Originally posted by: virmaandvd
Nice. PM me when u update!
Love the concept!
Originally posted by: -AshaNegi-
lovely concept
Originally posted by: ZaYaVeeBa
Nice start i liked it.continue and do Pm me plz
Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer
Nice concept and nice way to start! Eager to read more!😃
Originally posted by: cutestar12
Nice update soon
Originally posted by: KaBhi-FAN
Nice! Update soon! N p.m me
Originally posted by: dancedanceRR
This is so good! Can't wait to see where you take this story!
Originally posted by: ..SheWolf..
eeeks! res res imma be back soon xD
RESERVED! Will read after getting back from work!
Originally posted by: aartipartyy
ohmg jo this is like ipk days again RES AH
New SS! hells yesss!
RES!-------------------------------------------------Jyo, i've read this for the second time already! and its still as intriguing and beautiful as it was the first time i read it! Awww, thank you! That is so sweet 😳i love how you have built on their story with small intervals in between...we get an insight into their lives. You've written it so well! its really subtle and flows with perfection. I was afraid the story wouldn't flow but I can rest assured it does 😆i like the connection between Zain and Aaliya...however i'm left wondering where Zain is?! why was osman angry and surraiya unhappy when they mentioned his name! really gripping i must say!Aaliya tu miss kergi hi ussay main bhi miss ker rahi hoon ussay!😆 OMG 🤣 Tu fikar na kar, Zain is entering back into the story very soon! I am so glad you like the connection between ZaYa! Also glad that I could create such a suspense. Yay 😆can't wait to read the next chapter! you better update soonish...i'm dying to read more of this perfection!🤗 yes ma'am. The update will be up in a bit :)i must say the concept is really gripping and unique! i'm left waiting for more 😳oh and do i even need to say that you are one hell of a writer? its more of an established fact now! i adore your writing! 😳 AKSCHDLAEGUF! BIG FAT HUG 🤗 THANK YOUUU so much <3
Originally posted by: edwebllalover9
first part is really mindblowing.Zain and Aliya really cute.they get along in a short time.now where is Zain?why he didn't come to meet Aliya?
can't wait to read more.update soon.
Originally posted by: * Unnati *
Jyo.🤗 I don't usually read SS/ FF/OSs, but thank you for PMing this one to me.😆 Yeah, to my surprise, it kept me scrolling down, for more.
I loved the intro ! Aaliya & Zain seem to be sweet, dignified & practical in here. Zain hawww ! How sweet & so typically boyish. Can't keep his room clean!😆 Their initial bonding was quite cute and respectful.Curious to know, what you've done to Zain, towards the end.Will be waiting to read on how the story progresses. So PM me, when u update next!
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