today.. Their guilt is very well portrayed.. Honestly I like seeing them in pain :p.. But I do feel bad for Usmaan.. Waiting for Zaya face-off.. Awesome update Lara! Thanks for the pm.. Take care :D
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Posted: 10 years ago


Hey everyone... again with another update.. I am here... :D ...

Thanks a lot to those who have liked and commented, you wont believe how many times I read your comments... they make my day lit up when I read them. Thank u so much.

After reading this chapter.. let me know about your views about the twin.. brother and sister. How do you think zain and aaliya will meet ??

Dont forget to hit the like button, I always check on the amount of likes I get and please make them increase friends.


Forgive all the errors...


Koi Fariyaad



Chapter 8



" Sarahhh... sammyyy... "


A fit of hushed giggles and soft footsteps of tiny feets crossed the hallway towards the stairs in a dash, aaliya quickly ran towards the direction of the sounds. And there she saw them... the two siblings on the bottom step of the stairs, sammy helping his sister up. The sight swelled her heart with warmth and pride, sammy was always protective of sarah.. though they fought a lot but that was the usual sibling bonding. That thought made aaliya recall her own bond with her brother.. asad. Quickly aaliya put those memories in the further most corner of her brain. Those days were long gone, she should now concentrate on the present... which was to catch her naughty kids.


Aaliya: " Stop.. right there you two... "


A squeak from sarah could be heard as both sammy and sarah paused in their ways. Running away wasn't anymore a good option, mom was the worlds fastest runner. Their mom was the best in anything... they believed it.


The twins turned around with grim faces with all the sadness of the world. Aaliya was now stood before them with her arms folded. She raised an eyebrow looking at them...


Before she could say anything, sarah whinned raising up her little face to aaliya.


Sarah: " I dont want to eat that.. vesetable mommy... "


Sammy stood beside his sister with the same saddened look though he tried to hide it by looking a little firm. He was a tough guy even being a child, what would happen when he becomes a ful grown man... aaliya sometimes wander that. He was quite stubborn too, like right now he wasn't speaking anything though aaliya knew that sammy hated vegetables even more than sarah.


Aaliya: " But I wanted you both to get stron and healthy, I thought it's time to get you two to start school this year but... "

Aaliya faked a long sigh... " But looks like I have to wait till next year seeing at how weak and tiny you both are.. "


With another dramatic sigh she turned around to leave, she was sure this trick would work.


Sammy's eyes widened, he wanted to go to school... the boy from the house across the street.. with whom he used to play in evening was three two years older than him, he had been going to school since last year. And sammy was continuously listneing to all his stories about school...


Yes.. sammy wanted to start going school as soon as possible. Same was the case with sarah.


" Mommy... "


Both of them screamed ran to aaliya suddenly finding new interest in vegetables. Before sarah could open her mouth.. sammy announced...


Sammy: " I never said mommy that I dont want to eat vesetables... I'll eat mommy and I'll make sure sarah eats too... "

Sarah gasped looking at sammy and stomped her little foot on the ground...

Sarah: " Sammy.. I will eat by myself.. you wont have to make sure anything.. "

Aaliya cut in... " Ok.. ok.. healthy foods waiting in the kitchen... lets go then.. "


After a minute aaliya was seen to be strolling to the kitchen with sarah and sammy arguing among themselves.


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Zain checked the time glancing at his wristwatch for the hundredth time and looked up to see suraia still engrossed in some rubbish gossip with some women surrounding her. Shuffling on his fate zain loathed the moment when he gave into suraia's emotional blackmail to come to this wedding.


It had been a very long time since he had attended any wedding or any kind of party, he didnt even had he any communication with his friends, relatives were a part of his life he avoided in every way he could. He just loved his loneliness.. away from any company, then he could silently burn his own soul in the thoughts and memories of her... of aaliya. He believed he deserved it. He deserved to burn in his own hell.


He had a very important meeting in an hour, but that wasnt the reason why he had this painful lump in his throat.


He couldnt help himself glance at the newly married couple standing over there on the stage... people congratulating them. They looked so happy, the groom said something leaning close towards the bride which made her blush immediately. Zain had been watching them passing those dreamy looks and meanigful smiles every now and then, it was as if the atmosphere had become brighter at the touch of their love.


Love.. which they had... and he didn't.


Zain looked away and blinked several times to hide the sadness in them. He imagined himself and aaliya in a beautiful red bridal dress standing on that stage, with love and pure happiness. But that was impossible now. He had led her to a place from where no one ever returns.


He felt jealous of that couple who were now posing in romantic ways looking at the camera, they looked perfect. Aaliya and him would have also looked perfect and so happy like this.. if he just had the guts to concentrate on his feelings of her and stop being a fool... if he had gave his consent to marry aaliya.


" Zain.. "


He looked up to see suraia making her way to him, another lady and a slim looking girl following her.


Suraia: " Over there .. he's over there.. "


Zain recognised the look of pride shining in her mothers eyes. He didnt have any idea how did she still look at him with that pride when usmaan couldnt... even he himself couldnt anymore.


Suraia introduced the lady and the slim girl with him and after a while of talking he could realise that his mother was trying matchmaking. When the girl with so much make up plastered all over her face... saying something flirty leaned closer to him in an almost indecent way, zain jumped backwards. The girl.. whose name was... tina or something.. stared at him confused. If he was the old zain... he would take full on advantage of what was literally thrown upon him but... things had changed now. Aaliya had changed him for good and if being celibate for the rest of his life seemed freeky.. then he was happily ready to be that freak.


Zain looked at suraia who was busy with that older lady sharing all the stories of his success in business with all the added.. extra and sometimes made up details.


Totally ignoring the thing.. that was named tina, zain excused himself.. said goodbye to suraia and without waiting to hear her protests.. stormed out of there.


Why dont they get that.. he wanted no one else ?? On one but aaliya. As he drove towards his office... a permanent scowl and creased brows had already adored his face.


A long way to go... no.. not to the office. But to the end of his life.. when he would finally meet her.


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After getting some healthy foods and ofcourse vegetables in sarah and sammy's little stomach aaliya was doing the dishes. The kids were sat on the tidied kitchen table now and doing drawings on blank shits.


Sarah was humming a song while drawing her favourite thing... butterflies in various colors. Sammy was busy drawing a bus, aaliya had noticed that he was quite fascinated with those big transports.


She was washing the ceramic salad bowl when sarah announced ...


Sarah: " Mommy... where is my pink color ?? "


Aaliya glanced from over her shoulder to look at a frantic sarah searching for her favourite color. She remembered .. the pink crayon had finished. So she tried to control the damage...


Aaliya: " Sarah... try some other color honey, yellow butterflies look so beautiful.. right ? "


Sarah said in a grumpy tone..


Sarah: " No.. I want my pink one.. "


Not lifting his head up.. sammy stated...


Sammy: " Pink is so girly sarah... use blue.. "


Sarah folded her arms over her chest with a cute scowl on her face, her whole posture looked so adorable...


Sarah: " That's because... I am a girl and I wont use blue, pink is better.. "


Sammy now lifted his head up...


Sammy: " Blue is better.. "

Sarah: " Is not... "

Sammy: " Is too... "


Aaliya dumped the slippery plate in the sink intaking a deep breath and faced her children. She was about to scold them but when she looked at sarah.. on the verge of crying.. her heart went out and jumped off the window.


Clapping her hands dismissively she announced smiling...


Aaliya: " Ok there.. stop fighting, we are going shopping. Let's buy you two some new crayons.. "

Sarah: " Yeahhh.. "


Sarah squealed in happiness and slipped off the chair, she jumped up and down happily clapping her hands.


Sammy stood by her, trying to stop the corners of his lips lifting upwards in a grin. Always the tough guy.


Aaliya left a contented sigh. She could still remeber the day when she found out that she was pregnant. To say she was shocked would be an understatement.


She had just came to this new country, everything was so new.. so weird to her. She found herself a job in a restaurant.. as a waitress. Days were going so and so, and then she discovered that she was going to be a mother. Now it was more than just herself she had to look after, it was like the sky had fallen down upon her head and also had given her a ride to the most beautiful rainbows in the seventh skies. Aaliya was excited, overwhelmed with happiness.. anticipation and at the same time scared shitless. She was just getting over her past and now she had to get her head around the whole pregnancy thing.


But she didnt think for once that it was this was a mistake... yes this was unexpected but she never thought it unwanted. As time passed by.. she felt more and positive.. that now she was going to have a companion by her side in her lonely journey. And her attempts to find a secure .. stable... decent job saw the day of light, every step she took was a battle and every success.. a milestone.


And the day.. when she found out not only one but two stars were coming down to earth.. to her, she cried.. she cried in happiness. Any kind of anger she had to god.. that day was gone. Rest of the five years that followed was history.


Half an hour later... the battalion of three was seen walking down the street with sarah holding her right hand and sammy clutching the hem of her shirt. Each one of them was smiling... exploring around... laughing and simply being a happy family of three.


But something was still missing.. a void so unnoticed or rather avoided yet enormous was still waiting to be filled.



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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update.
sarah and sammy are damn cute.i love their little cute fight.
zain was so much in pain but he deserve it.yet i feel bad for him.
i'm waiting for zaya meeting and sepcially zain meeting with his two kids.plz make them meet soon,i can't wait for zain reaction.
Edited by edwebllalover9 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ZayaShiz

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘This is really good...no more wordsvto describe my happiness!!!πŸ‘ i m sooo w8ing for ch-8...plz keep up d awesome work!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thank u so much... πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

beautiful update.
sarah and sammy are damn cute.i love their little cute fight.
zain was so much in pain but he deserve it.yet i feel bad for him.
i'm waiting for zaya meeting and sepcially zain meeting with his two kids.plz make them meet soon,i can't wait for zain reaction.

Aapki speed hai la-zawaab... πŸ€—
Congrats πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ on being the first one to comemnt...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

It was definitely a beautiful shock :D.. Aaliya is a mother of two lovely kids!! Amazing twist.. I'm really liking her character's growth.. She has become a strong, independent woman.. Superb.. Though Zain and Asad didn't leave any chance to break her yet all those bitter memories couldn't stop her from becoming who she is today.. Their guilt is very well portrayed.. Honestly I like seeing them in pain :p.. But I do feel bad for Usmaan.. Waiting for Zaya face-off.. Awesome update Lara! Thanks for the pm.. Take care :D

Thank u so much 😊😊...
Wait a little bit.. zain and aaliya's face off coming soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome... Superb update
loved it
so zain and everyone are thinking aaliyah is dead
and she is having twins
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot... πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: preity_d

OMG now she is a mother of two... How strong is she that she survived and succeeded in making a independent life in this cruel selfish earth... Hats off to her... the wrongs Zain n Asad did are never be forgivable.. They should get lots of punishment... n I wanna see what will be their reaction seeing a self made woman in Aaliya before them...felt bad for Usman ... Keep updating in this speed... I am loving it... ❀️

Thanks a lot preity... 😊...
I hope you will like the face off.. πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Laiba-

my god girl u should become a director yaar xD wht a talent! again amazed me and tht mother part that i was so guesing right mke me feel proud of my imagination haha xD keep it up and continue soon ^^ even though the flashback was tragiv the end made the part magic *wink*
lovd, Laiba

director !! 😲😲... hai rabba... if tht happens naa... toh maito ...
thnk u so much for your lovely comment dear.
That tragic and magic... πŸ˜†... wah wah.. aap bhi khub kamal hai 😳
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